07/21/08 - Fabuless Ft. Smoke - We're Done With'em - my 1st track

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Old 07-21-2008, 11:11 AM   #1
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07/21/08 - Fabuless Ft. Smoke - We're Done With'em - my 1st track

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k so its smoke first, then the first verse i ever did, haha
i know its not the best, and my quality is ass but im lookin for some advice
how to up my quality game and flow

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Old 07-21-2008, 11:19 AM   #2
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Werd, It's All Good, I'm Still Tryna Get The Feel For This Audio Shit Too.

Smoke-Straight Killed It. On Everything.

Fab-Quality Really Held It Back, Your Flow Is Actually Decent..

It's All With The Mixing Fam, What Program You Use?

Beat Was Hard As Fuck Though.
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Old 07-21-2008, 12:17 PM   #3
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^ k this is the thing messed up bout my quality
my computer makes a hissin noise lous as fuck and u can hear it in my mic, so i use hiss reduction, and then it makes it sound like my voice is bein held back, i unno what to do

i use cool edit pro 2.0 btw

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Old 07-21-2008, 12:28 PM   #4
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hmm..... im not sure what the hissing noise is about.
you using a computer mic?, if so thats why.
but your flow was pretty solid in this track. lyrics could use a little work but the big thing was the emotion and quality.
you gotta say shit like you mean it in tracks, i can't stress how important that is.
and like i told you in the pm, just up your quality.
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Old 07-21-2008, 12:32 PM   #5
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props smoke
ima get a new mic within the next few days, see what happens
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Yo Fab, When You Have Spare Time, Record A Verse And Experiment With The Mixing/effects..And Getta A Feel For It All...Ya Know?
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Old 07-21-2008, 01:17 PM   #7
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^^ yeah i know what u mean, the program i got has a lot of different mixing effects,
wanna collab on something man?
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wasnt this beat already used though nice verse smoke but the other guys lyrics wasnt up to par but the beat is bangin 1
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Old 07-21-2008, 08:30 PM   #9
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smoke killed it....no complaints here


your shit..

if your using a condensor...and hooking up through phantom power then to the computer.....thats the problem...you need something like a mixer or audio interface that sets the sound floor.......

if your using a computer mic i dunno.......

mixing wise.....
try
compression>EQ>echo/reverb>EQ again....mixdown.......


as far as the rapping shit...it'll come...your flow was decent.........everything else was kinda below average....keep droppin tho
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smoke did his thang on this 4 real fab brought it but like they said quality brought it down but keep droppin yall keep at it holla
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Old 07-22-2008, 12:40 PM   #11
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k, so for my mic im using a digital camera haha
but i am using hiss reduction on cep 2 so it makes it seem like the quality is lower
ima write a 16 a drop 2 versions of it, one with using the hiss reduction and one without
just to see which yall think is better

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this shit aint bad my nigga yo flow is iight just need the quailty up and it'll be all good propzz
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^^ yeah i know what u mean, the program i got has a lot of different mixing effects,
wanna collab on something man?
Werd^^ Anytime Fam..Hit Me Up On AIM. . GzUp23..
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