RockStarDon

killa_cam · 07-08-2007, 05:46 PM

Beat also Produced by myself,

What i did was, i took a Live Guitar Solo (played by John Frusciante of the Red Hot Chili Peppers.) and i played around with it, Looped it, added shit, and whatnot...and created an original beat.

then i laid my vocals on top, like any other track....

I tried to keep the major elements of my style intact while making the transition to audio, so you should be able to tell its a relentless verse.

....with that being said...Im new to this, so keep that in mind,

heres the track:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/2614782e2e0f84/

feedback is appreciated..

~Menace~ · 07-08-2007, 08:55 PM

for a first time @ audio it was decent...lyrics were good tho, n really thats wat matters...keep working on it n you'll be gettin better every drop fam...ur flow was good, work on ya delivery...

killa_cam · 07-09-2007, 02:25 AM

thanks bro

Yung MiZfit · 07-09-2007, 02:35 AM

Ya Lyricz Were Good....Multies Were Nice....Ya Flow Was Off A Bit At Times....Just Work On Ya Delivery And Flow And You'll Be Str8 But Good 1st Attempt...N Da Beat Iz Sick...Holla At Mah Shit "Who U Know"

Da Dynasty · 07-09-2007, 03:06 PM

JEAH! Killa That Was Nice Fam, Flow Off A Lil, U'll Get Better, nice beat

Smoke1Life · 07-09-2007, 03:11 PM

really good beat
the beat in itself makes this better

your flow was decent but better than some supposed "VetS"
kind of reminds me of common as far as lyrics and multies go and delivery.
and just how you piece your words together.

this was a really good first attempt at the game.
7/10
peep my hustlers amibtion remix wit gunitworld50

killa_cam · 07-09-2007, 03:25 PM

thanks everyone...

mizfit and smoke1...ill check out you drops later tonight.

!{THR!LLZ}! · 07-09-2007, 03:45 PM

Killa Cam Audio? ... Aha ... Ight Ya Flow Was Mos Def Off On Sum Points ... Beat Was Crzy ... Lyrics Were Good Just Put Together U Words Better Next Time ... Good Shit 4 Ya First Time On Da Real ... Don't Stop You'll Get Better ... I Believe Better Then Sum Dudes Here ... Keep It Up 'n' Peep My Tracks ... 32~1~

Kill Yourself · 07-09-2007, 07:31 PM

i got you with feed tonight...........

killa_cam · 07-10-2007, 02:45 AM

thanks NJ.

Kill Yourself · 07-10-2007, 02:59 AM

wasn't really too bad.....

decent lil beat........

flow was off........
you def have potential.......

Fabuless · 07-11-2007, 01:32 PM

beat i was really feelin, ima PM u later about samplin like that i never knew how to do it
flow was good sometimes, but off a lot
punches were good,
im guessin you used to text?...

my advice would be just work on floww

stay up

07-08-2007, 05:46 PM	#1
killa_cam Veteran Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 2,890 Thanks: 39 Thanked 8 Times in 4 Posts	RockStarDon RockStarDon Beat also Produced by myself, What i did was, i took a Live Guitar Solo (played by John Frusciante of the Red Hot Chili Peppers.) and i played around with it, Looped it, added shit, and whatnot...and created an original beat. then i laid my vocals on top, like any other track.... I tried to keep the major elements of my style intact while making the transition to audio, so you should be able to tell its a relentless verse. ....with that being said...Im new to this, so keep that in mind, heres the track: http://www.zshare.net/audio/2614782e2e0f84/ feedback is appreciated.. __________________ ghost Free Meta!

07-08-2007, 08:55 PM	#2
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,720 Thanks: 116 Thanked 37 Times in 15 Posts	for a first time @ audio it was decent...lyrics were good tho, n really thats wat matters...keep working on it n you'll be gettin better every drop fam...ur flow was good, work on ya delivery... __________________ William Shaftner

07-09-2007, 02:25 AM	#3
killa_cam Veteran Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 2,890 Thanks: 39 Thanked 8 Times in 4 Posts	thanks bro __________________ ghost Free Meta!

07-09-2007, 03:06 PM	#5
Da Dynasty Stop Learned Helplessness Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Mississippi Posts: 9,449 Thanks: 4,666 Thanked 856 Times in 224 Posts	JEAH! Killa That Was Nice Fam, Flow Off A Lil, U'll Get Better, nice beat __________________ June 26, 2009 = Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen 42 And Still Sexy

07-09-2007, 03:11 PM	#6
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,235 Thanks: 146 Thanked 113 Times in 51 Posts	really good beat the beat in itself makes this better your flow was decent but better than some supposed "VetS" kind of reminds me of common as far as lyrics and multies go and delivery. and just how you piece your words together. this was a really good first attempt at the game. 7/10 peep my hustlers amibtion remix wit gunitworld50 __________________

07-09-2007, 02:35 AM	#4
Yung MiZfit Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 273 Thanks: 0 Thanked 9 Times in 6 Posts	Ya Lyricz Were Good....Multies Were Nice....Ya Flow Was Off A Bit At Times....Just Work On Ya Delivery And Flow And You'll Be Str8 But Good 1st Attempt...N Da Beat Iz Sick...Holla At Mah Shit "Who U Know"

07-09-2007, 03:25 PM	#7
killa_cam Veteran Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 2,890 Thanks: 39 Thanked 8 Times in 4 Posts	thanks everyone... mizfit and smoke1...ill check out you drops later tonight. __________________ ghost Free Meta!

07-09-2007, 03:45 PM	#8
!{THR!LLZ}! {NJ}-W's 45~2 L's- Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: {CMD} -NJ- Posts: 3,711 Thanks: 13 Thanked 14 Times in 10 Posts	Killa Cam Audio? ... Aha ... Ight Ya Flow Was Mos Def Off On Sum Points ... Beat Was Crzy ... Lyrics Were Good Just Put Together U Words Better Next Time ... Good Shit 4 Ya First Time On Da Real ... Don't Stop You'll Get Better ... I Believe Better Then Sum Dudes Here ... Keep It Up 'n' Peep My Tracks ... 32~1~ __________________ {NJ THRILLA THE KILLA}{THRILLZ}{05-07} {SOLO KILL COUNT}{W'S 45 - 3 L'S}{{321}} {RHYME REF}{VET SLAYA}{G-WORLD'S MINE}

07-09-2007, 07:31 PM	#9
Kill Yourself Banned Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 87 Thanks: 2 Thanked 5 Times in 3 Posts	i got you with feed tonight...........

07-10-2007, 02:45 AM	#10
killa_cam Veteran Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Canada Posts: 2,890 Thanks: 39 Thanked 8 Times in 4 Posts	thanks NJ. __________________ ghost Free Meta!

07-10-2007, 02:59 AM	#11
Kill Yourself Banned Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 87 Thanks: 2 Thanked 5 Times in 3 Posts	wasn't really too bad..... decent lil beat........ flow was off........ you def have potential.......

07-11-2007, 01:32 PM	#12
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,283 Thanks: 2,379 Thanked 204 Times in 59 Posts	beat i was really feelin, ima PM u later about samplin like that i never knew how to do it flow was good sometimes, but off a lot punches were good, im guessin you used to text?... my advice would be just work on floww stay up __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

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