07/23/08 - Fabuless

Fabuless · 07-23-2008, 12:30 PM

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1582196954dbd87d/

my 2nd rap track,
its about someone living the good life, but actually being torn up inside because its not as good as it seems

listen and leave feed

Smoke1Life · 07-23-2008, 12:46 PM

Yo, did you make this beat dude?

Your lyrics aren't bad on this shit at all. you got a good natural flow just from being a producer for so long and shit. but lyrically, you just got to work on adding some complexity to your rhymes and shit.
just up your quality and shit and you will be doing good. its kind of like how i used to be and i know you know what im talkin about Fab. lol.

Fabuless · 07-23-2008, 01:00 PM

^^ yeah i know what u talkin about
and no man this beat is superstar by lupe fiasco

thanks for the feed man, and yeah i know my flow is ok
but ima try steppin up my lyrics and quality asap, but its hard just startin out u know

uppin for feed

Fabuless · 07-23-2008, 04:01 PM

uppin................

RICH$LOCO · 07-23-2008, 08:28 PM

i cant really tell its too short but the lyrics is good just need more emotion and a lil work on the flow and the quality doesnt really mater cuz everyone starts somewhere but if u do improve it it makes u sound that much more pro work on that homie n if u down to collab hit me up or whatever

*Pistol Banger* · 07-23-2008, 08:34 PM

Fab.. You Want Help On Mixing, Props To Chambers For Helping Me.

You Got Aim/MSN?

Fabuless · 07-23-2008, 10:08 PM

^^ k props to rich loco
and yeah pistol banger i got msn
AIM
DillonJFabuless

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 07-25-2008, 12:58 PM

no dissin u or anybody when i say this

but fuck ur lyrics for right now homie

if u work on that more than anything.....u just gon be a writer...thats aint, nothing else...just words on a piece of paper....if u cant come correct wit that....that's wat u just gon be...a nigga wit alot of raps in his pen and pad.....

work on ur flow/emotion/delivery tha most....make niggas feel were u comin from when u on tha mic dog, just dont sound borin n like u readin....

after u think u got dat good...then work on ur lyrics more dog....

this your second drop, keep at it....if u feel like u cant get better....just stay makin beats..

stay up thou nigga...

07-23-2008, 12:30 PM	#1
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,283 Thanks: 2,379 Thanked 204 Times in 59 Posts	07/23/08 - Fabuless - Superstar 07/23/08 - Fabuless - Superstar http://www.zshare.net/audio/1582196954dbd87d/ my 2nd rap track, its about someone living the good life, but actually being torn up inside because its not as good as it seems listen and leave feed __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

07-23-2008, 12:46 PM	#2
Smoke1Life FUCK'EM ALL Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,220 Thanks: 145 Thanked 113 Times in 51 Posts	Yo, did you make this beat dude? Your lyrics aren't bad on this shit at all. you got a good natural flow just from being a producer for so long and shit. but lyrically, you just got to work on adding some complexity to your rhymes and shit. just up your quality and shit and you will be doing good. its kind of like how i used to be and i know you know what im talkin about Fab. lol. __________________

07-23-2008, 01:00 PM	#3
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,283 Thanks: 2,379 Thanked 204 Times in 59 Posts	^^ yeah i know what u talkin about and no man this beat is superstar by lupe fiasco thanks for the feed man, and yeah i know my flow is ok but ima try steppin up my lyrics and quality asap, but its hard just startin out u know uppin for feed __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

07-23-2008, 04:01 PM	#4
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,283 Thanks: 2,379 Thanked 204 Times in 59 Posts	uppin................ __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

07-23-2008, 08:28 PM	#5
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 1,806 Thanks: 599 Thanked 485 Times in 81 Posts	i cant really tell its too short but the lyrics is good just need more emotion and a lil work on the flow and the quality doesnt really mater cuz everyone starts somewhere but if u do improve it it makes u sound that much more pro work on that homie n if u down to collab hit me up or whatever __________________

07-23-2008, 08:34 PM	#6
Pistol Banger --MaSteRMiNdiN-- Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 3,919 Thanks: 69 Thanked 173 Times in 49 Posts	Fab.. You Want Help On Mixing, Props To Chambers For Helping Me. You Got Aim/MSN? __________________ \|-\|I'm StiLL FoReVeR UnDeFeaTeD\|-\| S.P.A.M. --------------------------------------------------- /-\|\|-\Myspace.com/Pbthemastermind/-\|\|-\ ---------------------------------------------------

07-23-2008, 10:08 PM	#7
Fabuless Producer Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Toronto Posts: 5,283 Thanks: 2,379 Thanked 204 Times in 59 Posts	^^ k props to rich loco and yeah pistol banger i got msn AIM DillonJFabuless __________________ 20 G's for this watch, Are you sick G? A dot com on my arm, ThisIs50 - Chamillionaire

07-25-2008, 12:58 PM	#8
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 2,552 Thanks: 139 Thanked 218 Times in 57 Posts	no dissin u or anybody when i say this but fuck ur lyrics for right now homie if u work on that more than anything.....u just gon be a writer...thats aint, nothing else...just words on a piece of paper....if u cant come correct wit that....that's wat u just gon be...a nigga wit alot of raps in his pen and pad..... work on ur flow/emotion/delivery tha most....make niggas feel were u comin from when u on tha mic dog, just dont sound borin n like u readin.... after u think u got dat good...then work on ur lyrics more dog.... this your second drop, keep at it....if u feel like u cant get better....just stay makin beats.. stay up thou nigga... __________________ PAPER CHASER VOL.1 COMIN THIS DEC. Pantherz (9-3) ......Vikz {7-5}

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