KING187-Intro(Tha Entrance)

youngking187 · 08-05-2008, 01:34 PM

http://www.zshare.net/audio/165652433276c947/

Lyrics......

this is the eastside story..//
for all u lame muthafuckaz adore..//
d.c put,md put ya hands in air,va put ya hands in the air
b-more put ya hands in the air..yeaaaaaaa

this is the entrance..///
young king, im back wit a vengeance../// yea!!!

hip hop is constantly changing,
bumpin soulja boy and wayning,
and everybody complaining,
they just competin for the faming,
best rapper mc's be claming
but all u niggaz is the same cuz,

i be watching as rappers proceed 2 plottin,
but the formula 4 go always result into stoppin
yall the cops and
,i know u niggaz be watchin,
for give n go with rocks on the block,niggaz get shot
cuz niggaz owe me,hustle dough comin in slowly,
hit ya up 4 ya rolly,while scoring more rocks then kobe nigga,

u og niggaz just oldies,
stop acting like u know me,
yall phoney's,im busting gunz,
u niggaz riding on poney's,
used poor,all i had waz bread and bolougnie homie

yall 6 the man and
im starting
u niggaz must be retarded,
stinky money out the azz like a young boy just farted
check the bars kid,

cuz my flow here is the hardest
i dont draw but ima artist,
i better then these rap artist
and my record aint even charted nigga

dont need influence,
cuz me and god is congruent,
dont shoot on records,
talk to me when u do it
u stupid..///

i luv this shit but i dont need cupid,
motocombat flow on u muthafuckaz hiukid
im ruthless..//
one punch will leave your punk azz toothless
i do this..//
aint nobody stopin me..///
own ya property
u mistaking for manopoply
seeing ya punk azz watchin me
as far as i could see
swagger jackin to the fullest..
stop stuntin nigga now nigga pull it..
aint afraid of bullets...
cuz ima throw back wizard nigga

i put on 4 my city aint nobody fucking wit me
u want me then come and get me
u kidden me..

i aint afraid,i dont show no fear
check my gear, im here
been shot at,but never drop no tears
yall taking shots but missing shit,
yall muthafuckafuckaz betta start steering clipz..
he killed him,like death person i aint here shit..///
we ride for glory,u my son lets go on maury..///
u mother already whored me..,
now i guess i gotta forward theee
east side muthafucka story nigga...///

this is the eastside story..//
for all u lame muthafuckaz adore..//
d.c put,md put ya hands in air,va put ya hands in the air
b-more put ya hands in the air..yeaaaaaaa

this is the entrance..///
young king, im back wit a vengeance../// yea!!!

RICH$LOCO · 08-05-2008, 06:43 PM

i dunno oh im gone send u that dope boy song to jump on aight im doing the hook for u

youngking187 · 08-05-2008, 09:28 PM

iight^^^^feed me,critisize this...
it'll help me get better........
im still lookin for my sound though 4real...
what dope boy song Loco?????????

T0M CH4MBERS · 08-05-2008, 09:34 PM

this flow was all over the place........prolly becuz your bars are way too unorganized...........try organizng them and try wording your lines better.....cuz it might help your flow tighten up some....also try keeping your flow @ a steady pace...............start out @ a medium speed....then once oyu master that...move onto a faster flow or slower flow whatever you feel will sound better

youngking187 · 08-05-2008, 09:44 PM

..iight i gotchu....thanx 4 the feed tom...what program u record with????^^^
bumpppp

pUnChLiNeZ89 · 08-05-2008, 10:01 PM

havent listened to one of ur traccs in a min

u started off good...but thenu left da beat behind a few bars later....but ur lyrics is already up there..juss work on da flow ..try feelin da beat...n ur flow will be locced....but lyrics is good...

n work on ur volume control....but stay up..and try adding "Jersey put ur hands in the air" lol.na but stay up

youngking187 · 08-05-2008, 10:05 PM

^^^lol...iight..thanx 4 the feed punchlinez..much respect..
what program u record with??????

pUnChLiNeZ89 · 08-05-2008, 10:06 PM

i switch up w/ cool edit and mixcraft....those da only two programs i really know dat i can get for free haha

youngking187 · 08-05-2008, 10:07 PM

oh..iight....do quality have 2 do with the program
or its just the way u mix it,the mic u have,etc..???

*Pistol Banger* · 08-05-2008, 10:20 PM

Mixing^^^^

youngking187 · 08-05-2008, 10:24 PM

^^^^good looking pistol.....

youngking187 · 08-06-2008, 08:15 PM

Bump........

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 08-07-2008, 11:58 AM

no mic >>> mixin

u can have sum of tha best song

but if u quailty aint good...aint nobody gon really listen.....but ur quality aint dat bad

but your flow was just like...here and there....

and was that a hook wit tha " hands in tha air " ???....work on dat

like i been tellin u homie, work on ur flow....ur lines are just short..and sum or longer than tha others.....

but keep at it...u gon get tha hang of it...

stay up

T0M CH4MBERS · 08-07-2008, 12:50 PM

Quote:

no mic >>> mixin

u can have sum of tha best song

but if u quailty aint good...aint nobody gon really listen.....but ur quality aint dat bad

but your flow was just like...here and there....

and was that a hook wit tha " hands in tha air " ???....work on dat

like i been tellin u homie, work on ur flow....ur lines are just short..and sum or longer than tha others.....

but keep at it...u gon get tha hang of it...

stay up

^ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooo

the irony......

j/k jae.....

but yea king.......you can get by with a $99 usb condensor and not mix...and it'll turn out btter then cheap performance mics/desktop mics............i would help you out with how to mix.....but your on a different squad.....

plus i already helped pistol with it...so just ask him....

OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK · 08-07-2008, 12:58 PM

^ lol, thats wat i was meanin 2 say...my quailty was horrible....

youngking187 · 08-07-2008, 03:44 PM

iight^^^^^good lookin wit the feed yall..much respect..

youngking187 · 08-08-2008, 08:37 PM

bumppppppppppp

J.ProV. · 08-08-2008, 11:00 PM

Flow was on for a lil bit. Organize your shit like Chambers said. You'll be good sooner or later wit that shit. Do watchu do. Glad to see someone hop on that beat tho. Holla back with some feed

youngking187 · 08-08-2008, 11:10 PM

iight...much respect prov..good lookin bumpppppppp

08-05-2008, 01:34 PM	#1
youngking187 www.myspace.com/kingro202 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 1,282 Thanks: 89 Thanked 225 Times in 53 Posts	KING187-Intro(Tha Entrance) KING187-Intro(Tha Entrance) http://www.zshare.net/audio/165652433276c947/ Lyrics...... this is the eastside story..// for all u lame muthafuckaz adore..// d.c put,md put ya hands in air,va put ya hands in the air b-more put ya hands in the air..yeaaaaaaa this is the entrance../// young king, im back wit a vengeance../// yea!!! hip hop is constantly changing, bumpin soulja boy and wayning, and everybody complaining, they just competin for the faming, best rapper mc's be claming but all u niggaz is the same cuz, i be watching as rappers proceed 2 plottin, but the formula 4 go always result into stoppin yall the cops and ,i know u niggaz be watchin, for give n go with rocks on the block,niggaz get shot cuz niggaz owe me,hustle dough comin in slowly, hit ya up 4 ya rolly,while scoring more rocks then kobe nigga, u og niggaz just oldies, stop acting like u know me, yall phoney's,im busting gunz, u niggaz riding on poney's, used poor,all i had waz bread and bolougnie homie yall 6 the man and im starting u niggaz must be retarded, stinky money out the azz like a young boy just farted check the bars kid, cuz my flow here is the hardest i dont draw but ima artist, i better then these rap artist and my record aint even charted nigga dont need influence, cuz me and god is congruent, dont shoot on records, talk to me when u do it u stupid../// i luv this shit but i dont need cupid, motocombat flow on u muthafuckaz hiukid im ruthless..// one punch will leave your punk azz toothless i do this..// aint nobody stopin me../// own ya property u mistaking for manopoply seeing ya punk azz watchin me as far as i could see swagger jackin to the fullest.. stop stuntin nigga now nigga pull it.. aint afraid of bullets... cuz ima throw back wizard nigga i put on 4 my city aint nobody fucking wit me u want me then come and get me u kidden me.. i aint afraid,i dont show no fear check my gear, im here been shot at,but never drop no tears yall taking shots but missing shit, yall muthafuckafuckaz betta start steering clipz.. he killed him,like death person i aint here shit../// we ride for glory,u my son lets go on maury../// u mother already whored me.., now i guess i gotta forward theee east side muthafucka story nigga.../// this is the eastside story..// for all u lame muthafuckaz adore..// d.c put,md put ya hands in air,va put ya hands in the air b-more put ya hands in the air..yeaaaaaaa this is the entrance../// young king, im back wit a vengeance../// yea!!! __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

08-05-2008, 06:43 PM	#2
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 1,806 Thanks: 599 Thanked 485 Times in 81 Posts	i dunno oh im gone send u that dope boy song to jump on aight im doing the hook for u __________________

08-05-2008, 09:28 PM	#3
youngking187 www.myspace.com/kingro202 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 1,282 Thanks: 89 Thanked 225 Times in 53 Posts	iight^^^^feed me,critisize this... it'll help me get better........ im still lookin for my sound though 4real... what dope boy song Loco????????? __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

08-05-2008, 09:34 PM	#4
T0M CH4MBERS AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 9,126 Thanks: 71 Thanked 89 Times in 51 Posts	this flow was all over the place........prolly becuz your bars are way too unorganized...........try organizng them and try wording your lines better.....cuz it might help your flow tighten up some....also try keeping your flow @ a steady pace...............start out @ a medium speed....then once oyu master that...move onto a faster flow or slower flow whatever you feel will sound better __________________ D Minus says: u just mad cuz ima be cakin and it wont hurt when i take a huge shit...being broke with a tight asshole aint doin shit for me right now yo!

08-05-2008, 09:44 PM	#5
youngking187 www.myspace.com/kingro202 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 1,282 Thanks: 89 Thanked 225 Times in 53 Posts	..iight i gotchu....thanx 4 the feed tom...what program u record with????^^^ bumpppp __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

08-05-2008, 10:01 PM	#6
pUnChLiNeZ89 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: da BRICKZ..JERz Posts: 580 Thanks: 12 Thanked 23 Times in 18 Posts	havent listened to one of ur traccs in a min u started off good...but thenu left da beat behind a few bars later....but ur lyrics is already up there..juss work on da flow ..try feelin da beat...n ur flow will be locced....but lyrics is good... n work on ur volume control....but stay up..and try adding "Jersey put ur hands in the air" lol.na but stay up

08-05-2008, 10:05 PM	#7
youngking187 www.myspace.com/kingro202 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 1,282 Thanks: 89 Thanked 225 Times in 53 Posts	^^^lol...iight..thanx 4 the feed punchlinez..much respect.. what program u record with?????? __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

08-05-2008, 10:06 PM	#8
pUnChLiNeZ89 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: da BRICKZ..JERz Posts: 580 Thanks: 12 Thanked 23 Times in 18 Posts	i switch up w/ cool edit and mixcraft....those da only two programs i really know dat i can get for free haha

08-05-2008, 10:07 PM	#9
youngking187 www.myspace.com/kingro202 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 1,282 Thanks: 89 Thanked 225 Times in 53 Posts	oh..iight....do quality have 2 do with the program or its just the way u mix it,the mic u have,etc..??? __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

08-05-2008, 10:20 PM	#10
Pistol Banger --MaSteRMiNdiN-- Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 3,918 Thanks: 69 Thanked 173 Times in 49 Posts	Mixing^^^^ __________________ \|-\|I'm StiLL FoReVeR UnDeFeaTeD\|-\| S.P.A.M. --------------------------------------------------- /-\|\|-\Myspace.com/Pbthemastermind/-\|\|-\ ---------------------------------------------------

08-05-2008, 10:24 PM	#11
youngking187 www.myspace.com/kingro202 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 1,282 Thanks: 89 Thanked 225 Times in 53 Posts	^^^^good looking pistol..... __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

08-06-2008, 08:15 PM	#12
youngking187 www.myspace.com/kingro202 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 1,282 Thanks: 89 Thanked 225 Times in 53 Posts	Bump........ __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

08-07-2008, 11:58 AM	#13
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 2,552 Thanks: 139 Thanked 218 Times in 57 Posts	no mic >>> mixin u can have sum of tha best song but if u quailty aint good...aint nobody gon really listen.....but ur quality aint dat bad but your flow was just like...here and there.... and was that a hook wit tha " hands in tha air " ???....work on dat like i been tellin u homie, work on ur flow....ur lines are just short..and sum or longer than tha others..... but keep at it...u gon get tha hang of it... stay up __________________ PAPER CHASER VOL.1 COMIN THIS DEC. Pantherz (9-3) ......Vikz {7-5}

08-07-2008, 12:58 PM	#15
OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK G.E.D...... Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: North C@rolin@ Posts: 2,552 Thanks: 139 Thanked 218 Times in 57 Posts	^ lol, thats wat i was meanin 2 say...my quailty was horrible.... __________________ PAPER CHASER VOL.1 COMIN THIS DEC. Pantherz (9-3) ......Vikz {7-5}

08-07-2008, 03:44 PM	#16
youngking187 www.myspace.com/kingro202 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 1,282 Thanks: 89 Thanked 225 Times in 53 Posts	iight^^^^^good lookin wit the feed yall..much respect.. __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

08-08-2008, 08:37 PM	#17
youngking187 www.myspace.com/kingro202 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 1,282 Thanks: 89 Thanked 225 Times in 53 Posts	bumppppppppppp __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

08-08-2008, 11:00 PM	#18
J.ProV. Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 2,619 Thanks: 137 Thanked 371 Times in 99 Posts	Flow was on for a lil bit. Organize your shit like Chambers said. You'll be good sooner or later wit that shit. Do watchu do. Glad to see someone hop on that beat tho. Holla back with some feed

08-08-2008, 11:10 PM	#19
youngking187 www.myspace.com/kingro202 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 1,282 Thanks: 89 Thanked 225 Times in 53 Posts	iight...much respect prov..good lookin bumpppppppp __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz