REAL SHIT! Teknikal

Teknikal · 06-24-2007, 11:35 PM

Whats good,

I'm working on my demo right now which will feature 5 brand new tracks, speakin that real shit.

This will be the first track on the demo. It lets the fans hear about how it was for me growing up (parents splitting up, living in foster care, etc)

The track is produced by THX, who worked with Snoop Dogg on his last album. He contacted me saying that he respected me as an artist and that if I ever needed any production to holla at him.

The quality is decent but not exactly the best. I'm just recording the tracks at home to get feedback from people and then once they are perfected I will be getting in the studio to record them again.

Check it out and let me know what you think!

www.myspace.com/teknikal45

I've stood here in this cold game for four years
And all it brought.. is more pain and more tears
Sometimes I wonder what the fuck I'ma do with my life
Since I was young, it was the music I liked
My family tried shapin up but.. found no form
Then I realized my father wasn't 'round no more
Couldn't swim but I was sent to the deep end
The split made me mad.. Dad? I only saw him on the weekend
Mom met someone new but he was a dick
I went to bed, heard.. screamin n shit.. Next morning, mom's beat up and hit
That fuckin faggot better creep from the kid
Cuzz I ain't scared to go to jail.. When I see him, that's it!
I'll NEVER forget it.. See, there was really a phase
I'd have guys comin over givin me video games
Talkin nice tryna give me all this "father" advice
It's like, "You ain't my fuckin dad, bitch.. Go swallow a knife!"

By this point, I pretty much lost my sanity
I felt like a disgrace.. when I was placed in a foster family
I'd always wake up thinkin, "Whose these people I'm livin with?"
The reason for bein there? I shouldn't even get into it
But.. To make a long story short.. I just had to get home
My fuckin mother left me stranded alone
Spencer's mom called the cops.. She had to but yo
All the stupid bitch had to do was get dad on the phone
See, my foster mom brought me to stores
And at the cash, I would ask "How come mommy doesn't want me no more?"
Drivin by grandma's, it tore me apart.. as a kid I would miss it
Always screamin.. "WHY can't we go for a visit?!"
Eventually custody was granted to dad
And I was happy with that.. Yeah, I was glad to be back
But would act as a brat, daddy met somebody new
So Pat would pass as an asshole for somethin to do

My sister, she was eyein her too
Lookin at her thinkin like, "You ain't our mom.. WHAT you tryna do?!"
But soon we realized we was two
Stupid ass kids.. Shit, she wasn't flyin the coup
Honestly, I wanted to hide from the truth
But if dad was diggin her, then shoot.. I'd survive with her too
I felt like I would never get through
My education.. I was facin another dilemma that grew
My dad would have to pull me to school
I was bullied in school.. The type of shit to bring a fully to school
But instead of sprayin uzis at dudes
I refused to be fooled, I kept moving not losing my cool
It's gloomy but true.. See, I done been through some shit
So when I'm pissed and think about it.. It's the pencil I grip
Pistols wouldn't change shit.. shootin person's who cussed
And tried to fight would only make life worse than it was

This shit, I kept it bottled inside deep down
It compelled me to frown.. that's why im tellin it now
It's helpin me out, I'm wordin it proud
And today.. I'm glad to say things are turnin around
Shit still ain't how I want, still ain't perfect and all
Shit, I still ain't graduated.. still ain't workin a job
Still ain't the next Nas and I still ain't as sick
But I gotta realize.. I'm still just a kid
I still got my friends.. Still leavin my girl
I'm still lookin for the one I wouldn't leave for the world
I still got my family.. Still got my health
I still got my music.. I still got my mouth
I still speak my mind.. I still murder words
Still kill the multies from verse to verse
I still rep my crew at the end of my rhymes
And I'ma STILL be the greatest, just gimme some time....

A.Money · 06-24-2007, 11:52 PM

damm son this track deep, i can tell u put heart into writin this. the beat wus hot tho too. ya flow wus pretty good but slipped like once or twice. otha then that solid track keep doin ya thing.
and return the favor
http://http://www.hhboard.com/showthread.php?t=232473

Teknikal · 06-25-2007, 12:12 AM

Thanks for checkin it, I will peep your shit asap.. uppin

Teknikal · 06-25-2007, 01:56 PM

Bump........

06-24-2007, 11:35 PM	#1
Teknikal The Franchize Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 240 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	REAL SHIT! Teknikal - My Life (Prod. by THX) REAL SHIT! Teknikal - My Life (Prod. by THX) Whats good, I'm working on my demo right now which will feature 5 brand new tracks, speakin that real shit. This will be the first track on the demo. It lets the fans hear about how it was for me growing up (parents splitting up, living in foster care, etc) The track is produced by THX, who worked with Snoop Dogg on his last album. He contacted me saying that he respected me as an artist and that if I ever needed any production to holla at him. The quality is decent but not exactly the best. I'm just recording the tracks at home to get feedback from people and then once they are perfected I will be getting in the studio to record them again. Check it out and let me know what you think! www.myspace.com/teknikal45 I've stood here in this cold game for four years And all it brought.. is more pain and more tears Sometimes I wonder what the fuck I'ma do with my life Since I was young, it was the music I liked My family tried shapin up but.. found no form Then I realized my father wasn't 'round no more Couldn't swim but I was sent to the deep end The split made me mad.. Dad? I only saw him on the weekend Mom met someone new but he was a dick I went to bed, heard.. screamin n shit.. Next morning, mom's beat up and hit That fuckin faggot better creep from the kid Cuzz I ain't scared to go to jail.. When I see him, that's it! I'll NEVER forget it.. See, there was really a phase I'd have guys comin over givin me video games Talkin nice tryna give me all this "father" advice It's like, "You ain't my fuckin dad, bitch.. Go swallow a knife!" By this point, I pretty much lost my sanity I felt like a disgrace.. when I was placed in a foster family I'd always wake up thinkin, "Whose these people I'm livin with?" The reason for bein there? I shouldn't even get into it But.. To make a long story short.. I just had to get home My fuckin mother left me stranded alone Spencer's mom called the cops.. She had to but yo All the stupid bitch had to do was get dad on the phone See, my foster mom brought me to stores And at the cash, I would ask "How come mommy doesn't want me no more?" Drivin by grandma's, it tore me apart.. as a kid I would miss it Always screamin.. "WHY can't we go for a visit?!" Eventually custody was granted to dad And I was happy with that.. Yeah, I was glad to be back But would act as a brat, daddy met somebody new So Pat would pass as an asshole for somethin to do My sister, she was eyein her too Lookin at her thinkin like, "You ain't our mom.. WHAT you tryna do?!" But soon we realized we was two Stupid ass kids.. Shit, she wasn't flyin the coup Honestly, I wanted to hide from the truth But if dad was diggin her, then shoot.. I'd survive with her too I felt like I would never get through My education.. I was facin another dilemma that grew My dad would have to pull me to school I was bullied in school.. The type of shit to bring a fully to school But instead of sprayin uzis at dudes I refused to be fooled, I kept moving not losing my cool It's gloomy but true.. See, I done been through some shit So when I'm pissed and think about it.. It's the pencil I grip Pistols wouldn't change shit.. shootin person's who cussed And tried to fight would only make life worse than it was This shit, I kept it bottled inside deep down It compelled me to frown.. that's why im tellin it now It's helpin me out, I'm wordin it proud And today.. I'm glad to say things are turnin around Shit still ain't how I want, still ain't perfect and all Shit, I still ain't graduated.. still ain't workin a job Still ain't the next Nas and I still ain't as sick But I gotta realize.. I'm still just a kid I still got my friends.. Still leavin my girl I'm still lookin for the one I wouldn't leave for the world I still got my family.. Still got my health I still got my music.. I still got my mouth I still speak my mind.. I still murder words Still kill the multies from verse to verse I still rep my crew at the end of my rhymes And I'ma STILL be the greatest, just gimme some time.... __________________ "The Franchize" - Hosted by DJ Smallz.. COMING SOON! TEKNIKAL45.COM MYSPACE.COM/TEKNIKAL45 SOUNDCLICK.COM/TEKNIKALT3

06-25-2007, 12:12 AM	#3
Teknikal The Franchize Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 240 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Thanks for checkin it, I will peep your shit asap.. uppin __________________ "The Franchize" - Hosted by DJ Smallz.. COMING SOON! TEKNIKAL45.COM MYSPACE.COM/TEKNIKAL45 SOUNDCLICK.COM/TEKNIKALT3

06-25-2007, 01:56 PM	#4
Teknikal The Franchize Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 240 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Bump........ __________________ "The Franchize" - Hosted by DJ Smallz.. COMING SOON! TEKNIKAL45.COM MYSPACE.COM/TEKNIKAL45 SOUNDCLICK.COM/TEKNIKALT3

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06-24-2007, 11:52 PM	#2
A.Money Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 2 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	damm son this track deep, i can tell u put heart into writin this. the beat wus hot tho too. ya flow wus pretty good but slipped like once or twice. otha then that solid track keep doin ya thing. and return the favor http://http://www.hhboard.com/showthread.php?t=232473