07/17/08 - fuck life O8- RICHLOC

RICH$LOCO · 07-18-2008, 01:42 AM

13.fuck life o8.mp3 - 3.41MB

leave feed good or bad any would be appreciated

gunit 101 · 07-18-2008, 02:03 AM

ayo fam this was good my nigga keep dropin heat lyke this

RICH$LOCO · 07-18-2008, 08:39 AM

^aight thanks fam

keece · 07-18-2008, 06:47 PM

this a aiiight track my nigg u sound clear the flow was aight the hook was aight lyrics were str8.its a aight song

Smoke1Life · 07-18-2008, 06:54 PM

i'll drop feed in a little bit, hows your verse for our collab going?

Smoke1Life · 07-18-2008, 07:20 PM

Hook- Lyrics are nice but need to find someone else to do it. it just sounds pathetic.
Verse 1- good shit. lyrics are solid along with your flow. needs more emotion though. thats the only thing this is really lackin. its easy to tell your just reading the shit. spit it like ya mean it man.
Verse 2- once again, shits solid but lacks emotion. I like how you switch the flow up a little bit here and there. good shit yo.

RICH$LOCO · 07-18-2008, 07:58 PM

Thanks for the feed homie
oh and i had already recorded it but my pc broke down n i barely fixed it so whenever i get the chance to re recod it ima do so but i wanna go to the studio for it ill let u know

Raezr Productions · 07-18-2008, 08:48 PM

hmm...id say that the hook needs work, maybe get a singer to do it

on the first verse, maybe change the flow up a lil bit. and it sounds like ur readin off the paper. mooore emotion. work on that

second verse, i dunno, it jus seemed like the flow was off at certain points. but still, same shit as the first verse...emotion, emotion, emotion

its alrite

RICH$LOCO · 07-18-2008, 09:16 PM

thanks bruh

RICH$LOCO · 07-20-2008, 03:52 PM

bump..............

B-fresh · 08-02-2008, 09:19 AM

verses r nice but the hook could have been done by someone else apart from tht its nice

RICH$LOCO · 08-02-2008, 07:52 PM

thanks for feedin haha ^

07-18-2008, 01:42 AM	#1
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 1,781 Thanks: 592 Thanked 485 Times in 81 Posts	07/17/08 - fuck life O8- RICHLOC 07/17/08 - fuck life O8- RICHLOC 13.fuck life o8.mp3 - 3.41MB leave feed good or bad any would be appreciated __________________

07-18-2008, 08:39 AM	#3
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 1,781 Thanks: 592 Thanked 485 Times in 81 Posts	^aight thanks fam __________________

07-18-2008, 06:54 PM	#5
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,218 Thanks: 145 Thanked 112 Times in 50 Posts	i'll drop feed in a little bit, hows your verse for our collab going? __________________

07-18-2008, 07:20 PM	#6
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,218 Thanks: 145 Thanked 112 Times in 50 Posts	Hook- Lyrics are nice but need to find someone else to do it. it just sounds pathetic. Verse 1- good shit. lyrics are solid along with your flow. needs more emotion though. thats the only thing this is really lackin. its easy to tell your just reading the shit. spit it like ya mean it man. Verse 2- once again, shits solid but lacks emotion. I like how you switch the flow up a little bit here and there. good shit yo. __________________

07-18-2008, 07:58 PM	#7
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 1,781 Thanks: 592 Thanked 485 Times in 81 Posts	Thanks for the feed homie oh and i had already recorded it but my pc broke down n i barely fixed it so whenever i get the chance to re recod it ima do so but i wanna go to the studio for it ill let u know __________________

07-18-2008, 02:03 AM	#2
gunit 101 Banned Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: South Posts: 125 Thanks: 0 Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts	ayo fam this was good my nigga keep dropin heat lyke this

07-18-2008, 06:47 PM	#4
keece "Real Recognize Real" Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: GBoro Posts: 1,368 Thanks: 133 Thanked 214 Times in 25 Posts	this a aiiight track my nigg u sound clear the flow was aight the hook was aight lyrics were str8.its a aight song

07-18-2008, 08:48 PM	#8
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Thanks: 164 Thanked 365 Times in 73 Posts	hmm...id say that the hook needs work, maybe get a singer to do it on the first verse, maybe change the flow up a lil bit. and it sounds like ur readin off the paper. mooore emotion. work on that second verse, i dunno, it jus seemed like the flow was off at certain points. but still, same shit as the first verse...emotion, emotion, emotion its alrite

07-18-2008, 09:16 PM	#9
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 1,781 Thanks: 592 Thanked 485 Times in 81 Posts	thanks bruh __________________

07-20-2008, 03:52 PM	#10
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 1,781 Thanks: 592 Thanked 485 Times in 81 Posts	bump.............. __________________

08-02-2008, 09:19 AM	#11
B-fresh Rhyme Crazy ENT. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Hyattsville MD HVC in dis bytch Posts: 444 Thanks: 92 Thanked 415 Times in 41 Posts	verses r nice but the hook could have been done by someone else apart from tht its nice __________________ MIXTAPE WARRIORS AMBITION FROM B-FRESH DROPPING AUGUST 25TH

08-02-2008, 07:52 PM	#12
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 1,781 Thanks: 592 Thanked 485 Times in 81 Posts	thanks for feedin haha ^ __________________

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