~!~Optimized~!~ vs V Da MiTiGaToR (King Of The Board Tourney)

...Lethal Soljah · 06-12-2007, 09:32 PM

Rules
Battles due Friday june 15th midnight eastern time
Battlers must spit 4 bars
No bitin/feeding/ or recycling or dq
No rookie votes/hate/crew/or dickrydin votes
No biters can vote
Vote bar by bar or brackets
Punches-
Wordplay-
Creativity-
Multies-
Flow-
Personals-
Overall-
Must give a explanation in why you think the person won
Don’t NO SHOW or you wont be able to participate in any other tourneys on the site

Homicidal Thots · 06-13-2007, 02:35 PM

checkin in g luck virus

ThA ViiRu5 · 06-13-2007, 10:34 PM

good luck opto

ThA ViiRu5 · 06-13-2007, 11:14 PM

Put My Pic @ Tha End Of Ya Sig.........

Battle me? you gon need therapy of course, you aint even good at bein ass you a parody of whores//
my rhymes bury you wit force, dont act dumb like ya fo fo' spray, fuck a protege, Eric E's ya boss!!//
please dawg when im in the booth, it's too pleasin, you drop bars of hip-hop and prove treason//
i 'craft war' and make u lose key-gens, this bitch couldn't have 'more cats than me' if he was Ruth Knueven!// (pro. new-even)
there aint endin my tirade bitch, when i spray snitch, this 'clown' gon feel the pie spray quick//
why waste spits? i shouldnt be battlin you, take my advice and add "SHIT" to ya [b]I aint list!B]//
dawg u a pop star candy bitch and what u singin is hoarse, everything u slingin is forced//
looks like we ALL gon win the tourny..readin yo shit we kings of the BORED...//

Bar 1 - he had a post jokingly saying eric e is his protege

Bar 2 - he asked for a key-gen to that nerdy ass game world of warcraft....Ruth Knueven is a cat hoarder...meaning she "collects" cats.. http://www.wtopnews.com/index.php?sid=599010&nid=25

Bar 3 - he had a thread witta free titled "i aint" and he kept saying shit like " i aint a gangsta, i aint a thug"

Bar 4 - self explanatory

E-Z....

Homicidal Thots · 06-15-2007, 01:22 AM

virus imma beat u lyrically and mentally, physically you cant stand me
lonely goofy ass bitch searchin the triple x beatin ya shit to bambi
punches to tha dome piece and shatterin ribs bustin ya spleen
this dukes a heavyweight?? please faggots only fourteen!
ok you got me iam a gamer, askin for a key, a pc nerd
i aint a thug or a g but iam not afraid to squeeze the bird!
i dont give a fuck about this battle or this bullshit tourny
u wanna go to XXX bitchass cant get puss feelin all horny

http://hhboard.com/showthread.php?t=14218 <-------the bambi line

Khophyn Incognito · 06-15-2007, 03:07 AM

Battle me? you gon need therapy of course, you aint even good at bein ass you a parody of whores//
my rhymes bury you wit force, dont act dumb like ya fo fo' spray, fuck a protege, Eric E's ya boss!!//
I feel like this style everyone uses is borderline cheatin, cuz this is a long ass bar...it was a decent open
please dawg when im in the booth, it's too pleasin, you drop bars of hip-hop and prove treason//
i 'craft war' and make u lose key-gens, this bitch couldn't have 'more cats than me' if he was Ruth Knueven!//
kinda funny...I'm assuming you mean category's not cats as in mobbin deep (pro. new-even)
there aint endin my tirade bitch, when i spray snitch, this 'clown' gon feel the pie spray quick//
why waste spits? i shouldnt be battlin you, take my advice and add "SHIT" to ya I aint list!//
creative lil play there...
dawg u a pop star candy bitch and what u singin is hoarse, everything u slingin is forced//
looks like we ALL gon win the tourny..readin yo shit we kings of the BORED...//
eh...kinda played...not a good closer..

p.s. you called him nerdy for playin a pc game, but you knew who Ruth Knueven was..lol. Also that explainin ya punches shit is kinda garbo, but it looks like everyone here does it so...eh, guess I been on audio too long.

virus imma beat u lyrically and mentally, physically you cant stand me
lonely goofy ass bitch searchin the triple x beatin ya shit to bambi
um...ok
punches to tha dome piece and shatterin ribs bustin ya spleen
this dukes a heavyweight?? please faggots only fourteen!
what's age got to do with it? You had material, but the punch you put it in wasn't very creative...
ok you got me iam a gamer, askin for a key, a pc nerd
i aint a thug or a g but iam not afraid to squeeze the bird!
there's no punch...u just stated somethin about you...filler line
i dont give a fuck about this battle or this bullshit tourny
u wanna go to XXX bitchass cant get puss feelin all horny
it's really pushin it to rhyme tourny wit horny in text...wasn't really a punch.

p.s. a lot of your lines stated facts but had no punchline...there was no wit just research. Plus u didn't cover up the fact that you were lacking in creativity with exessive multis. You'll prolly lose the first round, but keep battlin & try to incorporate more witty punchlines & multis into your lines.

Final Thoughts- First cat had very stretched lines & used what he thinks is multis, but they're actually extra bars...so technically you had around 6-8 bars, but that style's become standard at a lot of sites so it's whateva. some punches were kinda played & some didn't hit too hard...but it's the first round. Second cat didn't really have punches...& also had some filler...& when you only have 4 bars you can't afford to use 1 as filler, especially not in text where every punch counts & you can't rely on flow or delivery. your rhyme scheme was also a bit too simple.

punches: 1st guy
personals: 1st guy had warcraft, 2nd guy had porn searching 1st guy worded his better, 2nd guy had 2 references...guess it breaks even
multis:1st guy, 2nd guy was simpleton
creatvity:1st guy, 2nd guy had poor wording & just stated things
humor: neither dropped anything funny
overall: first guy

v/ first guy

-K.P- · 06-15-2007, 06:08 AM

thats what i call a vote...haha, i'll vote later

YoungSparks · 06-15-2007, 04:44 PM

Punches-Vdam, his was overall better
Creativity-Vdam, was worded better
Multies-Vdam, opt's was too basic
Flow-Vdam
Personals-Vdam, cuz he was shitting on him(aint list,eric e's ya boss,nerdy game)but lol @Vdam being in the XXX section lookin at bambi

Overall-Ez win for Vdam, Opt didn't seem to take it as a Tournament

Sean Brown · 06-15-2007, 04:56 PM

V da mitigator all calls

to clearify

Multies V
Creativity V
Punches V
Flow : O
Personals : V
Wordplay : V
overall V

BLOW OUT

B Dope · 06-15-2007, 06:07 PM

V da advances to the next round

~Young Gunna~ · 06-15-2007, 08:09 PM

^^wut he said....

3-0 ko

06-12-2007, 09:32 PM	#1
...Lethal Soljah VV strong armin hoes VV Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: on auto..pilot so guys just stare at my wardrobe Posts: 6,042 Thanks: 45 Thanked 669 Times in 91 Posts	~!~Optimized~!~ vs V Da MiTiGaToR (King Of The Board Tourney) ~!~Optimized~!~ vs V Da MiTiGaToR (King Of The Board Tourney) Rules Battles due Friday june 15th midnight eastern time Battlers must spit 4 bars No bitin/feeding/ or recycling or dq No rookie votes/hate/crew/or dickrydin votes No biters can vote Vote bar by bar or brackets Punches- Wordplay- Creativity- Multies- Flow- Personals- Overall- Must give a explanation in why you think the person won Don’t NO SHOW or you wont be able to participate in any other tourneys on the site __________________ :ninja : Celtics NBA Champs 08-till the league ends ➌-Peat iN the Making. Niggas like Lethal why u still on that neggin shit?...Cuz I like neggin bitch !!

06-13-2007, 10:34 PM	#3
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 1,790 Thanks: 156 Thanked 90 Times in 50 Posts	good luck opto __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 25 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 11 [TKO]: 1 (Last Burial): Homicidal Thots (KO) // (Last Fuck Up): T0m Ch4mbers (5-3) ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

06-13-2007, 11:14 PM	#4
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 1,790 Thanks: 156 Thanked 90 Times in 50 Posts	! Makin My Presence Felt on The Return ! Put My Pic @ Tha End Of Ya Sig......... Battle me? you gon need therapy of course, you aint even good at bein ass you a parody of whores// my rhymes bury you wit force, dont act dumb like ya fo fo' spray, fuck a protege, Eric E's ya boss!!// please dawg when im in the booth, it's too pleasin, you drop bars of hip-hop and prove treason// i 'craft war' and make u lose key-gens, this bitch couldn't have 'more cats than me' if he was Ruth Knueven!// (pro. new-even) there aint endin my tirade bitch, when i spray snitch, this 'clown' gon feel the pie spray quick// why waste spits? i shouldnt be battlin you, take my advice and add "SHIT" to ya [b]I aint list!B]// dawg u a pop star candy bitch and what u singin is hoarse, everything u slingin is forced// looks like we ALL gon win the tourny..readin yo shit we kings of the BORED...// Bar 1 - he had a post jokingly saying eric e is his protege Bar 2 - he asked for a key-gen to that nerdy ass game world of warcraft....Ruth Knueven is a cat hoarder...meaning she "collects" cats.. http://www.wtopnews.com/index.php?sid=599010&nid=25 Bar 3 - he had a thread witta free titled "i aint" and he kept saying shit like " i aint a gangsta, i aint a thug" Bar 4 - self explanatory E-Z.... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 25 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 11 [TKO]: 1 (Last Burial): Homicidal Thots (KO) // (Last Fuck Up): T0m Ch4mbers (5-3) ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

06-15-2007, 04:56 PM	#9
Sean Brown 2RawForTheStreetz Join Date: May 2007 Location: PHILA,PA Posts: 518 Thanks: 22 Thanked 23 Times in 14 Posts	V da mitigator all calls to clearify Multies V Creativity V Punches V Flow : O Personals : V Wordplay : V overall V BLOW OUT __________________

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06-13-2007, 02:35 PM	#2
Homicidal Thots Ya Favorite Rappers Idol Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Earth Posts: 2,122 Thanks: 405 Thanked 246 Times in 58 Posts	checkin in g luck virus

06-15-2007, 01:22 AM	#5
Homicidal Thots Ya Favorite Rappers Idol Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Earth Posts: 2,122 Thanks: 405 Thanked 246 Times in 58 Posts	virus imma beat u lyrically and mentally, physically you cant stand me lonely goofy ass bitch searchin the triple x beatin ya shit to bambi punches to tha dome piece and shatterin ribs bustin ya spleen this dukes a heavyweight?? please faggots only fourteen! ok you got me iam a gamer, askin for a key, a pc nerd i aint a thug or a g but iam not afraid to squeeze the bird! i dont give a fuck about this battle or this bullshit tourny u wanna go to XXX bitchass cant get puss feelin all horny http://hhboard.com/showthread.php?t=14218 <-------the bambi line

06-15-2007, 03:07 AM	#6
Khophyn Incognito Devil's Greatest Trick Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: 6ft Plot Posts: 648 Thanks: 0 Thanked 16 Times in 8 Posts	Battle me? you gon need therapy of course, you aint even good at bein ass you a parody of whores// my rhymes bury you wit force, dont act dumb like ya fo fo' spray, fuck a protege, Eric E's ya boss!!// I feel like this style everyone uses is borderline cheatin, cuz this is a long ass bar...it was a decent open please dawg when im in the booth, it's too pleasin, you drop bars of hip-hop and prove treason// i 'craft war' and make u lose key-gens, this bitch couldn't have 'more cats than me' if he was Ruth Knueven!// kinda funny...I'm assuming you mean category's not cats as in mobbin deep (pro. new-even) there aint endin my tirade bitch, when i spray snitch, this 'clown' gon feel the pie spray quick// why waste spits? i shouldnt be battlin you, take my advice and add "SHIT" to ya I aint list!// creative lil play there... dawg u a pop star candy bitch and what u singin is hoarse, everything u slingin is forced// looks like we ALL gon win the tourny..readin yo shit we kings of the BORED...// eh...kinda played...not a good closer.. p.s. you called him nerdy for playin a pc game, but you knew who Ruth Knueven was..lol. Also that explainin ya punches shit is kinda garbo, but it looks like everyone here does it so...eh, guess I been on audio too long. virus imma beat u lyrically and mentally, physically you cant stand me lonely goofy ass bitch searchin the triple x beatin ya shit to bambi um...ok punches to tha dome piece and shatterin ribs bustin ya spleen this dukes a heavyweight?? please faggots only fourteen! what's age got to do with it? You had material, but the punch you put it in wasn't very creative... ok you got me iam a gamer, askin for a key, a pc nerd i aint a thug or a g but iam not afraid to squeeze the bird! there's no punch...u just stated somethin about you...filler line i dont give a fuck about this battle or this bullshit tourny u wanna go to XXX bitchass cant get puss feelin all horny it's really pushin it to rhyme tourny wit horny in text...wasn't really a punch. p.s. a lot of your lines stated facts but had no punchline...there was no wit just research. Plus u didn't cover up the fact that you were lacking in creativity with exessive multis. You'll prolly lose the first round, but keep battlin & try to incorporate more witty punchlines & multis into your lines. Final Thoughts- First cat had very stretched lines & used what he thinks is multis, but they're actually extra bars...so technically you had around 6-8 bars, but that style's become standard at a lot of sites so it's whateva. some punches were kinda played & some didn't hit too hard...but it's the first round. Second cat didn't really have punches...& also had some filler...& when you only have 4 bars you can't afford to use 1 as filler, especially not in text where every punch counts & you can't rely on flow or delivery. your rhyme scheme was also a bit too simple. punches: 1st guy personals: 1st guy had warcraft, 2nd guy had porn searching 1st guy worded his better, 2nd guy had 2 references...guess it breaks even multis:1st guy, 2nd guy was simpleton creatvity:1st guy, 2nd guy had poor wording & just stated things humor: neither dropped anything funny overall: first guy v/ first guy

06-15-2007, 06:08 AM	#7
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,518 Thanks: 142 Thanked 119 Times in 47 Posts	thats what i call a vote...haha, i'll vote later

06-15-2007, 04:44 PM	#8
YoungSparks Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: NY-NC Posts: 1,265 Thanks: 36 Thanked 72 Times in 40 Posts	Punches-Vdam, his was overall better Creativity-Vdam, was worded better Multies-Vdam, opt's was too basic Flow-Vdam Personals-Vdam, cuz he was shitting on him(aint list,eric e's ya boss,nerdy game)but lol @Vdam being in the XXX section lookin at bambi Overall-Ez win for Vdam, Opt didn't seem to take it as a Tournament

06-15-2007, 06:07 PM	#10
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Thanks: 638 Thanked 375 Times in 112 Posts	V da advances to the next round

06-15-2007, 08:09 PM	#11
~Young Gunna~ Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Gs Us Posts: 10,871 Thanks: 156 Thanked 574 Times in 243 Posts	^^wut he said.... 3-0 ko