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Old 12-13-2007, 05:03 PM   #1
 
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12/13/07 - J.Prov vs. pUnChLiNeZ89

1 round
8 barz
due by Saturday since we both on da 3astcoast
...u can drop b4 also if u have it ready

so who spit first?
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Old 12-13-2007, 05:42 PM   #2
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Change the due dat cuz im out for the night......
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Old 12-13-2007, 05:46 PM   #3
 
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iightz..i gotchu
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Old 12-14-2007, 04:59 PM   #4
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my bad for not bringin' my real shit.. i had 5 minutes to write cause I'm off to Prov to my girls.. my bad my dude


20% Heat..
80% Knowledge Knowing This Pussy Isn't Showing Up To Compete With Elites..
But Please..
Follow The Flow Of A Followers Fortune
Roll With The Role Of A Parents Abortion
Now Bleed..
Hollow Your Skull, Taking Heat Got You Scorchin'
Model Of The Show, Prior To Start I Thank You For Watchin'..........

Welcome To The Magic Show, Applaud, Cheer, Pass The Dro
Im The Coolest Nigga What? Now Go Go Gadget Flow............
Fuck Your $, I'm Toppin Bread, Delivery Dont Need Dominoe's Hats
Bring Your Crew.. I'll Put Dots On Ya Pieces And Leave You Domino Flat
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Old 12-14-2007, 11:07 PM   #5
 
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iight...its coo i hear u on dat

1st to 5 votes win if it aint to late to say it...but here my 16z

J.Prov is like da MTV show w/ his "SWEET~SIXTEENS/
PUNCHLINE~KING n u wanna COMPETE~w/ DIS~PHEN/ (phenom)
WISHIN he can beat me juss give him a FAIRY~WOND/
ill send dis duke "HOME-RUNNIN" like BARRY~BONDS/
Ill Put da heat in Prov.s Mouth like a THERM~O~STAT/
Now dats a true FEVER dat will BURN~DIS~CAT/
N i got my own type of HEAT dat'll BURN~HIS~BACC/
URN~DIS~CAT,and take his pride, make him EARN~SHIT~BACC/
I aint talkin bout gettin DIZZY when i make ur HEAD~SPIN/
Make u BLOOD BATHE after these "BOWS" turn u to a"RED~SKIN"/(Idian)
Dis Heat i spit will WARM UR BODY like a THERMAL/
and da HEAT on my waist will MELT UR BODY's EXTERNAL/
U cant beat me im like a OBSTACLE u wish u COULD~CLIMB/
my lyrics will leave u w/ BURNS like PENNY from GOOD~TIMES/
Pull out da RATCHET and CLAP~IT, put u in a CASKET/
COCK~IT, POP~IT, hook u to IV WIRES like ur Bodys a SOCKET/

i guess we get da votez in nillz
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Old 12-16-2007, 03:21 PM   #6
 
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can we get some votes
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Old 12-17-2007, 02:46 PM   #7
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Punchlines...Ya Shit Is Played...No Hate....But It Was Wack

Prov Looked Like He Didnt Even Try And He Lyrically Raped You....

Prov Easily.........
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Old 12-17-2007, 03:51 PM   #8
 
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lookin at most ur posts when u post in the labs...u seem to be a lil bit of a diccryder...so i dont kno if i can count dat one..can we get some real votes.....
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Old 12-17-2007, 05:15 PM   #9
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prov no need for an explanationhe had the better verse
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Old 12-17-2007, 07:22 PM   #10
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punchlinez.......no question

j.prov was good too....but punchlinez was better
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Old 12-17-2007, 07:25 PM   #11
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Prov- Wins

Cuz dude said Sumthin bout phene in his first bar.. with phenom.
and that was wack.
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J PROV

20% Heat..
80% Knowledge Knowing This Pussy Isn't Showing Up To Compete With Elites..
But Please..

Different feel here I was feeling this and it seemed to be aimed right at PunchLineZ nicely done way to come out.

Follow The Flow Of A Followers Fortune
Roll With The Role Of A Parents Abortion
Now Bleed..

The structure bringing back the rhyme to your first bar was done well and your vocab was good here plus the Multi' use went beyond the norm.. well done. all the same tho it didn't seem like you aimed this at PunchLineZ

Hollow Your Skull, Taking Heat Got You Scorchin'
Model Of The Show, Prior To Start I Thank You For Watchin'..........

This is the bar i liked the least of this entire verse.

Welcome To The Magic Show, Applaud, Cheer, Pass The Dro
Im The Coolest Nigga What? Now Go Go Gadget Flow............

Lmao... Good bar here but, didn't seem to be swinging

Fuck Your $, I'm Toppin Bread, Delivery Dont Need Dominoe's Hats
Bring Your Crew.. I'll Put Dots On Ya Pieces And Leave You Domino Flat

Great concept and pulled it out in the end. Nice way to close a battle.



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J.Prov is like da MTV show w/ his "SWEET~SIXTEENS/
PUNCHLINE~KING n u wanna COMPETE~w/ DIS~PHEN/ (phenom)

I don't think this was a very good opening bar... the flow seems off I see the multi's but, it don't have much to do with prov himself eh.
WISHIN he can beat me juss give him a FAIRY~WOND/
ill send dis duke "HOME-RUNNIN" like BARRY~BONDS/

A jab.. little play on words decent bar

Ill Put da heat in Prov.s Mouth like a THERM~O~STAT/
Now dats a true FEVER dat will BURN~DIS~CAT/

Another Jab but, this is played a bar as the come and still was quite generic.
N i got my own type of HEAT dat'll BURN~HIS~BACC/
URN~DIS~CAT,and take his pride, make him EARN~SHIT~BACC/

Gun barz are played... but a punch noless

I aint talkin bout gettin DIZZY when i make ur HEAD~SPIN/
Make u BLOOD BATHE after these "BOWS" turn u to a"RED~SKIN"/(Idian)

FORCED AS FUCK no hate but you could have made this concept work, thing is you didn't pull off this punch the right way.

Dis Heat i spit will WARM UR BODY like a THERMAL/
and da HEAT on my waist will MELT UR BODY's EXTERNAL/

Nah... Not feeling this bar

U cant beat me im like a OBSTACLE u wish u COULD~CLIMB/
my lyrics will leave u w/ BURNS like PENNY from GOOD~TIMES/

LMAO nice bar original here and funny but you weren't really swinging personal but a nice punch.

Pull out da RATCHET and CLAP~IT, put u in a CASKET/
COCK~IT, POP~IT, hook u to IV WIRES like ur Bodys a SOCKET/

Weak closer... casket and socket hmmm don't seem to flow.


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I would vote for Prov. because, he seemed to come with nothing but fresh lines and connected them in his own way. He was consistant and had me laughing a few times. PunchlineZ you were right there but, the couple of fall offs and the played bars made me sway twards prov.

Anyways I don't know if you guys will count this vote due to my post count butm Its a legit vote. Either of you disagree with any of this go on and get at me.

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Old 12-20-2007, 07:35 AM   #13
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Ight good looks.. battles over anyway thats like 4-1 or some shit
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Old 12-20-2007, 06:50 PM   #14
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I know this battle is over...and prov...you know you's my nigga right? My personal opinion on the votes here is WTF...HH Board done changed yo...Prov, ya verse didnt even reall yseem like a battle verse...flow was fuckin incredible for its origionality but 1st of all ya shit was shot as hell you you had like two hard hittin punches and the only one that stuck out was the Abortion one

Now if we look at this other guy's verse he come wit a punch every bar...and lets not say shit about how the other dudes shit is played cuz so is every dominoe and abortion line anyone can think of so thats a bad reason for Prov. to take this...in my opinion this is how the vote should've gone...

Flow- Prov
Multies- Punchlines
Creativity- Prov
Punches- Punchlines
Wordplay- Prov
Personals- None

O All- Punches shit was more of a battle verse feel me?

Basically i dont know what the fuck half the niggas on this board is on when they came in here sayin no explanation needed...J Prov got this mos def...no he didnt...if you think he won, it was a mattter of which style you liked better... nothin more or less...this board definitely done changed...and niggas really need to start votin in cats again fa real

And the word of the day for J Prov. is dont underestimate new niggas just cuz they new...cuz no doubt you the better MC and you coulda ripped this nigga...but you didnt..plain and simple...go all out every time especially when you dont know how good/ bad a battler a person is
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Old 12-20-2007, 06:53 PM   #15
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How Am I A DickRider.....Lmao....U Got Raped Nigga...Dont Make Excuses
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Old 12-20-2007, 09:01 PM   #16
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AND LOOK AT THESE VOTES RIGHT HERE..THERE SO MANY UCKED UP THINGS ABOUT EM

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Prov- Wins

Cuz dude said Sumthin bout phene in his first bar.. with phenom.
and that was wack.
^^you really gonna give Prov the battle cuz the other dude said Phenom and you think that's wack? WOW this vote should def not be counted

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[b][size="4"]PUNCHLINES

I aint talkin bout gettin DIZZY when i make ur HEAD~SPIN/
Make u BLOOD BATHE after these "BOWS" turn u to a"RED~SKIN"/(Idian)

FORCED AS FUCK no hate but you could have made this concept work, thing is you didn't pull off this punch the right way.

Pull out da RATCHET and CLAP~IT, put u in a CASKET/
COCK~IT, POP~IT, hook u to IV WIRES like ur Bodys a SOCKET/

Weak closer... casket and socket hmmm don't seem to flow.


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I would vote for Prov. because, he seemed to come with nothing but fresh lines and connected them in his own way. He was consistant and had me laughing a few times. PunchlineZ you were right there but, the couple of fall offs and the played bars made me sway twards prov.

Anyways I don't know if you guys will count this vote due to my post count butm Its a legit vote. Either of you disagree with any of this go on and get at me.

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I been spittin for a lil while and I got a good idea of what a forced multie is nd I dont think many people would agree with you in sayin that red skin/ head spin is a forced multie...i dont see how it could be...and also casket aint supposed to flow wit socket...each bar flows on its own...


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Old 12-25-2007, 01:38 AM   #17
 
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i kno right..on some trill ish...

dats y i stopped battlin and put it to rest

n old dude sayin i cant compete w/ da elites..u must not know who i am originally if u sayin dat..stupid niggas kid...but i respect reptallions vote since he broke it down no doubt''

but all in all good battle j provs....no prollems w/ u..stay up kid

o and for da record..im not new..i been battlin here since early 2005
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Do you still want votes...I was a vet...then I left...and now this place is a shithole...
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Old 12-25-2007, 12:30 PM   #19
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Yo forreal..... u could take this battle b/c i wrote it in 2 mins like i said.. had places to go.. L's to roll.. and ish........... fuck an hh board battle yall catchin' feelin's
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Think of a beat to flow on if yall want to talk about flow good. What kind of beat you guys be thinking on before yall can say "It can flow good?". Yall still scared to battle? That's a shame. Yall straight scared.
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to be honest...j prov's lyrics wasnt too good as he said he had to go somewhere...but no offense to punchline though...i couldnt really understand what he was trying to say
so i guess it goes to prov
anyways can i rap battle with any of u?
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