Nokturnal I spit over ya beat lil nigga..

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-21-2007, 02:33 PM

wafflesquad the frruck up...

tell me what u think of it

http://www.zshare.net/audio/lorre-harmony-mp3.html

I could care less if u dont like it... y'all can all die of aids as far as I'm concerned

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Hypocritical, fictuals thoughts make it difficult for me to think analytical
Knowledge passed in the transcriptual, Pagan or biblical, never critical
Hip hop contradictual, words be sinical, always fail to be lyrical
Still waiting on a myrical, stay true never mimickall, thats why I’m so difficult
Strongly built, purpose killed for what should be the circus dealt
To perfection, consist of no complexion, turn to the stars cuz the need for direction
Our planet is a faction, low risk section, words like ancient hexins
Feed the king by taxing, without even asking, why we still sexin
With no protection, affirmitive action, stop heating we need to be relaxin
I keep it on the low, this my manifesto, bloody sundays red like pesto
U don’t believe? Come test hoe, give me your best go, end up like esco
Time to cut the grass cuz lord knows I see snakes, if I had a car haters wuld cut my brakes
So I remain for christ sake, still run from jake, the goverment’s a botomless lake, high stakes
Hold me, allow me to unfold me, my shit’s holy, you’re shit’s ballony, so you call me a homie
6 million dollar wigga like lucife, mister zig zag zigga, didnt took me long to figure
what it takes go get bigger, hip hop gravedigger, I bring back them bones without the harmony
so without you harming me, all out war has me arming me, illuminati influences obviously
so what u know bout that? How to be, just like me? It’s all I can be

Doc Glokk · 03-21-2007, 05:03 PM

u really need to work on flow. and ur voice kinda sounds funny...like ur forcin it out. rhymes are nice tho

Nokturnal · 03-21-2007, 09:52 PM

lol^ co-sign with everything he said

ur rhymes are dope tho.... pretty damn impressed. and the beat is fiiiiyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

this is making me want to spit on my own beat cuz I know I can't get much worse than that.... lol.... no hate.. good shit overall

bayAreaSLAP · 03-22-2007, 01:24 AM

It's hard to sit down and try to listen to the words because the flow is so off and your voice doesn't sound that great... but it's not all bad. The lyrics are pretty dope.

A.T.I. · 03-22-2007, 01:53 AM

ghost written

Hotnikelz · 03-22-2007, 04:45 AM

Nu School is tha truth.............

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-22-2007, 07:44 AM

not ghost written

thats all, fagz

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-22-2007, 10:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by A.T.I.

ghost written

I didnt hate on u enough for that comment so here goes

listne you douchebag girlraping shitmonkey, I write all my shit myself.. so you can eat my urine

Sexual Eruption · 03-22-2007, 01:31 PM

come on, skool. i know English isn't your first language, but that was some Papoose make big words rhyme without really meaning anything shit

A.T.I. · 03-22-2007, 01:32 PM

i didnt actually read it until now, but i can tell that it wasnt ghostwritten because while the vocab seemed impressive, half the lines don't make much sense

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-22-2007, 01:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Busta Nut

come on, skool. i know English isn't your first language, but that was some Papoose make big words rhyme without really meaning anything shit

wu tang does it all the time... so why can't I?

ILLogic · 03-22-2007, 05:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LOL U FEEL UPSET?

wu tang does it all the time... so why can't I?

Because you're not Black.

Doc Glokk · 03-22-2007, 06:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LOL U FEEL UPSET?

wu tang does it all the time... so why can't I?

wen does wu tang do it...and even if they did, why would u wanna do what they do anyways...just do yourself son.

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-23-2007, 11:27 AM

when does wu tang do it? you serious?

lets be honest about it, half of the time they not making sentences.. they just putting words that rhyme behind each other... I'll look for some examples when I got some more time

Shyne · 03-23-2007, 02:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LOL U FEEL UPSET?

when does wu tang do it? you serious?

lets be honest about it, half of the time they not making sentences.. they just putting words that rhyme behind each other... I'll look for some examples when I got some more time

now to be fair the only two who really do that are Ghostface and Rae, and id bet anything Rae actually is saying somthing, half his slang just go's over my head lol. Ghost on the otherhand, he just go's off on these 'Aesop Rock' type of rants where im not sure what the fuck he's trying to say.

Shyne · 03-23-2007, 02:30 PM

Also about the song, from one mc to another, you really impressed me with your lyrics on this shit school. like some others said not all of it makes sence but ya know what? fuck it, if it sounds dope and I can vibe to it its all good, things dont always have to make perfect sense. Your flow can use a lot of work but I would imagin its mainly from you rapping in english when that isnt your first language, ive noticed your flow tends to me much better on the tracks you stick to your own language on.

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-23-2007, 02:48 PM

thx buddiieeee

yah english rapping is mad dificult

IntelligentHoodlm · 03-23-2007, 05:36 PM

dont diss wu..its like shyne said...they speak in such heavy slang that u cant even really understand what there talking about if u dont have prior knowledge of it.

forreal though your lyrics were pretty nice. your voice just sucked ass though

Nokturnal · 03-23-2007, 10:03 PM

ehhheemmm.... no comments on the produckzhizzle people??

...........

LOL U FEEL UPSET? · 03-24-2007, 09:47 AM

^^my vocals overpower that weak shit

03-21-2007, 05:03 PM	#2
Doc Glokk Tha Doctor Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Canada Posts: 1,438 Thanks: 51 Thanked 15 Times in 10 Posts	u really need to work on flow. and ur voice kinda sounds funny...like ur forcin it out. rhymes are nice tho __________________ PeAcE tO tHe StReEtS

03-21-2007, 09:52 PM	#3
Nokturnal 2009 & On The Grind. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 6,995 Thanks: 555 Thanked 1,587 Times in 454 Posts	lol^ co-sign with everything he said ur rhymes are dope tho.... pretty damn impressed. and the beat is fiiiiyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa this is making me want to spit on my own beat cuz I know I can't get much worse than that.... lol.... no hate.. good shit overall __________________ And Bullets Ain't Got No Name, But You Dumbass Niggaz Ain't Got No Aim

03-22-2007, 01:53 AM	#5
A.T.I. The Way I See It Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 4,543 Thanks: 251 Thanked 836 Times in 168 Posts	ghost written __________________ 'The Warhol of the Metaphors'

03-22-2007, 01:31 PM	#9
Sexual Eruption OPEN WIDE! Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Brew City, Milwaukee Posts: 1,718 Thanks: 137 Thanked 193 Times in 42 Posts	come on, skool. i know English isn't your first language, but that was some Papoose make big words rhyme without really meaning anything shit __________________ if you don't know by now... Doggy Dogg is a freeeaaaak freeeeaaak freeeaaaak /tpain Snoop Dogg

03-22-2007, 01:32 PM	#10
A.T.I. The Way I See It Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 4,543 Thanks: 251 Thanked 836 Times in 168 Posts	i didnt actually read it until now, but i can tell that it wasnt ghostwritten because while the vocab seemed impressive, half the lines don't make much sense __________________ 'The Warhol of the Metaphors'

03-22-2007, 01:24 AM	#4
bayAreaSLAP Veteran Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: The Bay Posts: 2,474 Thanks: 0 Thanked 8 Times in 5 Posts	It's hard to sit down and try to listen to the words because the flow is so off and your voice doesn't sound that great... but it's not all bad. The lyrics are pretty dope.

03-22-2007, 04:45 AM	#6
Hotnikelz Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Decatur, IL Posts: 422 Thanks: 234 Thanked 75 Times in 25 Posts	Nu School is tha truth.............

03-22-2007, 07:44 AM	#7
LOL U FEEL UPSET? Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 498 Thanks: 256 Thanked 68 Times in 31 Posts	not ghost written thats all, fagz

03-23-2007, 11:27 AM	#14
LOL U FEEL UPSET? Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 498 Thanks: 256 Thanked 68 Times in 31 Posts	when does wu tang do it? you serious? lets be honest about it, half of the time they not making sentences.. they just putting words that rhyme behind each other... I'll look for some examples when I got some more time

03-23-2007, 02:30 PM	#16
Shyne Sons Of Liberty Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Iowa Posts: 2,938 Thanks: 3 Thanked 656 Times in 202 Posts	Also about the song, from one mc to another, you really impressed me with your lyrics on this shit school. like some others said not all of it makes sence but ya know what? fuck it, if it sounds dope and I can vibe to it its all good, things dont always have to make perfect sense. Your flow can use a lot of work but I would imagin its mainly from you rapping in english when that isnt your first language, ive noticed your flow tends to me much better on the tracks you stick to your own language on.

03-23-2007, 02:48 PM	#17
LOL U FEEL UPSET? Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 498 Thanks: 256 Thanked 68 Times in 31 Posts	thx buddiieeee yah english rapping is mad dificult

03-23-2007, 05:36 PM	#18
IntelligentHoodlm Point Black. Join Date: May 2006 Location: The Port City, NC Posts: 396 Thanks: 2 Thanked 25 Times in 17 Posts	dont diss wu..its like shyne said...they speak in such heavy slang that u cant even really understand what there talking about if u dont have prior knowledge of it. forreal though your lyrics were pretty nice. your voice just sucked ass though __________________ "This aint no Gangsta rap, how many mothafuckin gangsta's rap? -Sean Price

03-23-2007, 10:03 PM	#19
Nokturnal 2009 & On The Grind. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 6,995 Thanks: 555 Thanked 1,587 Times in 454 Posts	ehhheemmm.... no comments on the produckzhizzle people?? ........... __________________ And Bullets Ain't Got No Name, But You Dumbass Niggaz Ain't Got No Aim

03-24-2007, 09:47 AM	#20
LOL U FEEL UPSET? Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 498 Thanks: 256 Thanked 68 Times in 31 Posts	^^my vocals overpower that weak shit

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