Dirty Words |VS| Menace

Dirty Words · 03-16-2007, 06:31 PM

5 Bars
Due an hour from now

Anything else you'd like to add?

~Menace~ · 03-16-2007, 06:44 PM

VET votes Only.....N PLEASE, no rooks or "under-achievers"(from both HHB and NBS) come into this thread babbling about how wack/good sum1 is...take that shit sum where else...n aight i'll drop by 3:31

Dirty Words · 03-16-2007, 07:21 PM

Fuck Ya Net-Fame I Got Menace On Lock Like The Feds-Mayne
Fall When I Flex-Lame! I Get Rid Of W/e Men Is Like A Sex-Change..!

Dyin'-Today Ya About As Straight As The-Lines-In-Ya-Name, Give This Faggot-Hell
Y'all Gon' Be Sad-He-Fell, Coz If He's Shady Then Eliminate M Like A Mad-D12..!
M / Em..

Ya Thoughts'll-Sink, You Can Go Crazy Facin' Me But I Am Not-A-Shrink
Bars? Stop-And-Blink I Crush Arizona's Finest Quick Like Them Dollar-Drinks..!

They Cost A Dollar..

Bend-And-Bash-Ya-Face-Kid Dirty Stay Sendin'-Facts-To-Fake-Kids
Men-Attack-With-Rage,-Shiiit, Kill 'Em And Leave Men-In-Black-Like-K-Did..!
K Left The Men In Black At The End Of The First Movie / At Your Funeral You're Dressed In Black.. Men (Short For Menace)..

Even If You Cheat-You'll-Lose, Like Rough Sex I'm Bettin' That Ya Cheeks'll-Bruise
Don't Even Gotta Throw Punches To Knock M On A Coffin'.. I Can Poke M On Like Pikachu..!
Poke M On / Pokemon..

~Menace~ · 03-16-2007, 07:30 PM

Im tha 'Cat' to kill this Stray Mouse, Punches will Work It til They Douse
Have this 'Kid Scared 2 come out n Play' like a ‘Burkittville Play-house’
Menace’ll be Prosecuted for tha crime to get rid of the Mystery Fast
Cuz I’ll have u ‘Remember my Text’ like 'P.O.W.’s In History Class'
Cuz ur Lines are Wack ‘N B/S’…So just go back 2 ur Local Board
U being good @ text is tha same as Choir Kids Achieving wit bad Vocal Cords
U Winning?? Even ur own site has High Doubts, so stay out of My Routes…..
‘Batman'll fall from my lines’ like ‘losing 2 Spider-Man in Justice League Try Outs’ *
That verse is garbage, Plug Tha Bore so i dont get thoughts of which Slug 2 Pour...
'Dirty words' has to 'pull some strings to win' like ppl wit 'Tourette's 'playing Tug-A-war'

*on one of his audio's he said he "feels like batman"

if u dont get anything dnt vote of course...

HH4ll · 03-16-2007, 07:51 PM

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Fuck Ya Net-Fame I Got Menace On Lock Like The Feds-Mayne
Fall When I Flex-Lame! I Get Rid Of W/e Men Is Like A Sex-Change..!

nope. . .because if you were getting rid of w/e \'\'men\'\' is. . .then you would be making the \'\'men\'\' women. . .its worded very poory. . .decent multies though. . .

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Dyin\'-Today Ya About As Straight As The-Lines-In-Ya-Name, Give This Faggot-Hell
Y\'all Gon\' Be Sad-He-Fell, Coz If He\'s Shady Then Eliminate M Like A Mad-D12..!

the faggot hell multie was forced. . .the punch is played. . .i\'ve seen countless punches about D12, w/ proof, w/ em, w/ bizzare. . .get a lil orginial. . .also just using the \'m\' isnt a nameplay

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Ya Thoughts\'ll-Sink, You Can Go Crazy Facin\' Me But I Am Not-A-Shrink
Bars? Stop-And-Blink I Crush Arizona\'s Finest Quick Like Them Dollar-Drinks..!

not bad. . .good personal. . .only thing would be that you don\'t \'\'crush\'\' a drink. . .

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Bend-And-Bash-Ya-Face-Kid Dirty Stay Sendin\'-Facts-To-Fake-Kids
Men-Attack-With-Rage,-Shiiit, Kill \'Em And Leave Men-In-Black-Like-K-Did..!

nope. . .you wouldn\'t leave menace in black if you killed him. . .menace would be in a coffin dressed in w/e the family picks for him.. . .forced multies also

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Even If You Cheat-You\'ll-Lose, Like Rough Sex I\'m Bettin\' That Ya Cheeks\'ll-Bruise
Don\'t Even Gotta Throw Punches To Knock M On A Coffin\'.. I Can Poke M On Like Pikachu..!

omfg. . .that was so bad . . .the wordplay was so horribly forced it reminds me of when soulja said \'\'red sucks/sox\'\'. . .wow. . .and also. . .IF YOUR PUNCHING MENACE YOU WOULDN\'T BE POKING HIM. . .fucking dumb beezy

overall - you had two decent bars w/ decent personals but the rest was wack. . .all you NBS dudes in general need to stop forcing the multies

menace:

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Im tha \'Cat\' to kill this Stray Mouse, Punches will Work It til They Douse
Have this \'Kid Scared 2 come out n Play\' like a ‘Burkittville Play-house’

lol works perfectly. . .not forced at all. . .good bar

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Menace’ll be Prosecuted for tha crime to get rid of the Mystery Fast
Cuz I’ll have u ‘Remember my Text’ like \'P.O.W.’s In History Class\'

seen it before and a P.O.W. wouldn\'t be in history class. . .they could be at a memorial though. . .

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Cuz ur Lines are Wack ‘N B/S’…So just go back 2 ur Local Board
U being good @ text is tha same as Choir Kids Achieving wit bad Vocal Cords

the wordplay made up for the lack of a hard hitting punch, the punch was a concept that could\'ve been flipped much better. . .but the wordplay was really dope. . .

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U Winning?? Even ur own site has High Doubts, so stay out of My Routes…..
‘Batman\'ll fall from my lines’ like ‘losing 2 Spider-Man in Justice League Try Outs’ *

dope, best personal of the battle also

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That verse is garbage, Plug Tha Bore so i dont get thoughts of which Slug 2 Pour...
\'Dirty words\' has to \'pull some strings to win\' like ppl wit \'Tourette\'s \'playing Tug-A-war\'

another dope bar. . .sick personal

Menace had one bad bar. . .Dirty Words had 3. . .menace had two bars that > all of dw\'s bars . . .menace wins

DW. . .that batman audio was fucking sick though. . .

ps i\'ve voted for NBS in the other two battles.. . . im not some hhb d/r lol. .

~Menace~ · 03-16-2007, 07:54 PM

1-0...unless u see a problemo...thnx 4 voting tho

Dirty Words · 03-16-2007, 07:56 PM

Alright I know you know what you're talking about so the vote is cool

Ps. Crush is like slang for eating / drinking somethin' fast here in MD =/.. and I wasn't saying those were w/plays I just put it in the expos for the slow peeps..

~Menace~ · 03-16-2007, 08:00 PM

lol im from arizona, crush is a drink....that us negros are fond of =)...but ya aight 1-0, dope verse BTW

J High · 03-16-2007, 08:09 PM

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Originally Posted by TopicalTyrant

nope. . .because if you were getting rid of w/e \'\'men\'\' is. . .then you would be making the \'\'men\'\' women. . .its worded very poory. . .decent multies though. . .

LMFAO!!! Men is short for Menace

so sad people can't even pick that up on this site pshhh

Dirty Words · 03-16-2007, 08:16 PM

Ok actually we can accept the vote but I want to let some things be known..

nope. . .because if you were getting rid of w/e \'\'men\'\' is. . .then you would be making the \'\'men\'\' women. . .its worded very poory. . .decent multies though. . .

^ Yes, so a sex change would make men women, getting rid of what makes them a man (a penis)

nope. . .you wouldn\'t leave menace in black if you killed him. . .menace would be in a coffin dressed in w/e the family picks for him.. . .forced multies also

^ Ok, it seems you are hooked on getting technical with all my bars.. how many funerals have you been too where the dead person wasn't wearing black? In general it's a black tuxedo..

omfg. . .that was so bad . . .the wordplay was so horribly forced it reminds me of when soulja said \'\'red sucks/sox\'\'. . .wow. . .and also. . .IF YOUR PUNCHING MENACE YOU WOULDN\'T BE POKING HIM. . .fucking dumb beezy

^ In the bar I clearly said "I dont even gotta throw punches".. So I think you should read things through before you say something and if poke m on is forced to you then you must have a funny ass accent..

Yeah.. just wanted to clear that up..

M. Expo · 03-16-2007, 08:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dirty Words

Fuck Ya Net-Fame I Got Menace On Lock Like The Feds-Mayne
Fall When I Flex-Lame! I Get Rid Of W/e Men Is Like A Sex-Change..!
eh... basic concept here, wording's pretty bad too..

Dyin'-Today Ya About As Straight As The-Lines-In-Ya-Name, Give This Faggot-Hell
Y'all Gon' Be Sad-He-Fell, Coz If He's Shady Then Eliminate M Like A Mad-D12..!
nah, bad attempt at nameplay.. worded badly again

Ya Thoughts'll-Sink, You Can Go Crazy Facin' Me But I Am Not-A-Shrink
Bars? Stop-And-Blink I Crush Arizona's Finest Quick Like Them Dollar-Drinks..!
decent personal, alright multies

Bend-And-Bash-Ya-Face-Kid Dirty Stay Sendin'-Facts-To-Fake-Kids
Men-Attack-With-Rage,-Shiiit, Kill 'Em And Leave Men-In-Black-Like-K-Did..!
another nameplay? multies were forced, but it wasn't a bad punch

Even If You Cheat-You'll-Lose, Like Rough Sex I'm Bettin' That Ya Cheeks'll-Bruise
Don't Even Gotta Throw Punches To Knock M On A Coffin'.. I Can Poke M On Like Pikachu..!
more nameplay?? lol.. this was forced.

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~Menace~

Im tha 'Cat' to kill this Stray Mouse, Punches will Work It til They Douse
Have this 'Kid Scared 2 come out n Play' like a ‘Burkittville Play-house’
lol.. this was decent, a little bit simple though... you shouldn't have used the word play twice...

Menace’ll be Prosecuted for tha crime to get rid of the Mystery Fast
Cuz I’ll have u ‘Remember my Text’ like 'P.O.W.’s In History Class'
.. pretty weak..
Cuz ur Lines are Wack ‘N B/S’…So just go back 2 ur Local Board
U being good @ text is tha same as Choir Kids Achieving wit bad Vocal Cords
Wasn't really feeling the wordplay in the first line, I'm sure it's been used somewhere on their site before.. the second line was weak..

U Winning?? Even ur own site has High Doubts, so stay out of My Routes…..
‘Batman'll fall from my lines’ like ‘losing 2 Spider-Man in Justice League Try Outs’ *
nice personal..

That verse is garbage, Plug Tha Bore so i dont get thoughts of which Slug 2 Pour...
'Dirty words' has to 'pull some strings to win' like ppl wit 'Tourette's 'playing Tug-A-war'
ARE YOU FUCKING RETARDED?? YOU DON'T PLAY FUCKING TUG-O-WAR WITH A FUCKING STRING, YOU PLAY WITH A FUCKING ROPE.

^ THIS IS A STRING

THIS IS A ROPE

DO YOU KNOW WOULD HAPPEN IF PLAYED TUG-OF-WAR WITH A STRING? IT WOULD FUCKING BREAK!

nah.. that bar was pretty dope actually..

if u dont get anything dnt vote of course...

Overall - Menace.. he had 2 good bars, other dude had none..

HH4ll · 03-16-2007, 08:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dirty Words

Ok actually we can accept the vote but I want to let some things be known..

nope. . .because if you were getting rid of w/e \\\'\\\'men\\\'\\\' is. . .then you would be making the \\\'\\\'men\\\'\\\' women. . .its worded very poory. . .decent multies though. . .

^ Yes, so a sex change would make men women, getting rid of what makes them a man (a penis)

nope. . .you wouldn\\\'t leave menace in black if you killed him. . .menace would be in a coffin dressed in w/e the family picks for him.. . .forced multies also

^ Ok, it seems you are hooked on getting technical with all my bars.. how many funerals have you been too where the dead person wasn\'t wearing black? In general it\'s a black tuxedo..

omfg. . .that was so bad . . .the wordplay was so horribly forced it reminds me of when soulja said \\\'\\\'red sucks/sox\\\'\\\'. . .wow. . .and also. . .IF YOUR PUNCHING MENACE YOU WOULDN\\\'T BE POKING HIM. . .fucking dumb beezy

^ In the bar I clearly said \"I dont even gotta throw punches\".. So I think you should read things through before you say something and if poke m on is forced to you then you must have a funny ass accent..

Yeah.. just wanted to clear that up..

its pronounced POKE-EEEEEEEEE-MON

not POK-A-MON

and again as to your other points, you need to be more specific or word the bars better

Dirty Words · 03-16-2007, 08:46 PM

LMFAO it's Poke-A-Mon are you in the UK or something???

~Menace~ · 03-16-2007, 08:46 PM

*dont mind this post*

~Menace~ · 03-16-2007, 08:47 PM

ya i know @ esco =(...but STRINGS make a ROPE =)...2-0

M. Expo · 03-16-2007, 08:50 PM

lol, yeah.. i was joking..

& no pokémon isn't pronounce POKE M ON @ NBS dude..

Tha Nice One · 03-16-2007, 11:59 PM

DW's Best Bars:
Ya Thoughts'll-Sink, You Can Go Crazy Facin' Me But I Am Not-A-Shrink
Bars? Stop-And-Blink I Crush Arizona's Finest Quick Like Them Dollar-Drinks..!
They Cost A Dollar..

Bend-And-Bash-Ya-Face-Kid Dirty Stay Sendin'-Facts-To-Fake-Kids
Men-Attack-With-Rage,-Shiiit, Kill 'Em And Leave Men-In-Black-Like-K-Did..!
K Left The Men In Black At The End Of The First Movie / At Your Funeral You're Dressed In Black.. Men (Short For Menace)..

Even If You Cheat-You'll-Lose, Like Rough Sex I'm Bettin' That Ya Cheeks'll-Bruise
Don't Even Gotta Throw Punches To Knock M On A Coffin'.. I Can Poke M On Like Pikachu..!
Poke M On / Pokemon..

Menace's Best Bars:
U Winning?? Even ur own site has High Doubts, so stay out of My Routes…..
‘Batman'll fall from my lines’ like ‘losing 2 Spider-Man in Justice League Try Outs’ *
That verse is garbage, Plug Tha Bore so i dont get thoughts of which Slug 2 Pour...
'Dirty words' has to 'pull some strings to win' like ppl wit 'Tourette's 'playing Tug-A-war'
Menace’ll be Prosecuted for tha crime to get rid of the Mystery Fast
Cuz I’ll have u ‘Remember my Text’ like 'P.O.W.’s In History Class'

Now i'mma vote Of these bars...cuz the other bars were..pfft!

DW-Bar 1
Now That I understand ya slang...the punch personal..came off type nice...
type nice bar...7/10

Bar 2
That Shit Was Just Crazy...Flow Was Ill...Multies Was Ill...And The Men In Black line was piff....Crack Bar..9/10

Bar 3
Aight This Was An OK Closer...thats all for that...7/10

Menace's-Bar 1
That Was hilarious...bar was decent...1st line a filler...so it really knocked
the quality off the bar...8/10

Bar 2
Since This Was A Closer...it was decent...1st line a filler again...Knocks off the quality again..7/10

Bar 3
Ah...This Was Pretty Nice...I Felt It A Lil' Bit..Wordin' was correct and all...7.5/10

Now As You Look At the Numbers DW won...just based off those three bars...and that men in black bar was fuckin' crazy idc what y'all say...

v/dirty words

~Menace~ · 03-17-2007, 12:23 AM

2-1...thanx 4 voting

T0M CH4MBERS · 03-17-2007, 01:01 AM

Fuck Ya Net-Fame I Got Menace On Lock Like The Feds-Mayne
Fall When I Flex-Lame! I Get Rid Of W/e Men Is Like A Sex-Change..!
wasn't really feeling it @ all....the wording was bad.....the multi's were alright tho........

Dyin'-Today Ya About As Straight As The-Lines-In-Ya-Name, Give This Faggot-Hell
Y'all Gon' Be Sad-He-Fell, Coz If He's Shady Then Eliminate M Like A Mad-D12..!
this was wack....

Ya Thoughts'll-Sink, You Can Go Crazy Facin' Me But I Am Not-A-Shrink
Bars? Stop-And-Blink I Crush Arizona's Finest Quick Like Them Dollar-Drinks..!
this was decent............forced multi's tho

Bend-And-Bash-Ya-Face-Kid Dirty Stay Sendin'-Facts-To-Fake-Kids
Men-Attack-With-Rage,-Shiiit, Kill 'Em And Leave Men-In-Black-Like-K-Did..!
pretty decent............

Even If You Cheat-You'll-Lose, Like Rough Sex I'm Bettin' That Ya Cheeks'll-Bruise
Don't Even Gotta Throw Punches To Knock M On A Coffin'.. I Can Poke M On Like Pikachu..!
no this was wacktrocious...........

Im tha 'Cat' to kill this Stray Mouse, Punches will Work It til They Douse
Have this 'Kid Scared 2 come out n Play' like a ‘Burkittville Play-house’
this was decent....but wasn't anything special...

Menace’ll be Prosecuted for tha crime to get rid of the Mystery Fast
Cuz I’ll have u ‘Remember my Text’ like 'P.O.W.’s In History Class'
nah......wasn't really feeling.......

Cuz ur Lines are Wack ‘N B/S’…So just go back 2 ur Local Board
U being good @ text is tha same as Choir Kids Achieving wit bad Vocal Cords
meh.....first is play'd....second wasn't really that good

U Winning?? Even ur own site has High Doubts, so stay out of My Routes…..
‘Batman'll fall from my lines’ like ‘losing 2 Spider-Man in Justice League Try Outs’ *
dope........nice personal/punch

That verse is garbage, Plug Tha Bore so i dont get thoughts of which Slug 2 Pour...
'Dirty words' has to 'pull some strings to win' like ppl wit 'Tourette's 'playing Tug-A-war'

this was nice....very good ending

o/a....menace got this.......

~Menace~ · 03-17-2007, 01:40 AM

3-1...up...thanx 4 tha vote

Skorn Iza · 03-17-2007, 01:10 PM

DW's Best Bars:
Ya Thoughts'll-Sink, You Can Go Crazy Facin' Me But I Am Not-A-Shrink
Bars? Stop-And-Blink I Crush Arizona's Finest Quick Like Them Dollar-Drinks..!
They Cost A Dollar..

2/5

Bend-And-Bash-Ya-Face-Kid Dirty Stay Sendin'-Facts-To-Fake-Kids
Men-Attack-With-Rage,-Shiiit, Kill 'Em And Leave Men-In-Black-Like-K-Did..!
K Left The Men In Black At The End Of The First Movie / At Your Funeral You're Dressed In Black.. Men (Short For Menace)..

2.5/5

Even If You Cheat-You'll-Lose, Like Rough Sex I'm Bettin' That Ya Cheeks'll-Bruise
Don't Even Gotta Throw Punches To Knock M On A Coffin'.. I Can Poke M On Like Pikachu..!
Poke M On / Pokemon..

1.5/5.....hella wack

Menace's Best Bars:
U Winning?? Even ur own site has High Doubts, so stay out of My Routes…..
‘Batman'll fall from my lines’ like ‘losing 2 Spider-Man in Justice League Try Outs’ *

4/5

That verse is garbage, Plug Tha Bore so i dont get thoughts of which Slug 2 Pour...
'Dirty words' has to 'pull some strings to win' like ppl wit 'Tourette's 'playing Tug-A-war'

4/5

Menace’ll be Prosecuted for tha crime to get rid of the Mystery Fast
Cuz I’ll have u ‘Remember my Text’ like 'P.O.W.’s In History Class'

3/5

i just did the best bars..

o/a menace

J High · 03-17-2007, 01:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BomptonsDaughter

its pronounced POKE-EEEEEEEEE-MON

not POK-A-MON

and again as to your other points, you need to be more specific or word the bars better

Im sorry to interrupt this thread...but maybe the wording is fine, you just need to understand it better....cuz it seems like all the battles I have viewed on here have basic ass punches that everyone thinks are hot as hell...punches I have seen been played out for years now...no complexity what so ever...and I keep telling kids on NBS to stop battling over here because they won't win..plain and simple...its obvious kids on here are being D/R in all the battles I have viewed so far...and thats real talk

keep doing ya'll and your basic punches, and NBS will keep doing us

and if it can only be VET votes....why are you accepting some weak ass votes in the first place?

Im not beefin wit nobody on this site cuz its pointless, but Im just honest when I talk....NBS doesn't have a chance of winning here like ya'll don't have a chance of winning on NBS...and it may not be skill level although in this battle it was apparent who was above who and who got D/R votes....

03-16-2007, 06:31 PM	#1
Dirty Words ..Better Than You.. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: ..Maryland.. Posts: 54 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Dirty Words \|VS\| Menace Dirty Words \|VS\| Menace 5 Bars Due an hour from now Anything else you'd like to add? __________________

03-16-2007, 07:21 PM	#3
Dirty Words ..Better Than You.. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: ..Maryland.. Posts: 54 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Fuck Ya Net-Fame I Got Menace On Lock Like The Feds-Mayne Fall When I Flex-Lame! I Get Rid Of W/e Men Is Like A Sex-Change..! Dyin'-Today Ya About As Straight As The-Lines-In-Ya-Name, Give This Faggot-Hell Y'all Gon' Be Sad-He-Fell, Coz If He's Shady Then Eliminate M Like A Mad-D12..! M / Em.. Ya Thoughts'll-Sink, You Can Go Crazy Facin' Me But I Am Not-A-Shrink Bars? Stop-And-Blink I Crush Arizona's Finest Quick Like Them Dollar-Drinks..! They Cost A Dollar.. Bend-And-Bash-Ya-Face-Kid Dirty Stay Sendin'-Facts-To-Fake-Kids Men-Attack-With-Rage,-Shiiit, Kill 'Em And Leave Men-In-Black-Like-K-Did..! K Left The Men In Black At The End Of The First Movie / At Your Funeral You're Dressed In Black.. Men (Short For Menace).. Even If You Cheat-You'll-Lose, Like Rough Sex I'm Bettin' That Ya Cheeks'll-Bruise Don't Even Gotta Throw Punches To Knock M On A Coffin'.. I Can Poke M On Like Pikachu..! Poke M On / Pokemon.. __________________

03-16-2007, 07:51 PM	#5
HH4ll Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 197 Thanks: 9 Thanked 36 Times in 14 Posts	Code: Fuck Ya Net-Fame I Got Menace On Lock Like The Feds-Mayne Fall When I Flex-Lame! I Get Rid Of W/e Men Is Like A Sex-Change..! nope. . .because if you were getting rid of w/e \'\'men\'\' is. . .then you would be making the \'\'men\'\' women. . .its worded very poory. . .decent multies though. . . Code: Dyin\'-Today Ya About As Straight As The-Lines-In-Ya-Name, Give This Faggot-Hell Y\'all Gon\' Be Sad-He-Fell, Coz If He\'s Shady Then Eliminate M Like A Mad-D12..! the faggot hell multie was forced. . .the punch is played. . .i\'ve seen countless punches about D12, w/ proof, w/ em, w/ bizzare. . .get a lil orginial. . .also just using the \'m\' isnt a nameplay Code: Ya Thoughts\'ll-Sink, You Can Go Crazy Facin\' Me But I Am Not-A-Shrink Bars? Stop-And-Blink I Crush Arizona\'s Finest Quick Like Them Dollar-Drinks..! not bad. . .good personal. . .only thing would be that you don\'t \'\'crush\'\' a drink. . . Code: Bend-And-Bash-Ya-Face-Kid Dirty Stay Sendin\'-Facts-To-Fake-Kids Men-Attack-With-Rage,-Shiiit, Kill \'Em And Leave Men-In-Black-Like-K-Did..! nope. . .you wouldn\'t leave menace in black if you killed him. . .menace would be in a coffin dressed in w/e the family picks for him.. . .forced multies also Code: Even If You Cheat-You\'ll-Lose, Like Rough Sex I\'m Bettin\' That Ya Cheeks\'ll-Bruise Don\'t Even Gotta Throw Punches To Knock M On A Coffin\'.. I Can Poke M On Like Pikachu..! omfg. . .that was so bad . . .the wordplay was so horribly forced it reminds me of when soulja said \'\'red sucks/sox\'\'. . .wow. . .and also. . .IF YOUR PUNCHING MENACE YOU WOULDN\'T BE POKING HIM. . .fucking dumb beezy overall - you had two decent bars w/ decent personals but the rest was wack. . .all you NBS dudes in general need to stop forcing the multies menace: Code: Im tha \'Cat\' to kill this Stray Mouse, Punches will Work It til They Douse Have this \'Kid Scared 2 come out n Play\' like a ‘Burkittville Play-house’ lol works perfectly. . .not forced at all. . .good bar Code: Menace’ll be Prosecuted for tha crime to get rid of the Mystery Fast Cuz I’ll have u ‘Remember my Text’ like \'P.O.W.’s In History Class\' seen it before and a P.O.W. wouldn\'t be in history class. . .they could be at a memorial though. . . Code: Cuz ur Lines are Wack ‘N B/S’…So just go back 2 ur Local Board U being good @ text is tha same as Choir Kids Achieving wit bad Vocal Cords the wordplay made up for the lack of a hard hitting punch, the punch was a concept that could\'ve been flipped much better. . .but the wordplay was really dope. . . Code: U Winning?? Even ur own site has High Doubts, so stay out of My Routes….. ‘Batman\'ll fall from my lines’ like ‘losing 2 Spider-Man in Justice League Try Outs’ * dope, best personal of the battle also Code: That verse is garbage, Plug Tha Bore so i dont get thoughts of which Slug 2 Pour... \'Dirty words\' has to \'pull some strings to win\' like ppl wit \'Tourette\'s \'playing Tug-A-war\' another dope bar. . .sick personal Menace had one bad bar. . .Dirty Words had 3. . .menace had two bars that > all of dw\'s bars . . .menace wins DW. . .that batman audio was fucking sick though. . . ps i\'ve voted for NBS in the other two battles.. . . im not some hhb d/r lol. .

03-16-2007, 07:56 PM	#7
Dirty Words ..Better Than You.. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: ..Maryland.. Posts: 54 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Alright I know you know what you're talking about so the vote is cool Ps. Crush is like slang for eating / drinking somethin' fast here in MD =/.. and I wasn't saying those were w/plays I just put it in the expos for the slow peeps.. __________________

03-16-2007, 08:16 PM	#10
Dirty Words ..Better Than You.. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: ..Maryland.. Posts: 54 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Ok actually we can accept the vote but I want to let some things be known.. nope. . .because if you were getting rid of w/e \'\'men\'\' is. . .then you would be making the \'\'men\'\' women. . .its worded very poory. . .decent multies though. . . ^ Yes, so a sex change would make men women, getting rid of what makes them a man (a penis) nope. . .you wouldn\'t leave menace in black if you killed him. . .menace would be in a coffin dressed in w/e the family picks for him.. . .forced multies also ^ Ok, it seems you are hooked on getting technical with all my bars.. how many funerals have you been too where the dead person wasn't wearing black? In general it's a black tuxedo.. omfg. . .that was so bad . . .the wordplay was so horribly forced it reminds me of when soulja said \'\'red sucks/sox\'\'. . .wow. . .and also. . .IF YOUR PUNCHING MENACE YOU WOULDN\'T BE POKING HIM. . .fucking dumb beezy ^ In the bar I clearly said "I dont even gotta throw punches".. So I think you should read things through before you say something and if poke m on is forced to you then you must have a funny ass accent.. Yeah.. just wanted to clear that up.. __________________

03-16-2007, 06:44 PM	#2
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,720 Thanks: 116 Thanked 37 Times in 15 Posts	VET votes Only.....N PLEASE, no rooks or "under-achievers"(from both HHB and NBS) come into this thread babbling about how wack/good sum1 is...take that shit sum where else...n aight i'll drop by 3:31

03-16-2007, 07:30 PM	#4
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,720 Thanks: 116 Thanked 37 Times in 15 Posts	Im tha 'Cat' to kill this Stray Mouse, Punches will Work It til They Douse Have this 'Kid Scared 2 come out n Play' like a ‘Burkittville Play-house’ Menace’ll be Prosecuted for tha crime to get rid of the Mystery Fast Cuz I’ll have u ‘Remember my Text’ like 'P.O.W.’s In History Class' Cuz ur Lines are Wack ‘N B/S’…So just go back 2 ur Local Board U being good @ text is tha same as Choir Kids Achieving wit bad Vocal Cords U Winning?? Even ur own site has High Doubts, so stay out of My Routes….. ‘Batman'll fall from my lines’ like ‘losing 2 Spider-Man in Justice League Try Outs’ * That verse is garbage, Plug Tha Bore so i dont get thoughts of which Slug 2 Pour... 'Dirty words' has to 'pull some strings to win' like ppl wit 'Tourette's 'playing Tug-A-war' *on one of his audio's he said he "feels like batman" if u dont get anything dnt vote of course...

03-16-2007, 07:54 PM	#6
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,720 Thanks: 116 Thanked 37 Times in 15 Posts	1-0...unless u see a problemo...thnx 4 voting tho

03-16-2007, 08:00 PM	#8
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,720 Thanks: 116 Thanked 37 Times in 15 Posts	lol im from arizona, crush is a drink....that us negros are fond of =)...but ya aight 1-0, dope verse BTW

03-16-2007, 08:46 PM	#13
Dirty Words ..Better Than You.. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: ..Maryland.. Posts: 54 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	LMFAO it's Poke-A-Mon are you in the UK or something??? __________________

03-16-2007, 08:47 PM	#15
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,720 Thanks: 116 Thanked 37 Times in 15 Posts	ya i know @ esco =(...but STRINGS make a ROPE =)...2-0

03-16-2007, 08:50 PM	#16
M. Expo Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 166 Thanks: 20 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	lol, yeah.. i was joking.. & no pokémon isn't pronounce POKE M ON @ NBS dude..

03-16-2007, 11:59 PM	#17
Tha Nice One ~Just Watch, Don't Copy~ Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 70 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	DW's Best Bars: Ya Thoughts'll-Sink, You Can Go Crazy Facin' Me But I Am Not-A-Shrink Bars? Stop-And-Blink I Crush Arizona's Finest Quick Like Them Dollar-Drinks..! They Cost A Dollar.. Bend-And-Bash-Ya-Face-Kid Dirty Stay Sendin'-Facts-To-Fake-Kids Men-Attack-With-Rage,-Shiiit, Kill 'Em And Leave Men-In-Black-Like-K-Did..! K Left The Men In Black At The End Of The First Movie / At Your Funeral You're Dressed In Black.. Men (Short For Menace).. Even If You Cheat-You'll-Lose, Like Rough Sex I'm Bettin' That Ya Cheeks'll-Bruise Don't Even Gotta Throw Punches To Knock M On A Coffin'.. I Can Poke M On Like Pikachu..! Poke M On / Pokemon.. Menace's Best Bars: U Winning?? Even ur own site has High Doubts, so stay out of My Routes….. ‘Batman'll fall from my lines’ like ‘losing 2 Spider-Man in Justice League Try Outs’ * That verse is garbage, Plug Tha Bore so i dont get thoughts of which Slug 2 Pour... 'Dirty words' has to 'pull some strings to win' like ppl wit 'Tourette's 'playing Tug-A-war' Menace’ll be Prosecuted for tha crime to get rid of the Mystery Fast Cuz I’ll have u ‘Remember my Text’ like 'P.O.W.’s In History Class' Now i'mma vote Of these bars...cuz the other bars were..pfft! DW-Bar 1 Now That I understand ya slang...the punch personal..came off type nice... type nice bar...7/10 Bar 2 That Shit Was Just Crazy...Flow Was Ill...Multies Was Ill...And The Men In Black line was piff....Crack Bar..9/10 Bar 3 Aight This Was An OK Closer...thats all for that...7/10 Menace's-Bar 1 That Was hilarious...bar was decent...1st line a filler...so it really knocked the quality off the bar...8/10 Bar 2 Since This Was A Closer...it was decent...1st line a filler again...Knocks off the quality again..7/10 Bar 3 Ah...This Was Pretty Nice...I Felt It A Lil' Bit..Wordin' was correct and all...7.5/10 Now As You Look At the Numbers DW won...just based off those three bars...and that men in black bar was fuckin' crazy idc what y'all say... v/dirty words

03-17-2007, 12:23 AM	#18
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,720 Thanks: 116 Thanked 37 Times in 15 Posts	2-1...thanx 4 voting

03-17-2007, 01:01 AM	#19
T0M CH4MBERS AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 9,098 Thanks: 68 Thanked 88 Times in 50 Posts	Fuck Ya Net-Fame I Got Menace On Lock Like The Feds-Mayne Fall When I Flex-Lame! I Get Rid Of W/e Men Is Like A Sex-Change..! wasn't really feeling it @ all....the wording was bad.....the multi's were alright tho........ Dyin'-Today Ya About As Straight As The-Lines-In-Ya-Name, Give This Faggot-Hell Y'all Gon' Be Sad-He-Fell, Coz If He's Shady Then Eliminate M Like A Mad-D12..! this was wack.... Ya Thoughts'll-Sink, You Can Go Crazy Facin' Me But I Am Not-A-Shrink Bars? Stop-And-Blink I Crush Arizona's Finest Quick Like Them Dollar-Drinks..! this was decent............forced multi's tho Bend-And-Bash-Ya-Face-Kid Dirty Stay Sendin'-Facts-To-Fake-Kids Men-Attack-With-Rage,-Shiiit, Kill 'Em And Leave Men-In-Black-Like-K-Did..! pretty decent............ Even If You Cheat-You'll-Lose, Like Rough Sex I'm Bettin' That Ya Cheeks'll-Bruise Don't Even Gotta Throw Punches To Knock M On A Coffin'.. I Can Poke M On Like Pikachu..! no this was wacktrocious........... Im tha 'Cat' to kill this Stray Mouse, Punches will Work It til They Douse Have this 'Kid Scared 2 come out n Play' like a ‘Burkittville Play-house’ this was decent....but wasn't anything special... Menace’ll be Prosecuted for tha crime to get rid of the Mystery Fast Cuz I’ll have u ‘Remember my Text’ like 'P.O.W.’s In History Class' nah......wasn't really feeling....... Cuz ur Lines are Wack ‘N B/S’…So just go back 2 ur Local Board U being good @ text is tha same as Choir Kids Achieving wit bad Vocal Cords meh.....first is play'd....second wasn't really that good U Winning?? Even ur own site has High Doubts, so stay out of My Routes….. ‘Batman'll fall from my lines’ like ‘losing 2 Spider-Man in Justice League Try Outs’ * dope........nice personal/punch That verse is garbage, Plug Tha Bore so i dont get thoughts of which Slug 2 Pour... 'Dirty words' has to 'pull some strings to win' like ppl wit 'Tourette's 'playing Tug-A-war' this was nice....very good ending o/a....menace got this....... __________________ D Minus says: u just mad cuz ima be cakin and it wont hurt when i take a huge shit...being broke with a tight asshole aint doin shit for me right now yo!

03-17-2007, 01:40 AM	#20
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,720 Thanks: 116 Thanked 37 Times in 15 Posts	3-1...up...thanx 4 tha vote

03-17-2007, 01:10 PM	#21
Skorn Iza Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,130 Thanks: 175 Thanked 288 Times in 69 Posts	DW's Best Bars: Ya Thoughts'll-Sink, You Can Go Crazy Facin' Me But I Am Not-A-Shrink Bars? Stop-And-Blink I Crush Arizona's Finest Quick Like Them Dollar-Drinks..! They Cost A Dollar.. 2/5 Bend-And-Bash-Ya-Face-Kid Dirty Stay Sendin'-Facts-To-Fake-Kids Men-Attack-With-Rage,-Shiiit, Kill 'Em And Leave Men-In-Black-Like-K-Did..! K Left The Men In Black At The End Of The First Movie / At Your Funeral You're Dressed In Black.. Men (Short For Menace).. 2.5/5 Even If You Cheat-You'll-Lose, Like Rough Sex I'm Bettin' That Ya Cheeks'll-Bruise Don't Even Gotta Throw Punches To Knock M On A Coffin'.. I Can Poke M On Like Pikachu..! Poke M On / Pokemon.. 1.5/5.....hella wack Menace's Best Bars: U Winning?? Even ur own site has High Doubts, so stay out of My Routes….. ‘Batman'll fall from my lines’ like ‘losing 2 Spider-Man in Justice League Try Outs’ * 4/5 That verse is garbage, Plug Tha Bore so i dont get thoughts of which Slug 2 Pour... 'Dirty words' has to 'pull some strings to win' like ppl wit 'Tourette's 'playing Tug-A-war' 4/5 Menace’ll be Prosecuted for tha crime to get rid of the Mystery Fast Cuz I’ll have u ‘Remember my Text’ like 'P.O.W.’s In History Class' 3/5 i just did the best bars.. o/a menace