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Old 08-24-2007, 09:48 AM   #1
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Worken on my mixtape (2nd tape)
I learned alot my 1st time around
Heres my track i got da 1st Verse(rough draft on song)
get an umbrella fenna make it rain.mp3 - 3.44MB
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Old 08-24-2007, 12:41 PM   #2
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Hook Was Iigh, Down South Track I Can Tell
The Beat Is Pretty Tight
Iigh Fam, Your Mic Presence Isnt There At All, I Feel Like Ur Jus Readin Ur Lyrics Off The Paper, Flow Was Shakey. Have More Confidence And Sum More Energy.

Rae-Flow Was On Point, Sum Nice Punches In There.Lyrics Were Good

3rd Verse-Or W/e It Was, Sounds Like U Said Hat Trick Bout 3 Times In One Bar

Jus Fix The 1st Verse And U Got A Solid Track
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Old 08-24-2007, 05:41 PM   #3
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Hook Was Iigh, Down South Track I Can Tell
The Beat Is Pretty Tight
Iigh Fam, Your Mic Presence Isnt There At All, I Feel Like Ur Jus Readin Ur Lyrics Off The Paper, Flow Was Shakey. Have More Confidence And Sum More Energy.

Rae-Flow Was On Point, Sum Nice Punches In There.Lyrics Were Good

3rd Verse-Or W/e It Was, Sounds Like U Said Hat Trick Bout 3 Times In One Bar

Jus Fix The 1st Verse And U Got A Solid Track
its a ruff draft thats why
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Old 08-24-2007, 05:48 PM   #4
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Old 08-24-2007, 06:42 PM   #5
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All I got to say is "STAY ON BEAT". This just sounded like you was rapping to a totally different track, & then just copied/pasted it on to this beat. I'm not going to rate this. For your benefit & mine.

Keep Trying
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Old 08-26-2007, 04:47 PM   #6
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u mixed ma acapella wrong...fucked up ma flow...damn you
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^ okay man....ill post up the version that i recorded
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