Tips and advice( for high inters and UP)

The Lyrical One · 11-23-2006, 05:01 PM

Look since to ya im lookin weak to ya can ya post some tips for me and adive to help me on each catagory

Punchlines
Multies
Flow
Personals
Creativity
storytelling

if u have a strength in any ov these catagories give some advice to me and how to make it more complex

also some writing tips cause i can write for shit

No aim either do got it post tips on this thread

Over_Flow · 11-23-2006, 05:06 PM

^^ get on aim man...im not givin tips i just wanna talk 2 ya

The Lyrical One · 11-23-2006, 05:19 PM

i aint got it PM me about what it is man NO didd i just hate aim cause its like its top secret shit just PM me

red eye · 11-23-2006, 05:23 PM

well, start by getting out of ecp.

The Lyrical One · 11-23-2006, 06:02 PM

i aint wit ECP no mo so wats crackin man

T. Wizzy · 11-23-2006, 06:34 PM

I Know All...But I Only Share With Everybody But Young Dollas

The Lyrical One · 11-23-2006, 06:41 PM

why not me *starts cryin*

all i wanted was ur help*whaaaaaaa*

-Esco- · 11-23-2006, 06:42 PM

Stfu .

JR-One · 11-23-2006, 08:20 PM

How The Fuck Do You Claim To Be Punchline King, Yet You're Asking For Help..?.. You Stupid Mongoloid.. ..

The Lyrical One · 11-23-2006, 08:35 PM

yeah ppl ask that all the time thats the title im workin for im not close to it
its motivation

LOL @ ESCO
a why ppl sayin u got banned and how

JR-One · 11-23-2006, 08:39 PM

You Should Say "Punchline King, In Progress".. ..

Shogun · 11-23-2006, 08:53 PM

Same advice as always: be an intelligent human being.

Because, let's be honest, if you can't achieve that then not only do you know you'll never "make it" in text (LAWL), but you'll have a pretty reliable indication that you won't make it in life either.

It's actually pretty gay that you're asking others to make YOU a better writer. Fair enough if you're looking for technical tips in terms of line length, syllables, explanations of literary devices & such but really, you're asking people to help you up your "creativity"?????? WTF IS THAT ABOUT? LAWL.

T. Wizzy · 11-23-2006, 09:04 PM

I Will Only Help You If You Put

"I Was Raped In The Ass By The King Of Nyghers...King Nygher Aka Twiz The G'd Up G From G-Town

The Lyrical One · 11-23-2006, 09:18 PM

Intelligent human being that its ima rock wit that thanks Shogun much respect here and JR ill be sure to do that and T-wizzy that not workin
give me somethin else to say wit out it being homo

-Esco- · 11-23-2006, 09:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Young Dolla

yeah ppl ask that all the time thats the title im workin for im not close to it
its motivation

LOL @ ESCO
a why ppl sayin u got banned and how

Because I did get ip banned.. for calling a nigger... a nigger..

killa_cam · 11-23-2006, 09:33 PM

LoL @ thread

The Lyrical One · 11-23-2006, 09:37 PM

ayo u cool wit me so u can say it but is u white

The Lyrical One · 11-23-2006, 09:37 PM

if u is u can say it on the computer

T. Wizzy · 11-23-2006, 09:42 PM

Then Say

"I Was Raped In The Ass By The King Of Nyghers...King Nygher Aka Twiz The G'd Up G From G-Town...No Homo"

Pennsylvania KING · 11-23-2006, 10:06 PM

:^D3*----<l

The Lyrical One · 11-23-2006, 10:15 PM

"I Was Raped In The Ass By The King Of Nyghers...King Nygher Aka Twiz The G'd Up G From G-Town...No Homo

i didnt want to say it but i did

Stack$ · 11-23-2006, 10:16 PM

Lmao........

The Lyrical One · 11-23-2006, 10:17 PM

LOL @ RECKLESS

what are u doin

Pennsylvania KING · 11-23-2006, 10:38 PM

LMFAO......

Twiz>Internet

all doubts outta my mind now

killa_cam · 11-23-2006, 11:20 PM

lmao...wow....

11-23-2006, 05:01 PM	#1
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Thanks: 31 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts	Tips and advice( for high inters and UP) Tips and advice( for high inters and UP) Look since to ya im lookin weak to ya can ya post some tips for me and adive to help me on each catagory Punchlines Multies Flow Personals Creativity storytelling if u have a strength in any ov these catagories give some advice to me and how to make it more complex also some writing tips cause i can write for shit No aim either do got it post tips on this thread

11-23-2006, 08:20 PM	#9
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,015 Thanks: 19 Thanked 52 Times in 20 Posts	How The Fuck Do You Claim To Be Punchline King, Yet You're Asking For Help..?.. You Stupid Mongoloid.. .. __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

11-23-2006, 08:39 PM	#11
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,015 Thanks: 19 Thanked 52 Times in 20 Posts	You Should Say "Punchline King, In Progress".. .. __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

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11-23-2006, 05:06 PM	#2
Over_Flow Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Queens. NY Posts: 2,793 Thanks: 525 Thanked 939 Times in 277 Posts	^^ get on aim man...im not givin tips i just wanna talk 2 ya

11-23-2006, 05:19 PM	#3
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Thanks: 31 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts	i aint got it PM me about what it is man NO didd i just hate aim cause its like its top secret shit just PM me

11-23-2006, 05:23 PM	#4
red eye Banned Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: MIA Posts: 1,070 Thanks: 3 Thanked 27 Times in 17 Posts	well, start by getting out of ecp.

11-23-2006, 06:02 PM	#5
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Thanks: 31 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts	i aint wit ECP no mo so wats crackin man

11-23-2006, 06:34 PM	#6
T. Wizzy 12-1-11 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts	I Know All...But I Only Share With Everybody But Young Dollas

11-23-2006, 06:41 PM	#7
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Thanks: 31 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts	why not me starts cryin all i wanted was ur helpwhaaaaaaa

11-23-2006, 06:42 PM	#8
-Esco- Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 86 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Stfu .

11-23-2006, 08:35 PM	#10
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Thanks: 31 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts	yeah ppl ask that all the time thats the title im workin for im not close to it its motivation LOL @ ESCO a why ppl sayin u got banned and how

11-23-2006, 08:53 PM	#12
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 654 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 1 Post	Same advice as always: be an intelligent human being. Because, let's be honest, if you can't achieve that then not only do you know you'll never "make it" in text (LAWL), but you'll have a pretty reliable indication that you won't make it in life either. It's actually pretty gay that you're asking others to make YOU a better writer. Fair enough if you're looking for technical tips in terms of line length, syllables, explanations of literary devices & such but really, you're asking people to help you up your "creativity"?????? WTF IS THAT ABOUT? LAWL.

11-23-2006, 09:04 PM	#13
T. Wizzy 12-1-11 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts	I Will Only Help You If You Put "I Was Raped In The Ass By The King Of Nyghers...King Nygher Aka Twiz The G'd Up G From G-Town

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11-23-2006, 09:18 PM	#14
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Thanks: 31 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts	Intelligent human being that its ima rock wit that thanks Shogun much respect here and JR ill be sure to do that and T-wizzy that not workin give me somethin else to say wit out it being homo

11-23-2006, 09:37 PM	#17
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Thanks: 31 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts	ayo u cool wit me so u can say it but is u white

11-23-2006, 09:42 PM	#19
T. Wizzy 12-1-11 Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts	Then Say "I Was Raped In The Ass By The King Of Nyghers...King Nygher Aka Twiz The G'd Up G From G-Town...No Homo"

11-23-2006, 10:06 PM	#20
Pennsylvania KING 12/24....Tape Of The Week Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 1,099 Thanks: 3 Thanked 204 Times in 48 Posts	:^D3*----<l

11-23-2006, 10:15 PM	#21
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Thanks: 31 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts	"I Was Raped In The Ass By The King Of Nyghers...King Nygher Aka Twiz The G'd Up G From G-Town...No Homo i didnt want to say it but i did

11-23-2006, 10:16 PM	#22
Stack$ Da Capo Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 266 Thanks: 19 Thanked 20 Times in 6 Posts	Lmao........

11-23-2006, 10:17 PM	#23
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Thanks: 31 Thanked 15 Times in 12 Posts	LOL @ RECKLESS what are u doin

11-23-2006, 10:38 PM	#24
Pennsylvania KING 12/24....Tape Of The Week Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 1,099 Thanks: 3 Thanked 204 Times in 48 Posts	LMFAO...... Twiz>Internet all doubts outta my mind now