Born-In The Air

Projec F2D · 08-16-2008, 11:59 PM

This Quality Isnt The Best I'm In The Process Of Re-Recording But If Its Not Up Tonight Take This For Now

http://www.zshare.net/audio/17158438bd5488b0/

I Feel It In The Air, The Whispers I Can Hear
Everythings Clear Like A Mirror So They Stop & Stare
Near My Boiling Point, So I Roll Another Joint
Tryna Find God But I'm Struggling To Anoint
The Voices In My Mind, Say I'm Wasting Time
So I Watch As Corny Dude Create They Lines
Life's Depressin, In My Face Lies Stress
The Worlds Upsetting My Stomach So I Can't Digest
I'm Fresh But I'm Not Happy
Feeling Crappy, Everything Keeps Coming At Me
Its Tacky, My Niggas Robbin Son Like Jackie
While I'm In The Belly Of The Hood, Doing No Good
And Nothin Satisfies Me Like The Doe Would
I Relate To The Street Goons,
& I'm Hungry So I'll Find Myself In Beef Soon
Divorced Love & Married Hatred, Its Sacred
If A Nigga Throw Hate My Way I Can Take IT
I Lack Inspirations, & Picked Up Determinataion
Yea They Hating But Its More Motivation
Maybe I Need Deliverance, To Rid Me Of Ignorance
But My Family Did It Cause I Was Innocent
Troubles Of The World Coming From Different Angles
Since My Gaurdians An Angel

*Pistol Banger* · 08-18-2008, 01:56 AM

Ok First.

WTFFFFFFFF is Up With your Voice.

Shit Over-powers The Beat To The Point I Cant Even Hear It.

Flowed Aight.

fix the voice!

Blizzy · 08-18-2008, 08:20 AM

You could tell you was readin that straight off the pad...know ya lyrics off by heart fore spittin them...flow got ahead of its self most of the time...agree with PB on the voice thing but that can be fixed by buyin a better mic and adjustin levels...Peace

J.ProV. · 08-21-2008, 07:52 PM

Deep shit.. Lyrics good as always. Just need the flow.. and you need quality.
But it seems like everyone you tell needs a better flow dont work on it. So forreal.. work on it you needa have a somewhat smooth flow

T0M CH4MBERS · 08-21-2008, 08:29 PM

hmm......you got potential...just need to tighten up the flow..

quality is terrible......make the vocals slightly louder then the beat.....you want an equal balance

RICH$LOCO · 08-21-2008, 11:03 PM

good lyrics homie just need to work on ya delivery and i dont really care about quality as long as its understandable

Lil Brizzle · 08-22-2008, 08:04 AM

this was a bad song.....get a new mike.....the voice was bad like everybody said.....flow couldve been improved too but it was ok......

T0M CH4MBERS · 08-22-2008, 12:14 PM

*cough*.....oh the irony.......................no offense brizzle...but you can't really say "this was bad" when it blows your osng out the water.....and his flow>>>yours.........

Lil Brizzle · 08-22-2008, 12:41 PM

^^ this blows my song out the water???

i didnt expect to say this to be honest.....but at least my voice was more listenable than this.....im not talking about the flow.....and my flow wasnt too bad either.....but either way my song was at least still a lil likable.....girls actually liked it.....but wtv chambers go on arguing if u wanna.....just stating the truth.....i aint guna put shit like this song is awesome.....

*Pistol Banger* · 08-22-2008, 07:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lil brizzle

^^ this blows my song out the water???

I didnt expect to say this to be honest.....but at least my voice was more listenable than this.....im not talking about the flow.....and my flow wasnt too bad either.....but either way my song was at least still a lil likable.....girls actually liked it.....but wtv chambers go on arguing if u wanna.....just stating the truth.....i aint guna put shit like this song is awesome.....

rofllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

youngking187 · 08-22-2008, 07:35 PM

lmaooooooooooooooooo.....^^^^
a brizzle feed my world of trouble joint..

drop waz ok...quality waz horrible as stated by the others..
lyrics waz decent..flow waz on and off....
im workin on the same shit my nigg....
feed my drop..world of trouble

UnBrEaKaBlE · 08-24-2008, 05:24 PM

this songs not as bad as people are saying. it flowed smooth through out. the only thing is you need a equalizing box. or maybe just a better mic.

Projec F2D · 08-24-2008, 11:00 PM

Thanks For All The Feed I Got Something New Coming Actually A Few Things Coming So Be On The Look Out

& Brizzle No Words For Your Wack Ass

08-16-2008, 11:59 PM	#1
Projec F2D GTMovement.Blogspot.Com Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: iN The BouTiques oR 5th AvE. Posts: 667 Thanks: 52 Thanked 216 Times in 78 Posts	Born-In The Air Born-In The Air This Quality Isnt The Best I'm In The Process Of Re-Recording But If Its Not Up Tonight Take This For Now http://www.zshare.net/audio/17158438bd5488b0/ I Feel It In The Air, The Whispers I Can Hear Everythings Clear Like A Mirror So They Stop & Stare Near My Boiling Point, So I Roll Another Joint Tryna Find God But I'm Struggling To Anoint The Voices In My Mind, Say I'm Wasting Time So I Watch As Corny Dude Create They Lines Life's Depressin, In My Face Lies Stress The Worlds Upsetting My Stomach So I Can't Digest I'm Fresh But I'm Not Happy Feeling Crappy, Everything Keeps Coming At Me Its Tacky, My Niggas Robbin Son Like Jackie While I'm In The Belly Of The Hood, Doing No Good And Nothin Satisfies Me Like The Doe Would I Relate To The Street Goons, & I'm Hungry So I'll Find Myself In Beef Soon Divorced Love & Married Hatred, Its Sacred If A Nigga Throw Hate My Way I Can Take IT I Lack Inspirations, & Picked Up Determinataion Yea They Hating But Its More Motivation Maybe I Need Deliverance, To Rid Me Of Ignorance But My Family Did It Cause I Was Innocent Troubles Of The World Coming From Different Angles Since My Gaurdians An Angel __________________ The Team Is GT Only Niggas I'm Cool Wit On My XI Bred Jordan, Ya Know Original Bull Shit- ++BoRn++

08-18-2008, 01:56 AM	#2
Pistol Banger --MaSteRMiNdiN-- Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 3,919 Thanks: 69 Thanked 173 Times in 49 Posts	Ok First. WTFFFFFFFF is Up With your Voice. Shit Over-powers The Beat To The Point I Cant Even Hear It. Flowed Aight. fix the voice! __________________ \|-\|I'm StiLL FoReVeR UnDeFeaTeD\|-\| S.P.A.M. --------------------------------------------------- /-\|\|-\Myspace.com/Pbthemastermind/-\|\|-\ ---------------------------------------------------

08-18-2008, 08:20 AM	#3
Blizzy Certified Substance Join Date: May 2008 Location: The Realm Called Earth Posts: 1,980 Thanks: 534 Thanked 181 Times in 45 Posts	You could tell you was readin that straight off the pad...know ya lyrics off by heart fore spittin them...flow got ahead of its self most of the time...agree with PB on the voice thing but that can be fixed by buyin a better mic and adjustin levels...Peace __________________ MY MUSIC CHECK IT OUT myspace.com/ttpbloodshot

08-21-2008, 07:52 PM	#4
J.ProV. Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 2,619 Thanks: 137 Thanked 371 Times in 99 Posts	Deep shit.. Lyrics good as always. Just need the flow.. and you need quality. But it seems like everyone you tell needs a better flow dont work on it. So forreal.. work on it you needa have a somewhat smooth flow __________________ myspace.com/provmuzik

08-21-2008, 08:29 PM	#5
T0M CH4MBERS AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 9,126 Thanks: 71 Thanked 89 Times in 51 Posts	hmm......you got potential...just need to tighten up the flow.. quality is terrible......make the vocals slightly louder then the beat.....you want an equal balance __________________ D Minus says: u just mad cuz ima be cakin and it wont hurt when i take a huge shit...being broke with a tight asshole aint doin shit for me right now yo!

08-21-2008, 11:03 PM	#6
RICH$LOCO Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: westcoast, CA Posts: 1,806 Thanks: 599 Thanked 485 Times in 81 Posts	good lyrics homie just need to work on ya delivery and i dont really care about quality as long as its understandable __________________

08-22-2008, 08:04 AM	#7
Lil Brizzle Man With The Plan Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,227 Thanks: 18 Thanked 48 Times in 18 Posts	this was a bad song.....get a new mike.....the voice was bad like everybody said.....flow couldve been improved too but it was ok...... __________________ Man With The Plan >>>>>>>> Anything Blockrunnaz, Tlazy Wizzle, Punchlinez, and Rebel INS have done in their lives combined together......

08-22-2008, 12:14 PM	#8
T0M CH4MBERS AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 9,126 Thanks: 71 Thanked 89 Times in 51 Posts	cough.....oh the irony.......................no offense brizzle...but you can't really say "this was bad" when it blows your osng out the water.....and his flow>>>yours......... __________________ D Minus says: u just mad cuz ima be cakin and it wont hurt when i take a huge shit...being broke with a tight asshole aint doin shit for me right now yo!

08-22-2008, 12:41 PM	#9
Lil Brizzle Man With The Plan Coming! Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Land Of The Latent Posts: 1,227 Thanks: 18 Thanked 48 Times in 18 Posts	^^ this blows my song out the water??? i didnt expect to say this to be honest.....but at least my voice was more listenable than this.....im not talking about the flow.....and my flow wasnt too bad either.....but either way my song was at least still a lil likable.....girls actually liked it.....but wtv chambers go on arguing if u wanna.....just stating the truth.....i aint guna put shit like this song is awesome..... __________________ Man With The Plan >>>>>>>> Anything Blockrunnaz, Tlazy Wizzle, Punchlinez, and Rebel INS have done in their lives combined together......

08-22-2008, 07:35 PM	#11
youngking187 www.myspace.com/kingro202 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Washington D.C Posts: 1,282 Thanks: 89 Thanked 225 Times in 53 Posts	lmaooooooooooooooooo.....^^^^ a brizzle feed my world of trouble joint.. drop waz ok...quality waz horrible as stated by the others.. lyrics waz decent..flow waz on and off.... im workin on the same shit my nigg.... feed my drop..world of trouble __________________ I dont Kiss No Lips That Open Up Sidewayz

08-24-2008, 05:24 PM	#12
UnBrEaKaBlE The alias is Protege Join Date: May 2006 Location: ThA WiLd WeSt Posts: 731 Thanks: 2 Thanked 306 Times in 51 Posts	this songs not as bad as people are saying. it flowed smooth through out. the only thing is you need a equalizing box. or maybe just a better mic. __________________ im loco no sunoco the flow show dat the hood kno do fo do lo ima solo cat myspace.com/therealprotege

08-24-2008, 11:00 PM	#13
Projec F2D GTMovement.Blogspot.Com Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: iN The BouTiques oR 5th AvE. Posts: 667 Thanks: 52 Thanked 216 Times in 78 Posts	Thanks For All The Feed I Got Something New Coming Actually A Few Things Coming So Be On The Look Out & Brizzle No Words For Your Wack Ass __________________ The Team Is GT Only Niggas I'm Cool Wit On My XI Bred Jordan, Ya Know Original Bull Shit- ++BoRn++

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