'Feeling Real Good' New Track, Looking For Feedback

Blue-Da-Vinci · 11-05-2007, 06:32 PM

Ano im not very good so before youse hate id just like to admit it lol, but yea iv upped this to see what people think, id rather no1 hates n jus gives critical feedback n shit but eh well. N can any1 help me get the best audio sound cos ma audio always sounds wierd compared to the others on this site, not just meaning voice, i mean like volume/equality

http://www.zshare.net/audio/4696293d045c1e/

Oh & Beat's Old plus ma mic is utter shite

NOTE-The reason for the wierd voice is because of the line just before it saying what the demons say to me haha

Blue-Da-Vinci · 11-06-2007, 12:31 PM

No Feedback? cmon im jus lookin for sum help n shit

Rebel INS {CF} · 11-06-2007, 01:35 PM

ur a hell of a lot better than i expected with ur little speech, lol, not bad at all, lyrics need a fair bit of work but over all u seem to know what ur doin flow wise although it does fall off a bit half way thru or so :\

Blue-Da-Vinci · 11-06-2007, 02:55 PM

thnks mate(Y) repped for not bein a hater lol

Da-Link-Went · 11-06-2007, 03:16 PM

yeh ur not bad u just need to get ur quality sounding better, ur vocals are too low and u cud do with a pop filter n ting.. apart from that flows not bad at all and ur lyrics are straight to the point.. nothing to crit about ur lyrics cos u stayed on point. just keep it up man the more u do this the more u get better.

Blue-Da-Vinci · 11-07-2007, 01:47 PM

thnks man repped also

Tha Truth · 11-07-2007, 06:43 PM

this was good just work ya lyrics and make ur vocals a little louder

Blue-Da-Vinci · 11-09-2007, 11:54 AM

thnks for the feed

11-05-2007, 06:32 PM	#1
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Thanks: 434 Thanked 552 Times in 59 Posts	'Feeling Real Good' New Track, Looking For Feedback 'Feeling Real Good' New Track, Looking For Feedback Ano im not very good so before youse hate id just like to admit it lol, but yea iv upped this to see what people think, id rather no1 hates n jus gives critical feedback n shit but eh well. N can any1 help me get the best audio sound cos ma audio always sounds wierd compared to the others on this site, not just meaning voice, i mean like volume/equality http://www.zshare.net/audio/4696293d045c1e/ Oh & Beat's Old plus ma mic is utter shite NOTE-The reason for the wierd voice is because of the line just before it saying what the demons say to me haha

11-06-2007, 01:35 PM	#3
Rebel INS {CF} - iLLuminati ~ Rapsody - Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Ireland Posts: 10,658 Thanks: 148 Thanked 416 Times in 169 Posts	ur a hell of a lot better than i expected with ur little speech, lol, not bad at all, lyrics need a fair bit of work but over all u seem to know what ur doin flow wise although it does fall off a bit half way thru or so :\ __________________ "Fighting Ignorance every day is gettin weary" [name pending] --- The Gateway Drug --- Sometime Soon --- myspace.com/namepending08

11-06-2007, 03:16 PM	#5
Da-Link-Went Im dat shit Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 908 Thanks: 201 Thanked 34 Times in 13 Posts	yeh ur not bad u just need to get ur quality sounding better, ur vocals are too low and u cud do with a pop filter n ting.. apart from that flows not bad at all and ur lyrics are straight to the point.. nothing to crit about ur lyrics cos u stayed on point. just keep it up man the more u do this the more u get better. __________________ take some time to check out rhyme4reason.tk

11-07-2007, 06:43 PM	#7
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,208 Thanks: 671 Thanked 1,045 Times in 251 Posts	this was good just work ya lyrics and make ur vocals a little louder __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

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11-06-2007, 12:31 PM	#2
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Thanks: 434 Thanked 552 Times in 59 Posts	No Feedback? cmon im jus lookin for sum help n shit

11-06-2007, 02:55 PM	#4
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Thanks: 434 Thanked 552 Times in 59 Posts	thnks mate(Y) repped for not bein a hater lol

11-07-2007, 01:47 PM	#6
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Thanks: 434 Thanked 552 Times in 59 Posts	thnks man repped also

11-09-2007, 11:54 AM	#8
Blue-Da-Vinci New Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Everywhere Posts: 1,344 Thanks: 434 Thanked 552 Times in 59 Posts	thnks for the feed