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The Realist Is Me
Join Date: May 2006
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/marvelou...ch_up-mp3.html
Chea Let me know wat yall Think this is just a lil come abck track i aint droppe dnuthin ina while so holla at ya boi wit sum feed back |
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| The Following User Says Thank You to Mar-Velous For This Useful Post: | Fabuless (05-05-2007) |
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beat was crazy...flow was sick...multies were definetely there..just without a huge impact...quality is great...ppunches were cool
id say 9/10..sickening track man
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Damn Marv..This Prlly The Best Track Ive Heard From You
Beat Is FuckiN InSane..Lyrics Is Tight..Flow Is On Point..Good Emotion..Sum Nice Multies..Keep Doin You Fam |
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The Realist Is Me
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Chea Thx 4 Feed yall I appreciate It Im still Lookin 4 More Uppin
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The Realist Is Me
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Uppin..................
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I just noticed u did the alpha bet slaughter shit on the second verse...is that why u asked me about it last time...I just noticed that...aha woooo
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The Emperor
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Ok I wasnt really feeling the beat....besides that I DEFINATELY wasnt feeling the chorus. If ur gonna do a hype type song the chorus has to be SOLID and it wasnt here. Ur rhyme scheme is pretty nice I just didnt like ur delivery. Specially on the 2nd verse you sounded like you were reading. Now im not saying this is a bad song just change the chorus and make ya delivery sound polished and u set
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Join Date: May 2006
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not really feelin it
the hook was meh...and when u started repeatin "switch up" u were off beat the first verse was kinda simple and the second verse was just random words that rhymed..
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