Red Eye Vs Kartiledge

red eye · 01-21-2007, 12:53 AM

5 bars
due in 3 days from the day this topic was made
g/l
don't free post

red eye · 01-23-2007, 04:44 PM

I'm Back-On-Top…… Watch Your Hype Get Blown Up Like A Bag…..-N-Pop/
After This Faggot-Drops, He'll Be Like "Health Freak's Houses On Halloween" Dodgin Jagged-Rocks//
Have Claws Leave Your Ears Bloody, Like Grinding-Boards, Make Bears Hear Your Final-Words/
N I'll Snatch The W……. Give Ya An "L Back"…… Like Bent Spinal-Chords//
You’ll Be Hangin From Ceilings, Like Cave-Rocks, While I Dig Your Grave-Ock/
And It’s Like “Rewinding Multimedia”….. How My “Waves-Shock”//
Slangin-In-Hand, Few Seconds, You’ll Hear The “Cock, Blast” Like You’re Bangin-A-Man/
See The “Razor High” N I’ll Cut Your Minutes Down….. Like I’m Changin-Your-Plan//
You’re Beyond Whack’s-Extent, I’ll Have You Lookin At Stars, Like Your Back-Is-Bent/
Knives Pointed At Knees Before I “Rip Kartiledge”….. Like A Sporting Accident//

if voters don't get a line, ask me

red eye · 01-23-2007, 10:31 PM

you still got time today but if u cant get to it i'll give u a 24 hour extention

you like dissapeared since the call out

Kartiledge · 01-24-2007, 02:14 AM

lol, ma bad ... ive been busy wit skool n shit ill prolly have a verse in da next 20 minutes

Kartiledge · 01-24-2007, 02:36 AM

..ima BREAK YA RIBS N PUMP LEAD ....til this PUNKS DEAD!
battlin me? yuen over ya head like ASIAN KIDS ON BUNK BEDS!
I got THUNDEROUS SHOTS, winnin dis battle 5-0 without COMIN WIT COPS
call my punches breakfast on boats, dey leave ya STOMACH IN KNOTS
ima grab red n BEAT HIM DOWN til his FEET ARE BOUND to a TREE I FOUND
den ima cree-mate urine sides without pissin next to indian BREEDIN GROUNDS *

I got LEAD THE HURT YOU... plus i READ YA JOURNAL... now i know dis FAG'S FRUITY! **
if da right hook dont knock u out i gotta leftwich put u down like bein teased by the JAGS QB!

* cree = an indian tribe
** R.I.P red eye (exposed)

red eye · 01-24-2007, 07:47 AM

k vote up.

-K.P- · 01-24-2007, 08:16 AM

red eye all cats, he came strong, flow and multies were on point IMO

red eye · 01-25-2007, 12:39 AM

eh... i thought it was closer then that

but whutever

good looks kp 1-0

{Baller} · 01-25-2007, 12:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by red eye

eh... i thought it was closer then that

but whutever

good looks kp 1-0

Red Eye all cats, No this was a raping(no homo) Can ya vote in my mid inter tourney battle with nyc?

Kartiledge · 01-25-2007, 12:51 AM

iight dats 0-2, i guess, but from now on ... could yal put a bit more effort into da votes?? like explain a lil bit???

{Baller} · 01-25-2007, 12:58 AM

wordplay: none
creativity: Kart
multies: Red Eye
Flow: Red Eye
Punches: Red Eye
PErsonal: none
Overal: REd eye

There is a revised vote for ya.

Kartiledge · 01-25-2007, 01:07 AM

u aint have ta do that ... but, i do have one major complaint wit dat vote ....
wordplay: none <- did u miss all tha blatant wordplay???

{Baller} · 01-25-2007, 01:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kartiledge

u aint have ta do that ... but, i do have one major complaint wit dat vote ....
wordplay: none <- did u miss all tha blatant wordplay???

there was no wordplay. Wordplay example: I planet/plant it like Venus.

Kartiledge · 01-25-2007, 01:44 AM

lol, r u stupid?? thatz not the only type of wordplay ... n i even had some wordplay like that in my verse ...

herez some examplez

battlin me? yuen over ya head like ASIAN KIDS ON BUNK BEDS!

yuen iz wordplay for you in, Yuen iz an asian name. now letz say yuen ( refered to as asian kid in verse ) getz on a bunk bed ( two bedz connected together wit one on top of the other ).. hez over ya head..

den ima cree-mate urine sides without pissin next to indian BREEDIN GROUNDS

letz see here... cree-mate urine sides = cremate ur insides... cree are an indian tribe... den there's da connection between BREEDIN N MATE.. THEN A CONNECTION BETWEEN PISSIN NEXT N URINE SIDES

if da right hook dont knock u out i gotta leftwich put u down like bein teased by the JAGS QB!

N THERE'S WORDPLAY HERE ! leftwich = left which.. da jags ( Jacksonville Jaguars... an AMERICAN football team ) QB iz named bryon LEFTWICH ( OMG ) n teasin can be refered to as putting down...

now letz look here..

I got THUNDEROUS SHOTS, winnin dis battle 5-0 without COMIN WIT COPS
call my punches breakfast on boats, dey leave ya STOMACH IN KNOTS

THERE'S WORDPLAY IN BOTH LINEZ!!!!!!! HOLY SHIT!!

in da first line ... im sayin im gonna win dis battle 5-0 ( meanin ill get five votes n he'll get zero ) but da copz are also refered to as da 5-0.. so ill win it witout comin wit copz!!

da second line.. u can find da connection between STOMACH N BREAKFAST ( I HOPE ) n a knot iz also da unit used to measure da speed which boatz travel.. double meanin wordplay ( da other linez have dat type 2 )

can believe i typed all dat, but atleast u learned somethin new, u fuckin dumbass.

{Baller} · 01-25-2007, 01:49 AM

aight I missed a couple of your shit my bad. Might wanna put it in quotes or not. Maybe it was just me. But i didn't notice it.
My bad again.

Skorn Iza · 01-25-2007, 01:58 AM

red eye all cats except wordplay..

3-0 ko

01-21-2007, 12:53 AM	#1
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01-23-2007, 04:44 PM	#2
red eye Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIA Posts: 1,070 Thanks: 3 Thanked 27 Times in 17 Posts	I'm Back-On-Top…… Watch Your Hype Get Blown Up Like A Bag…..-N-Pop/ After This Faggot-Drops, He'll Be Like "Health Freak's Houses On Halloween" Dodgin Jagged-Rocks// Have Claws Leave Your Ears Bloody, Like Grinding-Boards, Make Bears Hear Your Final-Words/ N I'll Snatch The W……. Give Ya An "L Back"…… Like Bent Spinal-Chords// You’ll Be Hangin From Ceilings, Like Cave-Rocks, While I Dig Your Grave-Ock/ And It’s Like “Rewinding Multimedia”….. How My “Waves-Shock”// Slangin-In-Hand, Few Seconds, You’ll Hear The “Cock, Blast” Like You’re Bangin-A-Man/ See The “Razor High” N I’ll Cut Your Minutes Down….. Like I’m Changin-Your-Plan// You’re Beyond Whack’s-Extent, I’ll Have You Lookin At Stars, Like Your Back-Is-Bent/ Knives Pointed At Knees Before I “Rip Kartiledge”….. Like A Sporting Accident// if voters don't get a line, ask me

01-23-2007, 10:31 PM	#3
red eye Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIA Posts: 1,070 Thanks: 3 Thanked 27 Times in 17 Posts	you still got time today but if u cant get to it i'll give u a 24 hour extention you like dissapeared since the call out

01-24-2007, 02:14 AM	#4
Kartiledge Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	lol, ma bad ... ive been busy wit skool n shit ill prolly have a verse in da next 20 minutes

01-24-2007, 02:36 AM	#5
Kartiledge Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	..ima BREAK YA RIBS N PUMP LEAD ....til this PUNKS DEAD! battlin me? yuen over ya head like ASIAN KIDS ON BUNK BEDS! I got THUNDEROUS SHOTS, winnin dis battle 5-0 without COMIN WIT COPS call my punches breakfast on boats, dey leave ya STOMACH IN KNOTS ima grab red n BEAT HIM DOWN til his FEET ARE BOUND to a TREE I FOUND den ima cree-mate urine sides without pissin next to indian BREEDIN GROUNDS * I got LEAD THE HURT YOU... plus i READ YA JOURNAL... now i know dis FAG'S FRUITY! ** if da right hook dont knock u out i gotta leftwich put u down like bein teased by the JAGS QB! * cree = an indian tribe ** R.I.P red eye (exposed)

01-24-2007, 07:47 AM	#6
red eye Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIA Posts: 1,070 Thanks: 3 Thanked 27 Times in 17 Posts	k vote up.

01-24-2007, 08:16 AM	#7
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,518 Thanks: 142 Thanked 119 Times in 47 Posts	red eye all cats, he came strong, flow and multies were on point IMO

01-25-2007, 12:39 AM	#8
red eye Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIA Posts: 1,070 Thanks: 3 Thanked 27 Times in 17 Posts	eh... i thought it was closer then that but whutever good looks kp 1-0

01-25-2007, 12:51 AM	#10
Kartiledge Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	iight dats 0-2, i guess, but from now on ... could yal put a bit more effort into da votes?? like explain a lil bit???

01-25-2007, 12:58 AM	#11
{Baller} Banned Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 60 Thanks: 7 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	wordplay: none creativity: Kart multies: Red Eye Flow: Red Eye Punches: Red Eye PErsonal: none Overal: REd eye There is a revised vote for ya.

01-25-2007, 01:07 AM	#12
Kartiledge Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	u aint have ta do that ... but, i do have one major complaint wit dat vote .... wordplay: none <- did u miss all tha blatant wordplay???

01-25-2007, 01:44 AM	#14
Kartiledge Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 38 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	lol, r u stupid?? thatz not the only type of wordplay ... n i even had some wordplay like that in my verse ... herez some examplez battlin me? yuen over ya head like ASIAN KIDS ON BUNK BEDS! yuen iz wordplay for you in, Yuen iz an asian name. now letz say yuen ( refered to as asian kid in verse ) getz on a bunk bed ( two bedz connected together wit one on top of the other ).. hez over ya head.. den ima cree-mate urine sides without pissin next to indian BREEDIN GROUNDS letz see here... cree-mate urine sides = cremate ur insides... cree are an indian tribe... den there's da connection between BREEDIN N MATE.. THEN A CONNECTION BETWEEN PISSIN NEXT N URINE SIDES if da right hook dont knock u out i gotta leftwich put u down like bein teased by the JAGS QB! N THERE'S WORDPLAY HERE ! leftwich = left which.. da jags ( Jacksonville Jaguars... an AMERICAN football team ) QB iz named bryon LEFTWICH ( OMG ) n teasin can be refered to as putting down... now letz look here.. I got THUNDEROUS SHOTS, winnin dis battle 5-0 without COMIN WIT COPS call my punches breakfast on boats, dey leave ya STOMACH IN KNOTS THERE'S WORDPLAY IN BOTH LINEZ!!!!!!! HOLY SHIT!! in da first line ... im sayin im gonna win dis battle 5-0 ( meanin ill get five votes n he'll get zero ) but da copz are also refered to as da 5-0.. so ill win it witout comin wit copz!! da second line.. u can find da connection between STOMACH N BREAKFAST ( I HOPE ) n a knot iz also da unit used to measure da speed which boatz travel.. double meanin wordplay ( da other linez have dat type 2 ) can believe i typed all dat, but atleast u learned somethin new, u fuckin dumbass.

01-25-2007, 01:49 AM	#15
{Baller} Banned Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 60 Thanks: 7 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	aight I missed a couple of your shit my bad. Might wanna put it in quotes or not. Maybe it was just me. But i didn't notice it. My bad again.

01-25-2007, 01:58 AM	#16
Skorn Iza Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,130 Thanks: 175 Thanked 288 Times in 69 Posts	red eye all cats except wordplay.. 3-0 ko