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05-05-2007, 02:15 AM
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Don Sheeba
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05-05-2007, 04:37 AM
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NIce shit yo, had good flow, nice vocab, good multies, it was worded great, not the typical bitch song, thats a good thing though...8.5/10
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05-05-2007, 09:46 AM
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chea..good track...puches was ok..lyrics overall were pretty tight...flow was on point as fuck...8/10
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05-05-2007, 03:58 PM
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Don Sheeba
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thanks..uppin
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05-05-2007, 04:44 PM
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good flow on dis, u need a betta mic tho, real muffled but dis is a good track, reall shit
"Da Only Way U'll Getta Nut Again Is If It Rain Cashews In Da Sky.." liked dat shit |
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05-05-2007, 05:26 PM
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This Was Really Good
Nice Flow Nice Wording With Me N Yu..It Was Meant To Be.. N Runnin After Yu? Yu Think Ya Worth A Sprint Out Me? Yu Gotta Better Chance Gettin' Text Messeges Sent For Free.. That Shit Was On Point |
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05-05-2007, 10:23 PM
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Well I like the subject matter. Ur rhyme scheme was basic delivery was boring though. You need a bit more energy in ur vocals..i know its a laid back joint but, even so the delivery sounded lazy. Nice beat
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05-06-2007, 12:40 PM
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Don Sheeba
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^^ Thanks..i understand dat lol..uppin
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05-06-2007, 03:50 PM
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Don Sheeba
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uppin.....
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05-06-2007, 05:38 PM
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the beat got louder towards the end
i like the content of the lyrics and how they were put together i swear you remind me of vakill too much... anyway that cashews line was creative and nice i like this don lon keep it up...
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05-06-2007, 10:51 PM
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Don Sheeba
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thanks uppin...
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05-07-2007, 09:38 AM
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nice work man liking da flow
check out my new song plzz n leave a comment !!The Beginning Of The End!! 14yr old merker |
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05-08-2007, 12:04 AM
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AkA Sur-Vis-U-All
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.......i believe i proof-read these lyrics......and read over 3 different verses....so this better be hot...
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05-08-2007, 03:58 AM
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14 n Runnin Da Game
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nice shit man dat was nice
check out my new song n leave some feed bac plzz bless !!The Beginning Of The End!! 14yr old merker |
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05-08-2007, 10:36 AM
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Don Sheeba
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05-08-2007, 10:58 AM
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I'll give feed on this later!!
Im at work but yo son make sure you peep my new jointz too!! 1
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05-16-2007, 12:46 AM
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AkA Sur-Vis-U-All
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my bad famo.............................................. ...........................
its different ain't like all the other lovey dovey songs............ your flow is improving................ lyrically.....strong as usual...... delivery is getting there overall 8.5/10 nice shit.......
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05-16-2007, 05:26 AM
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No offence, but i've heard a cashews line like that one before.. Other then that the flow is nice.. Your vocab is alright.. Overall it was decent..
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