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10 Bars Max. . .
Due. . .Wednesday @ Midnight Cool? High Inter +, Nokturnal Allowed To Vote TOPIC: Baby In The Womb |
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T T T TOTALLY DOOD!
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heres my verse yo
i'm in the womb, shit's hot like a muhfucka...// my dick is inside my moms cunt, does that make me a muhfucka??// i guess it does, but what if my dad gave me birth.../// shiiiit ... would that be a first?/// (hell nah! remember Junior) Oh yeah swarzenegger movie// so technically his kid stuffied his daddy in the poopie// (pooper = asshole) so that makes him a fatherfucka doesnt it...// i guess the next he has to fuck would have to be his cousins clit// i juss kicked my mom in the stomach made the hoe vomit...// cuz my dad's cock poked me in the head like a comet..// i hope these bad parents never have any kids.../// WAIT THEY DIDN'T (WHY???) ... cuz last night i died of SIDS// (sudden infant death syndrome) DAMN THATS SOME CREATIVE and TEAR JERKING SHIT!
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i cant get off block so. .
stuck in this womb. . .this shit is a tomb// i need to get out and get some real food// sprouted a finger today// yay. . .but its my seventh one// i dont know if thats good or not// so i'll blast it off like rocketships with guns// GOT DAMN my mother and daddy created me// and now her smoking is sedating me// will i ever make it out of this hole// probably not, im too weak to climb out this (w)hole// honestly im on block.. . .and yesterday when i tried to write i couldnt think with this concept . . .so hopefully cam and ati can actually bring decent verses |
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Politics As Usual
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i totally misunderstood the concept in part.....i wrote it from an outsiders perspective, but whatever, I'll drop it anyways
p.s. from the perspective of the father of an unborn child FUCK THE WORLD! Matter fact, I fucked my girl, and the outcome shoulda been the present to the world The present to the fucha, the saviour to prevent the evilness in the earth that you used ta// Behind the violins, theyre be violence... I guess my seed wont have to live through the vial end The vial with the blood just aint matchin, differnet gang affiliation, damn b, what happened// The shadows creepin in to steal back the light, every damn day startin to feel like the night Cause what my baby might not see, is the day that the world gets free... not one war overseas// Grim look on Doc's face like the reaper, please God, I'ma start prayin just to see her Just to meet her, love her, greet her, be her father, friend, just to be her mentor and teacher// We shoulda left an hour late, driver in a drunk state did not have to be our fate A half-pure mindstate, if they able to find more than a half-cure, than I'm great// World moving in slow-motion, hangin on the axis of evil like Koreans and Laosians Yet across the ocean its the same fate, for parents who can't afford to keep their child awake// Yet I'm awoken by this knife to heart feeling, and to the whispers of what the doc's consealing It look's like my child's been treated, I have a newborn kid, I can hear a heart beating, the devil's defeated
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shiiiiiiit....i have to show yall how to rap...
ok w/ee.. i awake in this warm womb...so it seems im still a seed...... ...Blind to this cold world....so i`ll dream until concieved..... ........gradually grew greater..........I started a single cell..... ..........got going......not knowing Im part of a living hell....... .......God granted me gifts....he gave me the gift of gab.... my dad fathered the fetus.......but what if he hit the ass? .................................................. ......................... ...I eat what my mother digests......9 months on my plate........ ..........honest a long wait..........I`ve hours to comtemplate been stressin......a C section?....word..this birth is scarin me.. because The "Miss" that "carries" me aint guaranteed her very being.. ....rap to pass the time...im glad my daddys actions "Ratified"... trapped inside............................................ ....................... ..................imagine........whyy im "still born" if i have to die?? ...clouds over my head............my moms under the weather....... ........a Beautiful Babyy Boy.........Born cunning and clever............ ........more stunning than ever............torn from the placenta...... .........im readyy.....the world aint........I forge on an adventure CC you dissapoint me....
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wow....killa cam wins lol no hate 2 any1 though but his verse was real nice
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i awake in this warm womb...so it seems im still a seed......
...Blind to this cold world....so i`ll dream until concieved..... ^^^ After Reading Up To There, The Words " You All Got Served" Came To Mind Quite Quickly
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Cam wins ezzzzzzzzz...ATI gets second but u should stay more on topic...u kept changing subjects...CC sucked |
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Killa Wins Everything Else Seemed Like A "keystyle"
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cc-pure wack....smh at u thinkin ur better den me wit garbage lik dat....flow sucked...vocab was avg...ur imagery sucked lik shyt...n so did ya concepts....shyt sucked
ati-flow was all over da place.....ya vocab was avg....concepts were decent....imagery was ok...u didnt do to bad but better den cc at least cam-ur flow was good wit da nice multies.....vocab was above avg pretty nice....concepts werepretty good....imagery was meh....ok to me...overall u seemed to of had da best verse on topic-killa cam vocab-killa cam multies-killa cam flow-killa cam imagery-kilal cam originality-killa cam winner-killa cam |
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damn lookin at cc's verse i kno wat writers block can do 2 u lol no hate
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killa cam got it, all cats, very nice verse. Wow CC, that was weak, i hate block though. ATI your shit was ight, kinda stretched bars, not a disaster though. :-) K/O
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lol no1s dat wack on block....3-0 ko closed
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