1st SINGLE- Smoke-Ft. Raezr,Kay Oh,Hookz,LaJIT

Fabuless · 08-15-2007, 03:43 PM

http://www.zshare.net/audio/3150740cbf3e03

Hook-Kay Oh
1st- Smoke
2nd- Raezr - added production to his own verse

3rd- Kay Oh
4th- Hookz
5th- LaJIT

Production By Me Of Course

props to raezr for mixing the verses

rep for feed here

by the way be on the lookout for the remix of this

Raezr Productions · 08-15-2007, 03:47 PM

*Doesnt See Any Props To For Mixing The Verses*

Fuck U Fag....But Nice Beat

*Looks Again and Doesnt See Anything About the Raezr adding production to the Beat*

Fuck U Fag

overall this is a dope track, good features

Em_Young · 08-15-2007, 03:54 PM

Wow, guess i didnt make the cut. Alright here is how it goes.

Hook is the classic dirty south repeating vocals...need some fix...well need alot of fix.
Verse first is ok had good delivery and good flow. Second verse is fire, Raezr kills it, plus a very good quality (tho i noticed punch ins....hate punch ins), on third verse we hear part of the hook being in the verse....not good, but its aight, delivery is ok, rhymes could be a bit better tho. Hookz epitomizes the Texas style on it, kinda reminds of Scarface flow. LaJIT keeps the same tune with a sing-songy flow. Pretty well done.

Generally the whole song sounds like being on some UGK record which is a good thing. Topic was ok. The only real problem is the quality difference of each person on the song.

Fabuless · 08-15-2007, 03:54 PM

^hahahaha @ Raezr
fuck u too man

re-read the post
u must be blind

uppin

props for the feed both of yall, em_young u gonna be on the remix seein as i was late getting ur verse

Smoke1Life · 08-15-2007, 03:59 PM

yeah im droppin a different verse for the Remix.

YALL COP THE ALBUM WHEN IT ARRIVES ALSO!!!!!!

Raezr Productions · 08-15-2007, 04:13 PM

I Feel betta now Fab

@ Em Young....lol u rite bout da punch ins, i usually dont do that...hmmm, o well

yung primo · 08-15-2007, 04:14 PM

fabuless wut up fam

Fabuless · 08-15-2007, 04:24 PM

^^whaddup man, ur verse gonna be on the remix as well

uppin for feed!!!

J-Deezy · 08-15-2007, 04:36 PM

Question... if diz iz ur 1st single, why u got so many ppl featured on it? Nonethaless, i'll get into tha feed while u answer tha question

1st: Verse waz nice. EQ it a bit better and it'll sound alot betta. Soundz kinda supressed... just a lil suppresed not too much. 8.5/10

2nd: Da modify to tha beat dont sound all dat good to be quite honest wit u. Lyricz>Ur modification if u want me to be on sum real shit and no dickrydin shit like deez message board lamez be on nowadayz. Other den dat, verse hard. 8/10

3rd: One long pause too many fam. I waznt really feelin dat shit bout ya verse but ya verse waz on point fam. 8/10

4th: At 1st when he came on... he sounded like Papoose i aint even gon front. 1 more verse 2 go but i think diz iz tha best verse on diz track so far. Real rap. 9/10

5th: Flow fell off already in tha beginnin but itz aight, u hopped right back on. Shouldve started out loud in tha beginnin too. Verse waz bangin 2. Aint touch Hookz but it waz hard. 8/10

A lil advice Smoke... neva let a feature outshine u on ur own track 1st and foremost if itz supposed to be ur single. And for ur 1st single, u wanna show u can hold ur own instead of havin a handful of featurez on it. Otha den dat, tha track rode out nice. I'll probably be on tha remix. Probably. 8.9/10

YUNG STIXX · 08-15-2007, 04:41 PM

This Shit Was Cool But Yall Shouldve Just Waited For My Verse

Raezr Productions · 08-15-2007, 04:42 PM

^propz mayn...i wanted to do somethin to it, and that was all i could do that sounded halfway decent on tha beat, so i left it

Fabuless · 08-15-2007, 04:43 PM

^^ u said youd have it to me but yesterday^^lol (@ STIXX)
but yo still get one done if u want cause the remix is gonna be pretty big

yung primo · 08-15-2007, 04:44 PM

my verse was off topic anyways

+.OckWurdz.+ · 08-15-2007, 05:16 PM

Pretty Dope Track Overall Im Agreein With J Deezy On The Feed

Damn Idk How Yall Got Hookz On This But Its Tight, He Got That Papoose Sound

Raezr Productions · 08-15-2007, 05:17 PM

Me & Hookz have worked together a couple times

Fabuless · 08-15-2007, 05:29 PM

yeah it wasnt hard getting hookz on this, i just holla'd at him and asked him to drop a verse..he did it ASAP,

uppin for feed!!

Phantastik · 08-15-2007, 06:34 PM

its a pretty sick track.. Hookz and LaJIT stood out as the best verses in the song.. not surprising.. but you need to get smoke to record his vocals wit betta sound quality, and it would be betta if u cut the time of the hook in half, good job tho kay oh. nice beat my yung apprentince aka fabuless ur improvin

Smoke1Life · 08-15-2007, 06:36 PM

Yo Thankx For The Advice J-Deezy .

The Next Single Should Be All Me and im tellin you its gon be fire .

Rebel INS {CF} · 08-15-2007, 06:45 PM

is this the great smoke1 i hear so much about ? oh, well THIS will be interesting ...

Rebel INS {CF} · 08-15-2007, 06:56 PM

christ that hook is incredibly annoying and i hate the beat

Hookz owned the whole track ... like completly, every asepct, flow, quality, lyrics (although Smoke wasnt far off him lyrically)

i was disappointed with Smoke, quiet a lot, i had the impression u were ment to be completly amazing ...

08-15-2007, 03:43 PM	#1
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,283 Thanks: 2,379 Thanked 204 Times in 59 Posts	1st SINGLE- Smoke-Ft. Raezr,Kay Oh,Hookz,LaJIT 1st SINGLE- Smoke-Ft. Raezr,Kay Oh,Hookz,LaJIT http://www.zshare.net/audio/3150740cbf3e03 Hook-Kay Oh 1st- Smoke 2nd- Raezr - added production to his own verse 3rd- Kay Oh 4th- Hookz 5th- LaJIT Production By Me Of Course props to raezr for mixing the verses rep for feed here by the way be on the lookout for the remix of this __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

08-15-2007, 03:54 PM	#4
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,283 Thanks: 2,379 Thanked 204 Times in 59 Posts	^hahahaha @ Raezr fuck u too man re-read the post u must be blind uppin props for the feed both of yall, em_young u gonna be on the remix seein as i was late getting ur verse __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

08-15-2007, 03:59 PM	#5
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,235 Thanks: 146 Thanked 113 Times in 51 Posts	yeah im droppin a different verse for the Remix. YALL COP THE ALBUM WHEN IT ARRIVES ALSO!!!!!! __________________

08-15-2007, 04:14 PM	#7
yung primo hoes like 2 feel my waves Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: yo mama crib Posts: 845 Thanks: 75 Thanked 209 Times in 92 Posts	fabuless wut up fam __________________ All I Ask Is That You Treat Me With Respect// And I Dont Want To Be Greeted Less You, You Greet Me With A Check - Yung Primo

08-15-2007, 04:24 PM	#8
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,283 Thanks: 2,379 Thanked 204 Times in 59 Posts	^^whaddup man, ur verse gonna be on the remix as well uppin for feed!!! __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

08-15-2007, 03:47 PM	#2
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Thanks: 164 Thanked 365 Times in 73 Posts	Doesnt See Any Props To For Mixing The Verses Fuck U Fag....But Nice Beat Looks Again and Doesnt See Anything About the Raezr adding production to the Beat Fuck U Fag overall this is a dope track, good features

08-15-2007, 03:54 PM	#3
Em_Young Syndicate Soldier Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 3,130 Thanks: 894 Thanked 146 Times in 24 Posts	Wow, guess i didnt make the cut. Alright here is how it goes. Hook is the classic dirty south repeating vocals...need some fix...well need alot of fix. Verse first is ok had good delivery and good flow. Second verse is fire, Raezr kills it, plus a very good quality (tho i noticed punch ins....hate punch ins), on third verse we hear part of the hook being in the verse....not good, but its aight, delivery is ok, rhymes could be a bit better tho. Hookz epitomizes the Texas style on it, kinda reminds of Scarface flow. LaJIT keeps the same tune with a sing-songy flow. Pretty well done. Generally the whole song sounds like being on some UGK record which is a good thing. Topic was ok. The only real problem is the quality difference of each person on the song.

08-15-2007, 04:13 PM	#6
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Thanks: 164 Thanked 365 Times in 73 Posts	I Feel betta now Fab @ Em Young....lol u rite bout da punch ins, i usually dont do that...hmmm, o well

08-15-2007, 04:36 PM	#9
J-Deezy A.K.A. Mr. 5k A Check Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Northside of tha Steel City Posts: 3,002 Thanks: 379 Thanked 815 Times in 177 Posts	Question... if diz iz ur 1st single, why u got so many ppl featured on it? Nonethaless, i'll get into tha feed while u answer tha question 1st: Verse waz nice. EQ it a bit better and it'll sound alot betta. Soundz kinda supressed... just a lil suppresed not too much. 8.5/10 2nd: Da modify to tha beat dont sound all dat good to be quite honest wit u. Lyricz>Ur modification if u want me to be on sum real shit and no dickrydin shit like deez message board lamez be on nowadayz. Other den dat, verse hard. 8/10 3rd: One long pause too many fam. I waznt really feelin dat shit bout ya verse but ya verse waz on point fam. 8/10 4th: At 1st when he came on... he sounded like Papoose i aint even gon front. 1 more verse 2 go but i think diz iz tha best verse on diz track so far. Real rap. 9/10 5th: Flow fell off already in tha beginnin but itz aight, u hopped right back on. Shouldve started out loud in tha beginnin too. Verse waz bangin 2. Aint touch Hookz but it waz hard. 8/10 A lil advice Smoke... neva let a feature outshine u on ur own track 1st and foremost if itz supposed to be ur single. And for ur 1st single, u wanna show u can hold ur own instead of havin a handful of featurez on it. Otha den dat, tha track rode out nice. I'll probably be on tha remix. Probably. 8.9/10 __________________ thadoaspot.blogspot.com < Updated 12/6.

08-15-2007, 04:41 PM	#10
YUNG STIXX R.I.P DRO Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: ON 166TH Posts: 1,912 Thanks: 196 Thanked 772 Times in 156 Posts	This Shit Was Cool But Yall Shouldve Just Waited For My Verse

08-15-2007, 04:42 PM	#11
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Thanks: 164 Thanked 365 Times in 73 Posts	^propz mayn...i wanted to do somethin to it, and that was all i could do that sounded halfway decent on tha beat, so i left it

08-15-2007, 04:43 PM	#12
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,283 Thanks: 2,379 Thanked 204 Times in 59 Posts	^^ u said youd have it to me but yesterday^^lol (@ STIXX) but yo still get one done if u want cause the remix is gonna be pretty big __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

08-15-2007, 04:44 PM	#13
yung primo hoes like 2 feel my waves Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: yo mama crib Posts: 845 Thanks: 75 Thanked 209 Times in 92 Posts	my verse was off topic anyways __________________ All I Ask Is That You Treat Me With Respect// And I Dont Want To Be Greeted Less You, You Greet Me With A Check - Yung Primo

08-15-2007, 05:16 PM	#14
+.OckWurdz.+ †ĸªy¤Ħ§! Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Michigan Posts: 967 Thanks: 55 Thanked 33 Times in 13 Posts	Pretty Dope Track Overall Im Agreein With J Deezy On The Feed Damn Idk How Yall Got Hookz On This But Its Tight, He Got That Papoose Sound __________________

08-15-2007, 05:17 PM	#15
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Thanks: 164 Thanked 365 Times in 73 Posts	Me & Hookz have worked together a couple times

08-15-2007, 06:45 PM	#19
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 10,657 Thanks: 148 Thanked 416 Times in 169 Posts	is this the great smoke1 i hear so much about ? oh, well THIS will be interesting ... __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

08-15-2007, 05:29 PM	#16
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,283 Thanks: 2,379 Thanked 204 Times in 59 Posts	yeah it wasnt hard getting hookz on this, i just holla'd at him and asked him to drop a verse..he did it ASAP, uppin for feed!! __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

08-15-2007, 06:34 PM	#17
Phantastik Beat Specialist Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Oregon Posts: 1,058 Thanks: 495 Thanked 84 Times in 17 Posts	its a pretty sick track.. Hookz and LaJIT stood out as the best verses in the song.. not surprising.. but you need to get smoke to record his vocals wit betta sound quality, and it would be betta if u cut the time of the hook in half, good job tho kay oh. nice beat my yung apprentince aka fabuless ur improvin __________________ Need HOT beats? get at meh: Myspace.com/tastik Soundclick.com/PhantastikProductions

08-15-2007, 06:36 PM	#18
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,235 Thanks: 146 Thanked 113 Times in 51 Posts	Yo Thankx For The Advice J-Deezy . The Next Single Should Be All Me and im tellin you its gon be fire . __________________

08-15-2007, 06:56 PM	#20
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 10,657 Thanks: 148 Thanked 416 Times in 169 Posts	christ that hook is incredibly annoying and i hate the beat Hookz owned the whole track ... like completly, every asepct, flow, quality, lyrics (although Smoke wasnt far off him lyrically) i was disappointed with Smoke, quiet a lot, i had the impression u were ment to be completly amazing ... __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

08-15-2007, 06:57 PM	#21
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