Phinali- Lyrical Commandments

Skorn Iza · 05-06-2007, 12:58 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=5313886

yu kno dah bizznizz

Lyrical Messiah · 05-06-2007, 01:00 PM

Damn Another So Soon

Im Still Bangin Seperate Ways

Skorn Iza · 05-06-2007, 01:03 PM

hehe..im just gettin' on ma grind..b4 those..i havent recorded in 2 weeks..

Lyrical Messiah · 05-06-2007, 01:05 PM

Yo Im Feeling That Grind Keep Em Coming While I Check This One Out

BTW I Read The Lyrics Already Got Those On Point

Edit: Yo This Shit IS Craaaaaaaaazy Your Flow Is On Point, Beat Is Knock, Damn I Cant Even Say Anything Bad About It Just Keep This Up Wish I Could D/L It

Skorn Iza · 05-06-2007, 03:46 PM

uppin.....

Skorn Iza · 05-06-2007, 08:02 PM

uppin yu nigras

B Dope · 05-06-2007, 08:29 PM

you killin the shit hyphy, dope lyrics metas and everything, ya flow is just a lil too laid back, ya dig.....nice shit though 8.0/10

Apocalypse10 · 05-06-2007, 08:29 PM

This was much better then what I heard b4. Diggin this weird ass beat lol. U had a nice swagga on here and flow. Solid all around...only one small suggestion...on some words that u sound enounciate properly due to the way its worded or what not...on one of the doubles say only those words while going through and enounciate them clearly...itll make it sound better...besides that SOLID shit fam..

B Dope · 05-06-2007, 08:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Apocalypse10

This was much better then what I heard b4. Diggin this weird ass beat lol. U had a nice swagga on here and flow. Solid all around...only one small suggestion...on some words that u sound enounciate properly due to the way its worded or what not...on one of the doubles say only those words while going through and enounciate them clearly...itll make it sound better...besides that SOLID shit fam..

smh....that was biggies beat yo

Skorn Iza · 05-06-2007, 10:50 PM

thanks famz

~Menace~ · 05-06-2007, 11:02 PM

i didnt like tha way u ended it, it was a hot line but i think u shouldve kept going or put a different line 2 close it...ur quality was wack, if u had good quality negros might actually think ur good...sum hot punches, good wordplay...good beat choice for YOU...decent flow

Skorn Iza · 05-07-2007, 10:59 AM

thanks g..uppin

Skorn Iza · 05-08-2007, 07:51 PM

uppin........

Skorn Iza · 05-08-2007, 11:30 PM

uppin.............

T0M CH4MBERS · 05-09-2007, 12:23 AM

basically what menace said..........i believe it is time for you to invest some money.....

05-06-2007, 12:58 PM	#1
Skorn Iza Don Sheeba Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,136 Thanks: 180 Thanked 290 Times in 70 Posts	Phinali- Lyrical Commandments Phinali- Lyrical Commandments http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=5313886 yu kno dah bizznizz __________________

05-06-2007, 01:03 PM	#3
Skorn Iza Don Sheeba Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,136 Thanks: 180 Thanked 290 Times in 70 Posts	hehe..im just gettin' on ma grind..b4 those..i havent recorded in 2 weeks.. __________________

05-06-2007, 03:46 PM	#5
Skorn Iza Don Sheeba Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,136 Thanks: 180 Thanked 290 Times in 70 Posts	uppin..... __________________

05-06-2007, 08:02 PM	#6
Skorn Iza Don Sheeba Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,136 Thanks: 180 Thanked 290 Times in 70 Posts	uppin yu nigras __________________

05-06-2007, 10:50 PM	#10
Skorn Iza Don Sheeba Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,136 Thanks: 180 Thanked 290 Times in 70 Posts	thanks famz __________________

05-06-2007, 01:00 PM	#2
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Thanks: 74 Thanked 123 Times in 41 Posts	Damn Another So Soon Im Still Bangin Seperate Ways

05-06-2007, 01:05 PM	#4
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Thanks: 74 Thanked 123 Times in 41 Posts	Yo Im Feeling That Grind Keep Em Coming While I Check This One Out BTW I Read The Lyrics Already Got Those On Point Edit: Yo This Shit IS Craaaaaaaaazy Your Flow Is On Point, Beat Is Knock, Damn I Cant Even Say Anything Bad About It Just Keep This Up Wish I Could D/L It

05-06-2007, 08:29 PM	#7
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Thanks: 638 Thanked 375 Times in 112 Posts	you killin the shit hyphy, dope lyrics metas and everything, ya flow is just a lil too laid back, ya dig.....nice shit though 8.0/10

05-06-2007, 08:29 PM	#8
Apocalypse10 The Emperor Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 62 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts	This was much better then what I heard b4. Diggin this weird ass beat lol. U had a nice swagga on here and flow. Solid all around...only one small suggestion...on some words that u sound enounciate properly due to the way its worded or what not...on one of the doubles say only those words while going through and enounciate them clearly...itll make it sound better...besides that SOLID shit fam..

05-06-2007, 11:02 PM	#11
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,720 Thanks: 116 Thanked 37 Times in 15 Posts	i didnt like tha way u ended it, it was a hot line but i think u shouldve kept going or put a different line 2 close it...ur quality was wack, if u had good quality negros might actually think ur good...sum hot punches, good wordplay...good beat choice for YOU...decent flow

05-07-2007, 10:59 AM	#12
Skorn Iza Don Sheeba Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,136 Thanks: 180 Thanked 290 Times in 70 Posts	thanks g..uppin __________________

05-08-2007, 07:51 PM	#13
Skorn Iza Don Sheeba Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,136 Thanks: 180 Thanked 290 Times in 70 Posts	uppin........ __________________

05-08-2007, 11:30 PM	#14
Skorn Iza Don Sheeba Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,136 Thanks: 180 Thanked 290 Times in 70 Posts	uppin............. __________________

05-09-2007, 12:23 AM	#15
T0M CH4MBERS AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 9,228 Thanks: 72 Thanked 91 Times in 52 Posts	basically what menace said..........i believe it is time for you to invest some money..... __________________ myspace.com/t0mch4mbers....09 is mine

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