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| Freestyles Spit some hot flows in here...show all the other members what you are made of! |
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08-17-2008, 04:01 PM
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The Drought
this sections dryin' up so here I go...whoooo...
I'm the 'One'...you forgotten-the-number? I wonder? HOT...have you sweatin like a goth-in-the-summer, Drop thunder...directin' clashin-clouds, Collectin' cash-n-pounds...Clowns be acceptin' rapid-rounds, To the upper-torso..."fuckin'-thought-so", No closet leave em stuck-in-wardrobes...bleedin' cuts-on-you're-clothes, I Mike-Laury-Whors...I might-carry-swords, COZ... Life ain't worth 'Jack' so I killed Jill like-Barry-George, This dick gets fucked in the ass like a transvestite...man's-dressed-right, His plan's-get-spiked...and get raped with his hands-and-legs-tied... You a 'Puff'/'Poof'...ain't no Bad-Boy-I-promise, In battles with Blizzy you gotta duck asteroids-and-comets... quick drop...let us know what you think...Peace
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08-17-2008, 04:02 PM
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ok ok. 8/10
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08-17-2008, 05:49 PM
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but yourmulties through out most of the verse was cool and kept the flow easy to read. 100
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08-18-2008, 07:46 AM
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^props^uppin and bumpin...
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08-18-2008, 11:18 AM
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good flow...good use of multies...sum good lines...7/10
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this shit made me vomit my dinner and drink. so what you think, after I read this blah blah I had to appoint a shrink. cause man this shit made me have to think. talkin homo crap, your rymes gave me a queer wink eww. if this is your solution for a drought, I feel bad for you wow. mad dudes probably takin turns in your mouth yikes. no pun son but you aint throwing no asteroids,its more like you throw your back out till you develop hemorriods. then u sweat it out with goths shootin steroids in grandmas basement. face it that shit was flagrant. freestyle
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08-19-2008, 01:40 AM
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im down to die for mine
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Make it rain
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08-19-2008, 02:24 AM
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team gunna ftw
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08-19-2008, 06:56 AM
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this piece was indirect and made me think...which i like from time to time...don't know who u are but ur lyricism is definitely not indoubt...i guess if i "rated" it i'd say 8-8.5...nicely put together piece...1
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08-19-2008, 08:47 AM
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this was good.....flow stood out and multies was probably the best thing about this drop.....its also what ur best at.....the wordplay was also good and i liked how u connected each of ur lines together......stay up......peace....
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08-19-2008, 02:00 PM
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props to those givin feed and not tryna diss lol...Peace
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08-23-2008, 04:05 PM
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uppin....POW
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