Rhyme Book

Nokturnal · 05-01-2007, 11:51 PM

so aside from a few undergrounders here, I was just wondering if any of you guys spit or write any lyrics. I personally have written a lot, and even though I slowed down a bit now, I still write from time to time whenever I feel like it. Nothing serious.... just spittin' whatever's at the top of my dome.

So if anyone writes or w/e, just spit anything you feel like here and we'll compose a thread full of some dope verses (perhaps)

I'll start off with something I just wrote

hip-hop is therapeutic but it's meaning is now becoming absurd
so I tighten my lyrics around ya neck so you can hang on every word//
you can feel the stroke of my pen, or the stroke of my keys
I can even stroke MCs till they end up with dislocated knees//
this feeling is magic, so I packed a can of pixie dust
sprinkle on your ashes and let your lust turn to rust//
your skills remind me of your 'belt', here's something you need to face
cuz you still need 'support' holding up your own 'waste'. [waist]//
you ain't skilled just cuz you got thru one battle 'ahead-of-ya'
that's like applauding a blind man overcoming dyslexia//

Thug N Harmony · 05-02-2007, 12:45 AM

i do but i only been writing since i was 11 and dat was in 1999...i will go get a book after while n post a little rhyme...shit i aint serious bout it doe

Montana Diary · 05-02-2007, 01:04 AM

Daaaamn. Somebody's been listenin' to Soul On Ice

I've been tryna write as often as I possibly can. I'm currently workin' on a hot 16 for a god-like beat my boy produced. I've been workin' on it for over 2 months now and only have 6 bars that I think are good enough for this track. The track is (tentatively) titled "The Warriors." My verse revolves around self-acceptance, life's trials and tribulations and in a sense finding the "warrior" within to overcome whatever stands between me and my dreams. This shit is gonna be epic.

I don't have any shit that I think is worth posting right now. But what the hell. Here's a few lines I just wrote down (which I'll probably end up scrappin).

"My scheme to get mainstream into backpacker music
That's why my shit's doped up like it's under the influence
Injectin' life into the pad and neglectin' imperfection
My recollections, my regrets, my introspection"

Nokturnal · 05-02-2007, 01:14 AM

^ good shit... but 2 months for 6 bars??

Montana Diary · 05-02-2007, 01:18 AM

Yeah. I need it to be PERFECT. When you hear the beat you'll understand why I'm spent so much time on it.

Doc Glokk · 05-02-2007, 02:01 AM

yee i write lots of shit and i also spit....made almost 1000$ sellin cds...
ill hit yall up later

KING BHOB · 05-02-2007, 02:33 AM

sometimes like 3 times a year maybe i do something on here for fun,besides that naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

2COOL4SCOOL · 05-02-2007, 05:09 AM

hop out the coupe, nigga wuddup
chilling with ya girl, henney in my cup
wafflesquad fo life, ye thats wassup
take a viagra, go up up up up up

reel talcc

DJ Shinobi [RA] · 05-02-2007, 11:19 AM

nu skool spits that fiyah, he gets all the pre-teens.

2COOL4SCOOL · 05-02-2007, 12:53 PM

http://www.hhboard.com/showthread.php?t=206652

check it out

InFiNiTiZeD · 05-02-2007, 07:12 PM

yeah i use to write a shitload i dont have the time anymore so im just like fuck it

Nokturnal · 05-02-2007, 10:10 PM

*waits for Deepsouth*

I guess me and you are the ones that still write... (and Montana too)

Nokturnal · 05-04-2007, 01:58 AM

pointless problems is what they addressin us, fuck callin me a pessimist
they under contract with a foot up they ass like a retarted ventriloquist
carrying knowledge in our heads? no we have books that are items of trifle
switching on and off periods like a bitch with a fucked up menstrual cycle
hands of clocks in my vision... my patience is gettin' the best of me
grab the marker of my thoughts and write on the whiteboard of revery
envisioning the power of my pen, I scribble rhymes soon-to-be testaments
give em a,b,c, and d for four choices of my wrath fueled by their negligence

Tonza · 05-05-2007, 06:26 AM

I'v been writin since 2004.. I write in finnish.. so no need to post it to yall..

Deep South Kid · 05-05-2007, 10:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ~ Nok ~

*waits for Deepsouth*

I guess me and you are the ones that still write... (and Montana too)

Good to see I'm still being waited for.

I'll post a lil some later when I find my 'rhyme book'.

Nokturnal · 05-05-2007, 05:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Deep Sooouth

Good to see I'm still being waited for.

I'll post a lil some later when I find my 'rhyme book'.

don't feel too special..

Smithilberry · 05-05-2007, 06:01 PM

i write lyrics all the time... whether it be a punchline, a few lines, a 16, or a long ass verse... i have alot of lyrics but only 2 recorded song

S. Dizzle · 05-06-2007, 06:53 PM

I See The Thin Line In Between My Mentality and Reality
The Lesser Things In Life Intact, Held Down By Gravity//
Insanity's a Formality Of Actuallity
Cause This World's Gradually Being Taken Over By Travesty//

Baah. I just worked it all out in my head and memorised it. If i were writing it then it would be alot longer.

But i'll put some shit up later.

Deep South Kid · 05-07-2007, 01:43 AM

Niggas put hundreds of stones on their watch, Still can't freeze time
Where I'm from dudes aint gotta look gangsta just to squeeze nines
Theres crack addicts, coke sellers, pimps and quick dimes
And I aint none of those, but still gotta git mines

Even if I work under preasure, I got shit under control
Cuz look nigga, I just ate, Still feel hunger for more
Lets say my music was mainstream, I still leave you underground
Blastin hard through speakers, Lyrics loud as thunder sounds

And heres a lil spanish fly rhyme I wrote down like a week ago...Hope you get to understand (translate) the words, you can ask about them though. And since most yall only know the bad part of spanish, that won't help, since this ones curse-free.

Dentro de esta cueva, parece que estamos escondidos/
A pesar de no ver mucho, escuchamos sonidos/
Tratamos de decifrar que hay en el exterior/
No porque nos interese, solo por si es mejor/
Y aunque todo este bien, estemos aqui parados/
Siempre vemos el pasto mas verde en el otro lado/
Hay que aprender a apreciar y cuidar lo que se tiene/
No ver lo nuestro como hielo y lo de los otros como nieve/
Es cierto que no es bueno practicar el conformismo/
Pero no es posible que todo ser acabe con lo mismo/
Y aunque seamos tan distintos, unidos podemos estar/
Asi como el cielo y el mar, Tranquilos y en Paz/

05-01-2007, 11:51 PM	#1
Nokturnal 2009 & On The Grind. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 6,995 Thanks: 555 Thanked 1,587 Times in 454 Posts	Rhyme Book Rhyme Book so aside from a few undergrounders here, I was just wondering if any of you guys spit or write any lyrics. I personally have written a lot, and even though I slowed down a bit now, I still write from time to time whenever I feel like it. Nothing serious.... just spittin' whatever's at the top of my dome. So if anyone writes or w/e, just spit anything you feel like here and we'll compose a thread full of some dope verses (perhaps) I'll start off with something I just wrote hip-hop is therapeutic but it's meaning is now becoming absurd so I tighten my lyrics around ya neck so you can hang on every word// you can feel the stroke of my pen, or the stroke of my keys I can even stroke MCs till they end up with dislocated knees// this feeling is magic, so I packed a can of pixie dust sprinkle on your ashes and let your lust turn to rust// your skills remind me of your 'belt', here's something you need to face cuz you still need 'support' holding up your own 'waste'. [waist]// you ain't skilled just cuz you got thru one battle 'ahead-of-ya' that's like applauding a blind man overcoming dyslexia// __________________ And Bullets Ain't Got No Name, But You Dumbass Niggaz Ain't Got No Aim

05-02-2007, 12:45 AM	#2
Thug N Harmony I' am A Native Brother Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: BacK On The Reservation!!! Posts: 1,905 Thanks: 392 Thanked 890 Times in 291 Posts	i do but i only been writing since i was 11 and dat was in 1999...i will go get a book after while n post a little rhyme...shit i aint serious bout it doe __________________ Undisputed Gangstas: Red Division General Nigga!!! Gunit Is Dead!!! Black Wall Street 4 Life!!! Mo Thug Family!!!

05-02-2007, 01:04 AM	#3
Montana Diary Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Brampton, ON, Canada Posts: 2,822 Thanks: 169 Thanked 2,234 Times in 304 Posts	Daaaamn. Somebody's been listenin' to Soul On Ice I've been tryna write as often as I possibly can. I'm currently workin' on a hot 16 for a god-like beat my boy produced. I've been workin' on it for over 2 months now and only have 6 bars that I think are good enough for this track. The track is (tentatively) titled "The Warriors." My verse revolves around self-acceptance, life's trials and tribulations and in a sense finding the "warrior" within to overcome whatever stands between me and my dreams. This shit is gonna be epic. I don't have any shit that I think is worth posting right now. But what the hell. Here's a few lines I just wrote down (which I'll probably end up scrappin). "My scheme to get mainstream into backpacker music That's why my shit's doped up like it's under the influence Injectin' life into the pad and neglectin' imperfection My recollections, my regrets, my introspection" __________________

05-02-2007, 01:14 AM	#4
Nokturnal 2009 & On The Grind. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 6,995 Thanks: 555 Thanked 1,587 Times in 454 Posts	^ good shit... but 2 months for 6 bars?? __________________ And Bullets Ain't Got No Name, But You Dumbass Niggaz Ain't Got No Aim

05-02-2007, 01:18 AM	#5
Montana Diary Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Brampton, ON, Canada Posts: 2,822 Thanks: 169 Thanked 2,234 Times in 304 Posts	Yeah. I need it to be PERFECT. When you hear the beat you'll understand why I'm spent so much time on it. __________________

05-02-2007, 02:01 AM	#6
Doc Glokk Tha Doctor Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Canada Posts: 1,438 Thanks: 51 Thanked 15 Times in 10 Posts	yee i write lots of shit and i also spit....made almost 1000$ sellin cds... ill hit yall up later __________________ PeAcE tO tHe StReEtS

05-02-2007, 02:33 AM	#7
KING BHOB Know Me From Tha Rap Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: East Allentown Pennsylvania Posts: 1,572 Thanks: 0 Thanked 433 Times in 93 Posts	sometimes like 3 times a year maybe i do something on here for fun,besides that naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh __________________ >>>>>>>LIFE

05-02-2007, 05:09 AM	#8
2COOL4SCOOL Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 17,625 Thanks: 950 Thanked 1,679 Times in 532 Posts	hop out the coupe, nigga wuddup chilling with ya girl, henney in my cup wafflesquad fo life, ye thats wassup take a viagra, go up up up up up reel talcc

05-02-2007, 11:19 AM	#9
DJ Shinobi [RA] Slangologist nahmsayin? Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: California Posts: 2,487 Thanks: 82 Thanked 69 Times in 52 Posts	nu skool spits that fiyah, he gets all the pre-teens. __________________ Minorities gotta stick together. Fight the power! - ILLogic “I respect hip-hop and i dont know one word of Midnight Marauders and truthfully dont have the interest to go and find out…” - Lupe Fiasco

05-02-2007, 12:53 PM	#10
2COOL4SCOOL Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 17,625 Thanks: 950 Thanked 1,679 Times in 532 Posts	http://www.hhboard.com/showthread.php?t=206652 check it out

05-02-2007, 07:12 PM	#11
InFiNiTiZeD Fuck You....... Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 3,291 Thanks: 15 Thanked 24 Times in 13 Posts	yeah i use to write a shitload i dont have the time anymore so im just like fuck it

05-02-2007, 10:10 PM	#12
Nokturnal 2009 & On The Grind. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 6,995 Thanks: 555 Thanked 1,587 Times in 454 Posts	waits for Deepsouth I guess me and you are the ones that still write... (and Montana too) __________________ And Bullets Ain't Got No Name, But You Dumbass Niggaz Ain't Got No Aim

05-04-2007, 01:58 AM	#13
Nokturnal 2009 & On The Grind. Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 6,995 Thanks: 555 Thanked 1,587 Times in 454 Posts	pointless problems is what they addressin us, fuck callin me a pessimist they under contract with a foot up they ass like a retarted ventriloquist carrying knowledge in our heads? no we have books that are items of trifle switching on and off periods like a bitch with a fucked up menstrual cycle hands of clocks in my vision... my patience is gettin' the best of me grab the marker of my thoughts and write on the whiteboard of revery envisioning the power of my pen, I scribble rhymes soon-to-be testaments give em a,b,c, and d for four choices of my wrath fueled by their negligence __________________ And Bullets Ain't Got No Name, But You Dumbass Niggaz Ain't Got No Aim

05-05-2007, 06:26 AM	#14
Tonza Veteran Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Finland Posts: 1,099 Thanks: 255 Thanked 7 Times in 4 Posts	I'v been writin since 2004.. I write in finnish.. so no need to post it to yall..

05-05-2007, 06:01 PM	#17
Smithilberry A.K.A. ZANY BLUNTS! Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Qu€€n$ N€w ¥ø®k B!TcH€$! (718) Posts: 10,382 Thanks: 991 Thanked 612 Times in 267 Posts	i write lyrics all the time... whether it be a punchline, a few lines, a 16, or a long ass verse... i have alot of lyrics but only 2 recorded song

05-06-2007, 06:53 PM	#18
S. Dizzle The Come Up Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Elsewhere. Posts: 1,548 Thanks: 42 Thanked 319 Times in 147 Posts	I See The Thin Line In Between My Mentality and Reality The Lesser Things In Life Intact, Held Down By Gravity// Insanity's a Formality Of Actuallity Cause This World's Gradually Being Taken Over By Travesty// Baah. I just worked it all out in my head and memorised it. If i were writing it then it would be alot longer. But i'll put some shit up later.