Kid Jay_The Real (Preview)

Not an account · 08-20-2007, 10:53 PM

i been aint been puttin out songs..i been betterin my music, lyrics wise, flow

And shiT

heres a preview of a new song i got..imma have my nigga from over here hop on It Today..so ill drop the Whole shit Soon..i was goin FOr a Whip Music Type shit feel me?

http://www.zshare.net/audio/3237388e3884e5/

Leave any feed you want

Not an account · 08-20-2007, 11:13 PM

bump............

Not an account · 08-20-2007, 11:53 PM

.........................

LA-Kid · 08-21-2007, 02:04 AM

Use Some Original Beatz, Get on Ya Grind n Find Sum Producers in Ya City Ya Dig? But Jea, Lyrics was Iight Keep Workin ya Kno.. and Practice Mixin ya Trax, it Sounds Like its Comin in 2 Separate voices from each speaker n Ish, Try n Center It, But Jea, Shud b a Coo Lil Track.

I Seen Niggas Gettin all Emotional Ova ma Opinions, But they To Help.. So Jea.. Holla

Its Poynt Blank

PresideNt Jay · 08-21-2007, 01:37 PM

Good shiT My Nigga...But whith this beaT, this aiNt for whips

Rebel INS {CF} · 08-21-2007, 05:14 PM

lookin forward to the final product ! liked that a lot man, seen guys in chat complaing about the flow, dont sweat it shunnnn its very fitting

Joe E ButtaGunz · 08-21-2007, 05:33 PM

Sup Fam,

This was cool. Your lyrics was acceptable, your voice was in comparison to Pac's & not because of the beat. Just the way you stressed your words. I would say work on mixing (ALOT), & bring alittle bit more feeling into it. You sounded kind of tired or sleepy.

Also, I'm really just getting tired of gangsta rap anyways...so my attention of wanting to here it is real low. There's alot more shit going on in life besides Guns, Drugs, Hoes, & Gangs. SO from now on I'm looking for creative style.

Fam, theres so many gangsta rappers out there 95% fake gangstas anyway. YOU have to set yourself apart from them to get known. What can you bring to the table these guys haven't. And I don't mean talk about the same shit & just better lyrically...I mean taking that shit to another level. Because its at a stand still & not selling.

Just my professional advice to you.

Rank: 7/10

P.S. Grab some different beats or get some originals.

Stay Up

YounG SnappeR · 08-21-2007, 08:23 PM

this aint a whip beat. this is the beat niggas is lisenin too when they on tht deep shit. voice sounds kinda.... not rite.

Cool Kid · 08-21-2007, 08:44 PM

i almost turned it off before it started, dont ever let a beat rock for more than ten seconds

your shit wasnt exactly wack but like buttagunz said that fake ass wannabe thug style is cheesy like velveeta

if you came at it with different concepts you could have some pretty dope shit

Not an account · 08-21-2007, 08:54 PM

I read every ones Review

and honestly ...i aint on no fake Thug shit i swear to u that, i have it girmey cause ppl that know me Would know that suits me

plus i Made This cause i want my og Homies gang Bumpin This

But yeah thanks yall

T0M CH4MBERS · 08-21-2007, 11:02 PM

basically what everyone else said.....(except LA kid becuz i don't really mind mic quality too much)

lyrically it was average..........but the concepts was too.........."used"
beat is nice....but you waited far too long to start spitting.......

overall 7/10

LA-Kid · 08-22-2007, 01:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RaiSur

basically what everyone else said.....(except LA kid becuz i don't really mind mic quality too much)

lyrically it was average..........but the concepts was too.........."used"
beat is nice....but you waited far too long to start spitting.......

overall 7/10

Lmao @ Not Mindin Mic Quality

T0M CH4MBERS · 08-22-2007, 02:24 AM

....well if i hear what some1's saying.....then i'm straight...........................

maybe it's becuz i have "bad quality"....but it seems like people are being judged more on their mic quality then lyrics and flow...................just my opinion tho............

Not an account · 08-22-2007, 12:29 PM

Shit i know this Song is dope ........... just the mixing needs help..whihc i am fixing...this song if def for a Gangsta whip type shit

i know ppl can be entertained bY it......

THANK U ALOT ON ALL THE REVIEWS.......

Smoke1Life · 08-22-2007, 01:13 PM

i think this would be alot better if you had it on a original beat.

all that i ever hear from you is used beats.

lyrics were decent.
flow was pretty good.

it sounds like you changed your voice on this in comparison to your other shit.

and your mic quality isnt as good as it used to be.

6/10

Not an account · 08-22-2007, 01:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Smoke1Life

i think this would be alot better if you had it on a original beat.

all that i ever hear from you is used beats.

lyrics were decent.
flow was pretty good.

it sounds like you changed your voice on this in comparison to your other shit.

and your mic quality isnt as good as it used to be.

6/10

Props./...................... BUT THIS IS A PREVIEW...I HAVE TO STILL EDIT AND MIX THE VOCALS RIGHT.......THIS SONG IS DOPE..YALL JUST HURD THE EAT ALOT..WAIT TILL THE REAL VERSION COMES OUT...MY NEST JOINT/FLOW/ENTERTAININ SHIT\

PROPSSSSSSSSSSSSS FOR LISTING BROO

Smoke1Life · 08-23-2007, 08:10 AM

yeah i was just thinking that yesterdya that seeing as to how it was a preview you probably werent done mixing it.

Just show the final product when its released homie.

08-20-2007, 10:53 PM	#1
Not an account Check the locs....U MAD?? Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 587 Thanks: 258 Thanked 61 Times in 25 Posts	Kid Jay_The Real (Preview) Kid Jay_The Real (Preview) i been aint been puttin out songs..i been betterin my music, lyrics wise, flow And shiT heres a preview of a new song i got..imma have my nigga from over here hop on It Today..so ill drop the Whole shit Soon..i was goin FOr a Whip Music Type shit feel me? http://www.zshare.net/audio/3237388e3884e5/ Leave any feed you want __________________ Fuck your hood...........

08-20-2007, 11:13 PM	#2
Not an account Check the locs....U MAD?? Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 587 Thanks: 258 Thanked 61 Times in 25 Posts	bump............ __________________ Fuck your hood...........

08-20-2007, 11:53 PM	#3
Not an account Check the locs....U MAD?? Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 587 Thanks: 258 Thanked 61 Times in 25 Posts	......................... __________________ Fuck your hood...........

08-21-2007, 01:37 PM	#5
PresideNt Jay "The GOD Is BacK" Join Date: May 2006 Location: Your Mothers Bed... Posts: 1,306 Thanks: 59 Thanked 505 Times in 165 Posts	Good shiT My Nigga...But whith this beaT, this aiNt for whips __________________

08-21-2007, 05:14 PM	#6
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 10,658 Thanks: 148 Thanked 416 Times in 169 Posts	lookin forward to the final product ! liked that a lot man, seen guys in chat complaing about the flow, dont sweat it shunnnn its very fitting __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

08-21-2007, 02:04 AM	#4
LA-Kid POYNT BLANK Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: LA Posts: 5,372 Thanks: 7 Thanked 10 Times in 4 Posts	Use Some Original Beatz, Get on Ya Grind n Find Sum Producers in Ya City Ya Dig? But Jea, Lyrics was Iight Keep Workin ya Kno.. and Practice Mixin ya Trax, it Sounds Like its Comin in 2 Separate voices from each speaker n Ish, Try n Center It, But Jea, Shud b a Coo Lil Track. I Seen Niggas Gettin all Emotional Ova ma Opinions, But they To Help.. So Jea.. Holla Its Poynt Blank

08-21-2007, 05:33 PM	#7
Joe E ButtaGunz THE SON OF HIP HOP! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: St. Louis, Missouri Posts: 329 Thanks: 62 Thanked 38 Times in 18 Posts	Sup Fam, This was cool. Your lyrics was acceptable, your voice was in comparison to Pac's & not because of the beat. Just the way you stressed your words. I would say work on mixing (ALOT), & bring alittle bit more feeling into it. You sounded kind of tired or sleepy. Also, I'm really just getting tired of gangsta rap anyways...so my attention of wanting to here it is real low. There's alot more shit going on in life besides Guns, Drugs, Hoes, & Gangs. SO from now on I'm looking for creative style. Fam, theres so many gangsta rappers out there 95% fake gangstas anyway. YOU have to set yourself apart from them to get known. What can you bring to the table these guys haven't. And I don't mean talk about the same shit & just better lyrically...I mean taking that shit to another level. Because its at a stand still & not selling. Just my professional advice to you. Rank: 7/10 P.S. Grab some different beats or get some originals. Stay Up

08-21-2007, 08:23 PM	#8
YounG SnappeR ◆Ⅴ◆ ®ㅌSㅇㄴU┳ⅰㅁㄲ ◆⑤◆ Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: .▲/England.▲™\ Posts: 3,727 Thanks: 1,402 Thanked 406 Times in 113 Posts	this aint a whip beat. this is the beat niggas is lisenin too when they on tht deep shit. voice sounds kinda.... not rite.

08-21-2007, 08:44 PM	#9
Cool Kid Banned Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: The Freezer Posts: 201 Thanks: 69 Thanked 26 Times in 10 Posts	i almost turned it off before it started, dont ever let a beat rock for more than ten seconds your shit wasnt exactly wack but like buttagunz said that fake ass wannabe thug style is cheesy like velveeta if you came at it with different concepts you could have some pretty dope shit

08-21-2007, 08:54 PM	#10
Not an account Check the locs....U MAD?? Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 587 Thanks: 258 Thanked 61 Times in 25 Posts	I read every ones Review and honestly ...i aint on no fake Thug shit i swear to u that, i have it girmey cause ppl that know me Would know that suits me plus i Made This cause i want my og Homies gang Bumpin This But yeah thanks yall __________________ Fuck your hood...........

08-21-2007, 11:02 PM	#11
T0M CH4MBERS AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 9,229 Thanks: 72 Thanked 91 Times in 52 Posts	basically what everyone else said.....(except LA kid becuz i don't really mind mic quality too much) lyrically it was average..........but the concepts was too.........."used" beat is nice....but you waited far too long to start spitting....... overall 7/10 __________________ myspace.com/t0mch4mbers....09 is mine

08-22-2007, 02:24 AM	#13
T0M CH4MBERS AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 9,229 Thanks: 72 Thanked 91 Times in 52 Posts	....well if i hear what some1's saying.....then i'm straight........................... maybe it's becuz i have "bad quality"....but it seems like people are being judged more on their mic quality then lyrics and flow...................just my opinion tho............ __________________ myspace.com/t0mch4mbers....09 is mine

08-22-2007, 12:29 PM	#14
Not an account Check the locs....U MAD?? Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 587 Thanks: 258 Thanked 61 Times in 25 Posts	Shit i know this Song is dope ........... just the mixing needs help..whihc i am fixing...this song if def for a Gangsta whip type shit i know ppl can be entertained bY it...... THANK U ALOT ON ALL THE REVIEWS....... __________________ Fuck your hood...........

08-22-2007, 01:13 PM	#15
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,235 Thanks: 146 Thanked 113 Times in 51 Posts	i think this would be alot better if you had it on a original beat. all that i ever hear from you is used beats. lyrics were decent. flow was pretty good. it sounds like you changed your voice on this in comparison to your other shit. and your mic quality isnt as good as it used to be. 6/10 __________________

08-23-2007, 08:10 AM	#17
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,235 Thanks: 146 Thanked 113 Times in 51 Posts	yeah i was just thinking that yesterdya that seeing as to how it was a preview you probably werent done mixing it. Just show the final product when its released homie. __________________

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode