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40 wins? well in those battles u musta tried harder Cuz in this 1 he had a brush with death.. & rhymeageddon was the barber Wasnt feeling C-Money's diss. I thought he had the better flow and structure but Rhymeagetton had better personal and punchlines. So I say Rhymeagetton EDIT: i didnt know this battle took place in september. n/m lol
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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ya challengin' so i'll flick ya like da butt-of-a-cig/ Betta recognize dat i'm gutta-my-nig/ Lol.. I like this punch..quite witty. Ya don't understand that i'm not the otha man/ Cuz wit one bar, i make a hundred grand/ ;/ weak u's a bitch tryna rap, tryna say ya got fire spit/ I'll spit flow like fluid and have ya ass expirin'/ Flow is off on this and it dont hit at all. Ya gon be retirin' once i step up to the microphone/ Cuz once i get to rashin' ya gon hafta bite-da-chrome/ Another play on the same thing every other rapper has ever said... weak i'll ignite-ya-dome cuz i'm i'm lyrically blessed/ To send these bullets straight thru ya chest/ More shooting eh, or is this an attempt at a meta either way im not feeling it. I am the best so don't try to fuckin' last/ Cuz i'll smoke ya like da blunt when i puff puff pass/ not the best way to end a battle no punchline and saying I AM THE BEST is complete and totall false advertisement. Rhymeageddon You talking hard, u gon ignite my dome? Negro please Now u seeing pitch-black, like relievers in negro leagues LMAO... this was a nice punchline right here in my opinion this killed the whole verse i just read. Flipped one of his lines on him and had a killer punchline. Props 40 wins? well in those battles u musta tried harder Cuz in this 1 he had a brush with death.. & rhymeageddon was the barber Personal swing on what he has as his battle record... very nice. punchline was decent as well. ...im so cold I ran winter...raise my hand im the damn winner I’ll have him exiting stage left, in a white sheet like his role is a klan member Forced you could have brought this together in a different way. I spit sick like im infected, u did ya best, but yer not respected Your verse has alot of hang-ups.. no wonder none of it connected Lmao.. good swing on em.. Punchline was well done inner rhyme on first line made it flow nice as well. good way to end the battle. Rhymeageddon took this battle hands down in my opinion. ![]() He had better vocab flow punchlines and was devistating on the personals If either of you dissagree with anything I have here get at me Respect Reptillian |
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